Start with the Art of Trance

I felt uncomfortable reading it. Originally, the author said in the previous chapter that he was scolded by others, and I thought they were deliberately finding fault. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I can't help but curse. You are just a little monk who has not even become an immortal. No matter how hard it is to test your mind, you can pass on a technique that is unknown whether it can be practiced or not. It is so awesome that it is on the same level as Yuanshi Tianzun to receive 12 golden immortals. The test is like an old sow wearing a bra one after another. Your Broken Golden Pill Dao will test people who seek immortality for three years just like the Taoist priests from Laoshan. Whether you find a dream preacher who is persistent in seeking the Dao, or give you a jade slip, if you continue to play, will you have to kill all six relatives to worship heaven in order to prove that the heart of seeking the Dao is as solid as a rock, and then you will be qualified to inherit your Broken Golden Pill Dao? A few years of testing in a foggy mountain are not enough, and all the parents will die. Then a hero comes to save the beauty, and the next second the beauty falls into the dust. Please be a human being

I've been short of books recently, so I flipped through this book when I had nothing to do, and I've read fifty-eight chapters so far. Let me tell you my opinion. First of all, the subject matter is well chosen and the writing is smooth. But there are more shortcomings. First, you have committed the problem that many readers hate when seeing a girl unable to walk, whether it is a fox girl or some other princess. If you don't know how to describe, don't describe. The best way is to make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses. If these two characters were released from the factory, if I didn't really have any books to read, I would just click ❌ in the upper right corner. Second, the main plot is confusing. Until Chapter 58, you have no main plot at all, and you have not described the background of this world, the purpose of the protagonist's training, or the system of enemies that the protagonist will encounter later. You have no foreshadowing for these. The third line contains a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. Where I met the storyteller, I was looking at the short story with interest, but you suddenly inserted the scholar you met before twice, and this scholar did not promote the plot in any way. Moreover, the former scholar went to Beijing to take the exam and had no money to afford a boat trip, while the second scholar's ​​family owned a hotel. This is what I see so far.

The protagonist doesn't even know the price to pay for "keep quiet" and "apprenticeship", right? It's simply unbelievable.

I finished reading it in half a day, so you know what I mean! ! ! !

Everyone has different tastes in whether the book is good or not. At least I personally think it is a very good-looking book. Maybe it is not the best-looking book, but the author's care is definitely worth reading. I have 3 more books left to learn, and they are all for you!

Come on💪 It looks good

There have been a lot of people trolling recently, so let me tell you something. I'm a new author, I don't have enough writing skills, I don't have enough control over the plot, I just don't have enough. If the writing is not good, any comments are welcome. The author will absorb them if they can. But, your opinion is to point out that my writing is not good, rather than to stab me in the heart with a flying dragon, or to attack me personally. This author can't stand it. I hope you all can show your respect. If you don't like it, just delete it. Don't attack me personally. Let's just forget about each other. To those book friends who have been poisoned by my writing, I would like to say "I'm sorry" Please, all the big guys, please show your respect and let me go! ! ! ! !

The path to immortality is extremely dangerous. It would be unwise to bring the vixen back to the Taoist temple with just a few words of understanding. How can the protagonist cope with the journey to immortality in the future with his current intellectual disability?

When I saw the part about becoming a disciple, I didn't understand. The protagonist clearly has a supreme inheritance, but he just wanted to become a disciple for a useless thing.

I don't think it's necessary to make the protagonist too compassionate. I feel that there is a bit too much psychological description in the plot of the dragon walking out of the water. Our human race is expanding very quickly wherever we go. If monsters want to survive, they must confront people. Even if the dragons change their routes, they will probably flood other towns. Especially in ancient times, most humans lived on water. This is not only a struggle for the Tao, but also a competition between races for living space. As the protagonist, as a human being, if you are strong, you can naturally stop the monster. If you don't have that strength, you can also save some people. However, there is no moral issue here. After all, you can't expect the monster to consider from a human standpoint and risk death to let go of people who are insignificant to it. Just like if the protagonist survives a thunder tribulation, he will not consider how many animals will be killed by the thunder tribulation. Of course, human beings are indeed the mainstream, so it can basically be said that being kind to others is good, and being evil to others is evil. But this is because the human race as a whole is strong, and strength is the reason.

Please come to this post to recommend books. My fellow writers, writing is not easy, but for the sake of simplicity in my book review area, all outside book recommendations will be deleted!

Why do you, an immortal, always sympathize with mortals? To cultivate immortality, one must abandon the seven emotions and six desires

I believe that many people may not want to read the book list recommendation below. Let me explain to you that the Weasel asked for silence because if the protagonist did not give it at that time, the whole book might be over. And the one who worships a mortal as a teacher is not actually a student. You can take a look at the details. It is true that he does not worship a mortal as a teacher. I hope the author can be more refined. I just saw the book recommendation and passed by it more than ten times without reading it. I think there are people who believe it like me.

