The Sword Opens the Blessed Land and Cave Sky

The writing style and writing style are quite good, but the plot in the first few chapters is quite toxic. You have just traveled back in time, what does that master have to do with the upbringing and teachings of the previous life? You also gave a few years of your life to help his descendants in exchange for the master's burial (it turns out that the descendants have wasted their life in vain.) As long as you add a set cause and effect, it will be much better. If the cause and effect is not completed, the cultivation will be hindered accordingly.

My thoughts are just personal. First of all, the book is good and the story is pretty good, but the author can't make things difficult for the protagonist in the early stage in order to promote the plot. Once or twice is okay, although I have dealt with it, but every time I want to do something, it is a little difficult and it is a bit difficult to be a human being. Can you let him go smoothly once? .

I think it is okay for the protagonist to have feelings for the master. The protagonist has inherited the memory of the original owner. Memory is the basis of emotion. It is not the experience of a bystander like watching a movie or novel, but real empathy. It is normal for the protagonist to confuse his own feelings with the original owner. In reality, it is rare for someone who receives the memory of another person to be able to distinguish the two people immediately.

Really, it's well written, but the name of the Taoist temple looks weird.

Although he is a time traveler, he looks like an aborigine

I like it quite a bit, but the one thing I'm a little uncomfortable with is that the word "Mr." Feels a bit awkward in the ancient context.

Confucianism, Taoism, Buddhism, Bing Chang, Gu hunter, doctor and thief king, Ten major cultivation factions, soliciting magical powers and magic; Do you have a favorite or recommended name? Welcome whimsical! !

It is recommended to post a related work, talking about the realm of cultivation, sects, and main forces.

Well written and excellent story telling skills

This book is okay🤭🤭🤭

Leave your name on the fire tongs😁

It's pretty cool, but the name of Blessed Land is too abrupt.

Liudao, I feel that the upgrade is a bit fast. Now that I have seen the copy of Kaiyuanxi, I have already defeated 3 realms and 5 realms. If you keep writing like this, I feel that you will finish the book very quickly. It's a good book and I hope it can be longer, of course when it doesn't affect the needs of the plot. Come on, I'm very optimistic about you

I read a few chapters and thought it was good. I gave it fourteen votes to support it. Keep up the update speed

Invested. Delightful! 😁

Speechless, why is such a good book not popular? The author doesn't know how to promote?

Free for those who come to see it, fully booked

This writing is too compact. The author could slow down a little and put some water into it. I just recommend not to spray.

If you keep working hard, it won't be a problem if you don't reward 5,000 coins a day for big money.

It's pretty good, but a little lacking 🤫

It's so well written. It's a good book. You must stick to it!

I hope the author can be steady and down-to-earth, take his time, the realm span can be slower, be clear and realistic, and cross the two realms to kill a little too much. I just want to read this book for a long time.

Very good novel! Full subscription support!

Two monthly passes are presented to you, come on!

Not bad! 😊The author has worked hard to update! Come on! Once the monthly pass is generated, it will be given to you!

As long as there are stable updates, the monthly pass will be left to you

Author, if you want names and artifacts, you can look up some traditional rituals and customs.

So beautifully written!

. . . . Author nb! Too strong!