Rising in the Hong Kong Comprehensive World

After reading the latest chapter, all I can say is sorry for bothering you, see you again.

The author is scolding himself, and he deserves it. It doesn't matter if he doesn't accept the Fang sisters, but he is committing suicide to focus on the description. Focusing on description rather than taking credit deserves to be scolded.

The protagonist wants to be a stock god, the strongest athlete, a top student, a big shot in the upper class, and also wants to be a member of the world. Based on the main mission and goal, there is a high probability that he will enter politics in the end. You want to be everything and want everything, so it is inevitable that you will be a little smart in your actions. When the protagonist has good social resources and a certain amount of assets, the people he desperately wants to help are still living in the slums. It is to highlight the protagonist's status and excellent skills when encountering criminals and unfair treatment in the slums. Too smart. I saw that the protagonist wanted to take care of the girls around him, but felt that the girl plot was too miserable, so he introduced Haonan and his friends to a girl's family for a friendship. What a good friend, a good brother, just so damn good. I'm afraid you haven't watched the complete series of Young and Dangerous

Is the author a prisoner of literary youth disease? What does it mean to write such a ghostly beginning? It's just baffling, goodbye.

Before Chapter 16, it was a god-level novel, and the writing was not to mention, but after Chapter 16, it was just garbage. The plot in the front is vivid, detailed and down-to-earth, but the writing in the back is rough, the plot is too fast, and the acting is stiff. I just saw chapter twenty-seven and couldn't stand it. Don't waste time if you don't want to write well. It's not that you don't have the ability to write well, so why are you doing it?

It is extremely poisonous, not to mention giving away girls, but also deliberately giving a girl to Chen Haonan to harm others. What the hell

This book was quite good at the beginning, such as the plot of a small stutter, swimming to earn fame, and forming your own team. It was all very good, but then it collapsed. The world we were originally in was the Hong Kong TV world, and we added the extravagance of traveling through the world. That's it. The two biggest problems are Problems arose. One was the collapse of technology. Suddenly, there were a large number of extremely important patents that disrupted people's financial paths. The moat I built with investment in swimming at the beginning was vulnerable and could not stop coveting. Later, all the bad things were caused by the heat of the head. The second is the collapse of the time-travel world. You are obviously in the martial arts world of the Republic of China, and then you come to martial arts, and then cultivation. It really answers that sentence. If you don't have money, you want to be rich. If you have money, you want big money. Four or six are unreliable, and it's a mess. It's better to do it one world at a time.

This book does not supervise my live streaming of diarrhea while standing on my head, and this post is proof! ! ! I can't even eat steamed buns and pickles at this level.

Giving away girls is too cruel, especially after saving two girls with the front foot, and then giving the back foot to a lone star like Chen Haonan. Is it because they don't die quickly enough? Hong Kong has become a comprehensive program, and it is still acting like a gangster, and the pig's feet are suddenly brainless? Will following Chen Haonan have a happy ending?

I originally thought it was something like Hong Kong Financial Entertainment, but after more than a year you turned into a hero type who punishes evil and promotes good. I really don't think it's good-looking. The first part is good, but the protagonist rises too fast and becomes a billionaire in just over a year. I don't know what I'm writing in the second part. I also want to find a stepfather for myself. The main character's mother loses weight and works out and pursues the protagonist's subordinates. That's enough.

Has the author made another update? For the sake of new readers, I still have to say something : The protagonist gives away his daughter and then his mother.

Ruan Mei😍

I can understand it if I let myself go. This book was not very likable at the beginning. I barely read it, but later on the author gave up on himself and read it randomly. I can understand it. If I don't agree with it, every author is like this, so there is no need to write a novel. His mentality is unstable! But I can't blame anyone. Readers are not fools. Whether your writing is good or not and whether the plot is interesting or not has a lot to do with your performance. To be honest, it's a Hong Kong variety genre. The most important thing is the personality characteristics of each character. "The World of Movies", the originator of Hong Kong comprehensive novels, did a good job in this aspect. Although it collapsed later, I can understand the crime of war. The personality characteristics of each person in that book are really vivid, including the heroine, including the supporting characters, Salina's gentleness, Ding Yao's vicious calculation, Ling Zuer's astuteness and boldness, He Min's virtuous and dignified, Le Hui Zhen is funny and naughty, including the supporting actor Zhou Xingxing's bitch, Cao Dahua's hard-earned love, Chen Jiaju's honest and brave, Li Wenbin's steady as an old dog, Li Ying's bravery, and Li Kui's viciousness , even the arrogance of being just a sidekick, the gentleman of Xiaozhuang, the madness of Peng Yixing, the cruelty of Ni Yongxiao, the deep love for his family, the foolish loyalty of Chen Yongren, and the carelessness of Sir Yuan. Lu Yongchang's rules and regulations, Xiao Fu's great wisdom and stupidity, Li Xin'er's small thoughts, Fang Jiexia's shrewdness, Lu Minghua's little resistance, Liu Jiehui's unwillingness, even in the later period, the black man's mysterious and unpredictable, left a deep impression. The only two Hong Kong comprehensive books published later that can compare with this book are Meng Jun's two Hong Kong comprehensive books, and there is also a book with a protagonist named Zheng Xian who does not know the author, which is also good! This book of yours, how should I put it, is all about the same character, just a tool person with a different name!

Does the author want to end it badly? Actually let the protagonist's mother and woman die? ! I really haven't seen this kind of plot in a long time. Don't want tragedy, don't like tragedy. This method of writing about deceased relatives to intensify conflicts has not been used for a long time. Because it's not lovable. It would be better to find any reason to intensify the conflict than this kind of plot. Does anyone have the same opinion as me? I don't want my mother and little stutter to die, but I can accept it even if they are seriously injured. Can I change it back?

For the first time, I saw the protagonist find a father for himself! Nausea! Discourage! Extremely poisonous!

This book has ruined all the popularity accumulated by "My New Ming Empire"

Forget about sending a daughter, this is the first time I'm seeing a mom. Author Niu Bi

As soon as I saw the mission to promote justice, punish evil and promote good, I felt sick in my heart! How can there be so much right and wrong in the adult world? The world is not black and white. I guess the author understands this, but did he write it like this deliberately to cater to the readers of middle school and high school students? If you write it like this on purpose, will your grades be good?

This is an extremely disgusting novel. The protagonist directly gives away his daughter. First, he describes a lot of Fang sisters, and then when you think the woman will be the protagonist, the protagonist generously gives them away to a young and Dangerous boy! The excuses given are even more disgusting!

I turned to this old book and read it. The protagonist acted recklessly and willfully, despising all living beings from the perspective of God, and was beaten to death by someone backhand. In fact, although the protagonist embodies patriotism and nationalism, I still think that the protagonist should have all his relatives die. This is the price of willfulness.

The pheasant is too ugly. I don't like this book, so I have withdrawn it.

Many people think that American comics are superheroes, but in fact they are just self-centered misuse of their own abilities, and they have no sense of this kind of arrogance.

Chapter 1: What kind of stuff? Zhao Shanhe and Zhou Shanhe for a while