I'm Really Not Your Senior

The burp was alright, but the cocoa was a bit poisonous.

The author should really revise Huang Ke's character setting; it's too toxic. It's already so bad from the very first few chapters that it's discouraging readers from continuing.

It's a great premise; I just discovered it last night. At first, it was refreshing and fantastic, but the later parts involving the main character and the women really got to me. It felt like the author couldn't move the plot forward without using women? Or was the author trying to express something or plant some foreshadowing? I don't quite understand...

Having read over a hundred chapters, I still don't understand why the author insists on writing about little girl characters. Does the author have a particular penchant for it? In my observation, little girls aren't popular in the world of fantasy novels; in fact, they often deter readers.

Shangguan Qin wasn't killed? What's the point of keeping someone like her alive? Just because she's a woman?

Those chapters with Coco were truly off-putting. The beginning was generally good, but the character development made it less appealing. If the author continues like this, it'll become a poison. Even the author probably wouldn't want to continue reading after seeing characters like that.

What era are we living in? Why are you still playing the spoiled, arrogant young lady persona? Aren't you worried about something else?

Damn it, the protagonist is incredibly powerful. Although he himself doesn't know, he can't be forced to become someone's disciple by others. That would be too hasty. He should know that the Dao cannot be easily passed on. It made me feel so sad.

The author intended to portray Coco as an innocent and naive young girl, but due to poor writing skills, she comes across as a spoiled and willful young lady. It's not a big problem if you can ignore it automatically, but if it's too long, it becomes nauseating.

Cocoa is too poisonous, I really don't want to watch it.