People Are Fighting to Open a Pastry Shop

The male protagonist's back

The writing is pretty good, but sometimes the inconsistent things that have already happened are forgotten in the next chapter. For example, the Mi Sandao was sold and so many people bought it, but only a little was bought. Xiao Xun'er's Advanced Fighter Level 3 was advanced twice. Xiao Yuan bought the mung bean cake once to detoxify it, and asked again. I hope the author can work harder and improve his writing style. There are also typos.

Is there any security guarantee in the store? I won't be beaten to death by a random passerby.

As the heroine, I only want Yun Yun and the Queen, and you can do whatever you want with the rest 🤭

Come on, come on, the sports lottery is very good, don't collapse, as long as the protagonist develops a store, there is no need to change the map icon, otherwise it will become a book about changing the map, upgrading and fighting monsters, I hope the author can adopt it 🙂

Overall, I feel good, but the writing is a bit immature, and there are some places where the sense of substitution is not enough, but it will get better if the author writes more.

To be honest, I think the original work written by Xiao Xun'er is a bit disgusting, just because an LSP with a soul of several decades touched her naked when she was a child and then kept licking Xiao Yan, wishing to bring down the whole world to him. It seemed fine before but I really don't like it now.

Single heroine? If so, forget it 😐

This is a novel that makes me not want to read it even after reading the name. Wow.

Come on, save more chapters and update them when they are released.

It's so good. The progress of the mission is slow, and the protagonist's realm is improving even more slowly. I estimate that this book will have to be longer than the original work. I don't care, it's at least 10,000,000 words long.

If you have any other suggestions for the system, feel free to mention them, I will use them if they are useful. I always feel that there is something wrong with the current system.

It's best to not have a female protagonist in this kind of novel (ﾉД`)

I still think it's better to have a single heroine, and I don't want a harem. I refuse harems. I've been reading too many harem novels recently, and I always feel a little weird. I need to quit 🙂

So handsome

Tsk, tsk, tsk, dear author, there are so many typos. Hope it can be changed.                              Thank you!

Come on! My writing is much better now than at the beginning! This book is really good, and it doesn't follow the trend of mindless abuse of the original protagonist. The next thing to say is that if the author has a heroine, he must handle the emotional line well. No matter how good he is, he must not collapse. If the emotional line is not written well, it is really a big failure.

Why do you need to exchange passwords with the protagonist? If you fail to complete the task, you will be punished. Aren't you a puppet of the system?

Is there a heroine? Xiao Yu can do it too

Good guy, just finish the book and enter the palace 😴

The bard visited here and found the book to be good, so he decided to stay for a while🤓🤓🤓

After reading about thirty chapters, I have a question. As long as the protagonist appears in the original work, he will know who he is even if he meets him for the first time 🙄🙄🙄

I recommend The Little Doctor Next Door. It's actually pretty good. Do you want to check it out?

Give me a reward, cheers for the author!

Reading the comments seems to be something you can read, although the cakes and stuff seem weird 😰

The author feels that the recent plot is a bit too bland, and the protagonist's cultivation could be improved a little faster. Maybe it's because the plot is too bland and not enough people are watching it, and there are too few posts.

Author, you might as well write a food system, like "Gourmet Supplier" and "Gourmet of Another World" to feel like it. Pastry feels too limited.

Can you see the difference between me and you? I can't sign a contract, why can you? Give some advice

The food shop you wrote about! The heroine doesn't want it anymore.