The Taoist Devouring the Starry Sky

A 17-year-old boy with two legs and a childhood sweetheart has nothing to say. The other is a wife in her 30s with a child. What does the author think? The key is that this woman in her 30s is still willing. She should be shy, but I find it extremely embarrassing.

I hope you don't make the supporting actress a genius. I read a fanfic that made the main character's sister even more genius and evil than Luo Feng...🤫 After all, this is a fanfic, and the geniuses of Devouring the Starry Sky and Earth are probably the same as those in the original novel. There are so many geniuses, and it would be impossible for the protagonist without Golden Finger to catch up with Luo Feng.

Just to put it bluntly, it's best to write less emotional dramas. Without the writing skills, there would be too many emotional dramas in this genre and it would be annoying!

The laws of space are divided into three parts: blockade, teleportation, and strangulation. In the original work of The Law of Time, there is only one time pause. It shouldn't be the only one, right? Let's brainstorm and think of two more time categories. Let me copy the book review 😌

If you don't know how to write novels at all, and the fan style of Devouring matches the martial arts system of a lifetime, and you choose to practice Bajiu Xuan Gong but also combine it with swordsmanship, then you might as well choose Seven Swords of Jie Tian.

It has been recommended recently, and the collection has been increasing very quickly, but I have also been criticized for being autistic 😭 The emotional drama has completely ended in Chapter 74. Brothers who come later should not criticize this, please 😫 The protagonist's character is LSP, this cannot be changed, but there will definitely be no more emotional drama in the future, I will fast forward directly to Emperor Wei Wen. Well, if you have any opinions, please mention them downstairs!

Tomato's emotional scenes are already written like shit. You, a fan, actually write about a harem and a hero among shit?

This is how I feel

Marry a wife from a planet? Is the author serious? Then the protagonist doesn't need to wear clothes. Everyone on the planet is his wife anyway. He can just get naked with his wife and do it whenever he wants. How convenient.

I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is extremely obscene. He crippled Luo Feng and turned him into a very weak piece of garbage. He didn't even enter the Virtual Universe Company. He didn't even appear in the Reincarnation Tournament or the Resurrection Tournament. He didn't even enter the Secret Realm of Dry Witches. It has completely turned into waste. It will no longer be possible to help humans obtain Duan Donghe's inheritance and solve the disaster of world beasts. The entire original universe will be destroyed.

Don't write about women's talents. Just give them eternal life later and forget about them after they leave the earth, otherwise this book won't go far (forgetting means writing less about their plots)

It must be poisonous. None of the Starry Sky fanfics I've read in the past two years have been able to hold on. Even one of them is still being updated and it's too slow. .

Raise

To be honest, I was attracted by the introduction. I also want to be an immortal and occupy a planet full of beautiful women 😃

I think it's the licking dog that swallows the stars

As for the protagonist's plug-in, also, the protagonist was well written in the front, but after the intelligent life appeared in the back, it felt wrong. The protagonist in the front was just a gangster, but from the back, it smelled like a licking dog!

This book is getting more and more like a dog licking. Since you won't take possession of the property or sell it, wouldn't it be better to follow the original path? Don't you understand the principle of rising rice and fighting rice and hatred?

I came here for the wife of a planet.

A wife from a planet is not bad. I didn't dare to look at this, for fear that my body wouldn't be able to bear it.

I have such a great opportunity, and if I want to write about the opportunity to suppress Master Luo Cheng, it would be a bit boring without the golden-horned giant beast.

It's mediocre, the same old routine, the same plot.