Reincarnation Is Not for the Beast-Eared Girl

The appearance and environment of the characters are very good, the opening of the first chapter is wonderful, the ancient atmosphere is conveyed, and the writing style is very good. If the idea is good, the world will unfold. However, at present, the weirdness of the male protagonist and some loopholes in the logic. What I want to complain about the most is the name of the first race, Dark Night. Dark Night itself means darkness. A bright dagger is okay, but it is impossible to be convinced at once. Dark Night itself is my personal understanding. It is a cunning and sharp assassin who is fast, so the news can be transmitted quickly. The pace can be slowed down a little, or the first race can simply be renamed.

The writing is quite good, but the front part is a bit cumbersome and I feel a little visual fatigue, so I didn't read it too carefully! But overall it's pretty good, good luck to the author! Write hard! 😍

Let's change the name. What a great book. If I hadn't read the content, I would have missed it 🤭

What this book records is the dagger under the evening dress at the night banquet in the century-old castle; is the battle horse eaten by wargs on the smoke-filled battlefield; is the long sword wielded by the young man in the valley where the dragon is entrenched; is the collision of magic theories among the bookshelves of the big library Collision; It is the icy battle flag of the undead in the lingering wind and snow in the north; It is the new emperor who guides the country in the palace in the far east; It is the music played by the elves under the giant tree in the sacred paradise... It is fire and sword, betrayal and conquest, throne and destination.

Let's talk about EVA{"TopicId":"576505343299944448","TopicName":"The most impressive character"} In fact, the reason why Asuka's ending is the most difficult to deal with is because it can easily arouse people's empathy. You know that this kind of regret of missing out may happen in reality. You can see your own shadow in it, and the hidden and exposed regrets buried in your heart are stimulated and resonate strongly, so you can feel this shortcoming better. This is why Xiangdang cannot accept this ending. We are unwilling to accept this ending, not because it is not well done, but because it is the kind of story that we try to reject and avoid in our hearts. Who doesn't have Bai Yueguang in his heart? Animation is a kind of sustenance for us to escape reality. Most of the people watching this are adults. There are already too many shortcomings and difficulties in reality. They just want to realize their dreams in animation. It's like a dream, and now I wake up from the dream.

It's excellent and worth reading carefully. Come on~🌹🌹🌹🤝🤝😁

Set a flag Two updates a day starting from today (I haven't finished the exam yet, but my mentality exploded in advance because I did so poorly)

Character Collection Post The characters you design can be posted here, and some will be selected to be written in the book Name + Character + Background Because there is an Eastern Human Empire, Chinese-style characters are also acceptable.

Why is no one discussing the plot...

I'm a black fan, I'm black enough

The word count is too few, and I don't have the motivation to read it.

It is a seedling of grass jelly, and it is inevitable that it will become refined food. I came to read the new book in Shu Huang. I like this style very much. It is warm and sensible yet decisive. The writing style is comfortable, open and unpretentious. It's concrete and not cumbersome. It's already a high praise. I hope the author can continue to follow it. Come on.

The most outstanding thing is the writing, and the most impressive thing is the updates The rhythm is compact and the plot is complete. However, the characters and plot can be thought about more. About the first few chapters, because the protagonist behaved too stupidly, although it was meant to illustrate the protagonist's immaturity, the descriptions, such as arrogance, arrogance and ignorance, acting without a plan, and lack of any thinking ability, made me feel that the protagonist was a complete villain, not like Aizen or the Joker, who just had no charisma. It's hard to have a sense of immersion, because the description is too deliberate, which makes me have a very bad impression of the protagonist. If I want to persuade you to give up, this is it. As for the plot, the main line is very obvious at present, but the author can also bury more foreshadowing and hidden lines. Multiple hidden lines, or multiple branch lines, intersect with each other and complete each other. For example, you can write about the main character's sister to set the stage for the rest of the story, and another example is the love line, which can be intertwined with the subsequent main line. In addition, throw in a little more settings and depict magic and different world settings through events. If the protagonist is not strong, can he still be considered the protagonist? The author thinks that the protagonist now has no other plot except the main plot of fighting for hegemony. Isn't it a bit monotonous? There are a lot of people who have died. Although everyone's death is meaningful, it is still a bit depressing to watch. The lack of excitement in the article is a relatively big shortcoming Finally, the author's writing style, basically every few chapters, the author likes to narrate from the perspective of others, including but not limited to seeing his own death. This method is originally correct, but once the number increases, it is still uncomfortable. I think we should start from the perspective of the protagonist, and we can write about psychological activities, or promote the plot. For example, in Naruto, the author likes to write memories the most. As a result, the whole Naruto became a memoir, and Naruto became one of the protagonists, and he was not outstanding. I hope the author will not complain that I am too lazy. This is just my personal opinion. Please forgive me if I am wrong. Cough →_→ Actually I quite like this writing style, but I am not very interested in hegemony novels, and I don't like war novels. I prefer novels about learning magic, forming bonds with friends, falling in love with her, and becoming strong and pretentious. Having said so much, if there is something wrong, just pretend you didn't see it. . . But I hope you can see it and update it faster! ! ! The update speed of this crotch pull will be cool no matter how good the writing is.

To be honest, among all the war movies, this is one of the top five among the dozens of books I have cooked. It is very good-looking, and fantasy is not a niche. To be honest, the city has little potential. This kind of subject is also very conspicuous, well-written, and very popular, and not many people write it.

Looking forward to describing the world background, power distribution and strength level settings in more detail 🙂

This update is not enough to fill my teeth! Xiaojiu!

As someone who doesn't watch live broadcasts, I just feel confused about the heroine's name.

If this book is not popular, the laws of heaven will not tolerate it ( ´͈ ⌵ `͈ )σண♡

Well, I read it carefully. First of all, I have to say that the author's writing is really good. The sentences are concise but very picturesque, and the characters are also very interesting. I am looking forward to Arnold's future growth. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about some problems. First of all, when the protagonist and his group are fighting the soldiers of the shadow elves, they wrote about the people at the bottom. The people here should first be confused, and then they know what happened. Other than this, there are no problems for the time being. Overall, I like this book very much. Good luck, author! 👍

Content discussion thread If you have any opinions on the development of the plot or the characters in the book, you can join the discussion You are also welcome to predict the plot.

It may be a bit slow, but I hope you can stick with it. Thanks.

When will it be updated?

Although there are not many of this theme, each one has its own characteristics and will not make people feel outdated. There are still many innovative places.