I'm Really Not Your Senior

The burping feels pretty good, but the cocoa is a bit poisonous.

The author should change Huang Ke's setting. It's too poisonous. He only wrote a few chapters and he started to be persuaded to quit with such poison.

It's a very good subject matter. I just discovered it last night. It was refreshing and great at first. But later on, the plot between the protagonist and those women really poisoned me. I feel like the author can't advance the plot without using women? ? ? Or maybe it's hard to understand what the author wants to express and what foreshadowing is being laid out. . . .

I have read over a hundred chapters and I don't understand why the author insists on writing a little girl character? Do you have a fetish? From my observation, in the world of Xianxia novels, little lolita are not pleasing to readers, but more of trying to discourage readers.

Shangguan Qin has not been killed at all, why would such a person keep her? Is it just because she's a woman?

Those few chapters of Coco really put me off. The whole story was pretty good, but the characterization made me less interested in looking at it. If the author continues to do this later, it will really become poisonous. When the author was reading the book himself, when he saw this kind of character, he probably had no desire to read any more.

What age are you still playing the character of a willful and tsundere young lady? Aren't you worried?

His brother-in-law, the protagonist is so powerful. Although he doesn't know it, he can't be forced to become a disciple by others. It's too hasty. You must know that the Tao should not be taught lightly. I feel so uncomfortable when I see it.

The author wants to describe Coco as an innocent girl who is inexperienced in the world, but her writing skills are not good enough and she gives the impression that she is an unruly and willful young lady As long as the problem is automatically ignored, it is not a big deal, but if it is too long, it will be disgusting.

Coco is too poisonous. I really don't want to watch it.