Rebirth of the Extraordinary Dawn

I came here after seeing the squid's breasts, but it's still too late 😒

Come, come, you salty fishes can gather together

This book feels a bit strange. . . In fact, it is still the same routine, rebirth, bitterness and hatred, girlfriend was fucked, myself was killed, and I want revenge. . . No matter how many settings are used, the plot is still so boring. In short, readers are still unhappy after reading it, and there is no sense of involvement and enjoyment.

Coming from Cuttlefish, I would like to say that you, the author, are very brave. You actually dare to let Cuttlefish recommend the book.

Good guy, this cover and this title of the book have the same flavor as fifteen years ago.

First of all, the setting is definitely a good one. The whole system and ideas are quite interesting. However, just like the cover of this book, although the writing method is novel, it still reveals an old-school atmosphere, just like the feeling that books from previous eras give me. It's not that the setting is not good, nor that the writing is not good, but it feels like there is a generation gap when reading it, and it doesn't appeal to me very much.

After reading ten chapters, it was quite exciting to gradually lay out the setting and world view. Dream killing is fun! Especially when talking nonsense. Comrade Li Hu and the Saga Group really need some poison resistance. Perhaps it would be better to add a chapter at the beginning of the story to set up the protagonist's character and world view?

Just swipe your votes. There are still 10,000 tickets at this level.

The protagonist's personality is too jumpy, which makes the content of the book feel jumpy.

I just collected it and was about to read the article, when I found that all the testimonials had come out. Wasn't this just about to be put on the shelves? 🤔🤔🤔

Imaginary enemy cultivation method? The more familiar the better? Is cross-level effect better? Doesn't that mean you have to go crazy and cause trouble? I feel that society must be very chaotic. In order to have an imaginary enemy who is still familiar to me, I have to constantly look for opponents, understand him, and target him. How can it be better?

Come on

I think it's better to cut it. The setting is a bit novel, but not attractive. This result also illustrates the problem. No one even has the desire to discuss it. If it were someone else's name, I wouldn't add it to favorites at all. And the beginning is like writing a white text. You might actually design a lot of stuff, but it won't be interesting. I looked like it was the same feeling as before, when the Dantian was broken at the beginning.

Conflict is forced from the beginning, the plot is too blunt

Boss, wouldn't it be nice to write about urban rebirth honestly?

I read several chapters, but I don't understand what it means,,, it's amazing

Is this a squid sacrifice? So scary!

Extraordinary force: Dawn Leader: Yang Si (not exposed) Outstanding master: Zen Master Hui Gen (Yang Si's vest) Team member: Yanika Team member: Wu Xiaoyun (tentative) Team member: Xia Zhen (Yang Si Tong's bride-in-law) To be determined later

Ah, did you cut off two books so soon after the salted fish?

Is this a sacrifice offered by the squid to the Lord of Mysteries?

The cool night makes me miss you like a river

The master secretly opened a new book, a Naruto fanfic. I haven't read Naruto, so I won't read the new book.

The setting is quite interesting. The first few chapters are a bit cliche, but once it unfolds, it's very interesting.

I don't understand why I just don't write online game novels. Online games are indeed not as popular as they used to be, but they are not dead yet. There are several online game novels with thousands of orders each and are currently being serialized.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river

I was just about to leave a message and found out that the book has been completed, which is not bad. The setting of this book is too complicated and I can't finish it. The author... I am a reader of Mysterious Badge. To be honest, that book is much easier to understand than the others like you. I also read it in large sections, basically only looking at the conclusion and the characters' language... The beginning of this book is very old, but it is useful, but the subsequent settings are really... I basically don't understand those skills and so on... Or, can you make a DNd novel, even like The Amber Sword?

Why don't you hold on a little longer? Didn't you see that Chixin Tianxian persisted for more than two million and only recently saw the light of day? 😡

Ah, is this all gone? There is a problem, master brother Too impatient.

I abandoned it in the Dreamland of Cthulhu... This is so bald...😰 Forget it, I'm used to it... As usual, please give me a sequel to the badge.

There are not many recommendation votes.