I've only read Chapter 19. Let me briefly talk about the poisonous points. First, the weasel's request for silence was a bit abrupt. In addition, the protagonist's performance was very bland and did not fit the character setting. The second is to become a disciple. There are Tiangang and Disha, and there is no need to ask for anything. Is it just a simple doubt but you become a disciple? According to the normal thinking of cultivating immortals, such a big cause and effect is too unnecessary to involve such a trivial matter. Food and grass below

Did the author have a misunderstanding about children in ancient times? Can a woman aged thirty-four be considered a child? In ancient times, it was an adult woman who could get married.

Comrade Xiaobai, write well. When you reach chapter 300, I will become a guardian. After writing chapter 400, I will become an elder. After writing chapter 500, I will become a leader. In fact, I want to be a grandmaster. Don't let people down, be more refined and lift it up 😁😁😁

This book should be finished, there is little point in writing it down.

Name: Zuo Xing Occupation: Jinyiwei Qianhu Kung Fu: "Iron Punishment War Technique" Gongmen martial arts has been pushed to the limit of mortals! ：             ，！ He has learned countless sword techniques, and his skills are close to the Tao! The sword intention is not hidden in the body, but when it manifests, it can kill ghosts and gods with the sword! The power of the sword reaches the sky, and the power of the sword can arouse the vitality of heaven and earth, making all demons and monsters afraid! Props: Soul-Destroying Knife The knife is made of cold iron and has been hereditary for three generations. The predecessor was the Xingmen Guillotine, which cut off countless heads. If the evil spirit of the sword condenses and removes blood with the Dharma Eye, even the evil spirits will not dare to touch the blade!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      but Communicating with thoughts can open the door to ghosts and extradite ghosts! Character background Based on Zuo Qianhu from Liaozhai, how could there be no Zuo Qianhu in Liaozhai! Dissatisfied with the darkness of the court, he resigned angrily and traveled around the world, slaying demons and demons while trying to break through the limits of mortals!

With the inheritance of the Great Dao, when others say that the path of ancient Qi practitioners is broken, it is broken? Isn't there a golden finger? Didn't you even write the golden finger later or did you forget it? Don't lose the watermelon and pick up the sesame seeds! Also, what kind of self-indulgence have I been immersed in recently? I don't think there is any need to worry about it. I should study cheats more and find monsters that harm people. Evil cultivators can upgrade cheats! Tao follows nature. Once the Tao is reached, it will come naturally

Do you guys have any good names for practicing sects? You can post them. They should be distinctive. For example, if there is a sect of sword cultivators, what kind of skills they practice, the sect is divided into the inner sword lineage or the outer sword lineage. Another example is a family that specializes in cultivating immortals. Or there are sects specializing in alchemy, etc. If you have any good ideas, you can post them in this building!

After a good practice, I can take care of any girl, but I feel constrained in everything I do, which makes me feel disgusted and panicked. I haven't cultivated well enough yet and I have to wipe her butt with me if anything happens. Now that I'm old enough and have learned some skills, I should get rid of her as soon as possible.

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If the author doesn't know how to write female characters, then he should write less. The female characters in the past are quite annoying (Before the Broken Temple) 😠 I didn't want to read it and couldn't bear it.

The more I look at it, the more frustrated I feel. No matter whether there are some powerful techniques or other inherited practices of ancient earth immortals, let alone disciples of major sects, it should not be difficult to become a god. However, you, an earth immortal, used your full sword to move people away casually, not to mention the other fights. It's the same with magic. Your Tiangang earth magic is really good. You have 400-500 years of magic power and other gods and immortals don't have that much magic power. Whether it's the mythical age or anything, you just have to watch the magic battle. It's not like you are at a very high level, but you can just move it casually. You saved people. There are no immortals in this world. You who have traveled through time and practiced cultivating Tiangang are in vain. Although some have not yet succeeded in cultivating, they should be the people with the most complete inheritance in this world. Although they have no knowledge, they should not write like this. Start reading from chapters 20-30. See I have to do it intermittently. If there were no books to read, I would have given up. There are quite a lot of poisonous points. And there are several people who have achieved the status of Earth Immortal in 50-90 years. You who have 400-500 years of mana and so much Earth Immortal fighting method should be regarded as horizontal pushers. You insist on writing a submissive line.

Chapter 30: People who practice the Tiangang Earthly Evil Technique, with the same level of cultivation, are actually afraid of a mountain monster leading two even lower level monsters. It's so funny.

3 Monthly passes, thank you from the author 😁

Why is the protagonist written by this author so afraid of communicating with others, afraid of being involved in the world of mortals, and making you sad when others die? I don't dare to open a harem, but that fox demon Tu Meier actually refuses to accept her. What's the point of cultivating immortality if it means transcending everything and doing whatever you want? Nature does whatever she wants and opens up her harem! Dreams, desires, battles, interests, wisdom, strength, etc. Are all gods, as long as you think they are spiritually.

The protagonist raised Li Yuan'er from the age of seven and taught spiritual practice. Li Yuan'er can still look at the protagonist's face and blush. I ask you, don't you feel tired of writing this? If you want to say admiration, I can understand it. But in the article, there is a man. They are all NPCs and they all have their own agenda. All the female supporting characters around me respond to requests. Let's be open-minded.

Drive high and go low, with majestic magic and magical skills. The supernatural powers of the immortal family are written like martial arts. The protagonist has an out-of-character personality and keeps meddling in other people's business.