The First Sword in Jianghu Fengyun

Hey, the first part of the story is so well written, it's simply amazing. The protagonist is well portrayed, doing whatever he wants and taking pleasure in the world. The whole book is very coherent from leaving the mountain to escaping to the bloody battle, making the reader feel that he is completely involved in it. But when I came to Swordsman, I was dumbfounded. Has the author changed someone? Why is the level gap so big? Swordsman has no way at all. Is it to improve martial arts? No. Is it to strategize in the dark? No. It's a hammer in the East and a stick in the West. He has no idea what he is doing. He goes with the flow and meets everyone. Regardless of the real villain, he will teach martial arts to the protagonist. It seems to be an NPC in the game. The entire Swordsman seems to have no wisdom at all except the protagonist. It is completely the same as the current cool novel routine. Hey, I don't know what happened after finally finding a martial arts book and it became like this.

I don't usually post in the book review section, I'm a very quiet person, haha. What needs to be explained here is: Let's talk about the setting again: The protagonist doesn't know much about the martial arts plot. If you feel that this setting is unacceptable and you like to watch an omniscient protagonist, you can ask other book friends to recommend some, or you can directly select popular martial arts time-travel works from the links of similar works at the bottom of this book. Of course, there are many very well written and beautiful ones. I think this setting is terrible. This is because everyone has different tastes and it has nothing to do with it. But if you want to criticize this setting, I think it is acceptable for one person to criticize once or twice, but if you have to criticize all the time in the chapter review of this book, and even ridicule other book friends, I think it is a bit too much. And if readers can accept different writing methods, they can take a look, it is very simple. I am used to being criticized for my previous two martial arts books, so it doesn't matter, but I feel it is necessary to explain the reason why I wrote it this way. I tried some "unpopular planes" in the previous book "Little People in Jianghu Planes". I personally think these planes are worth talking about, but if no one has seen it, the protagonist knows the plot and will skip a lot of content, which makes it difficult to proceed. So if the protagonist doesn't know the original plot, try to explain the story and characters clearly, and it won't affect too much. I later thought that this way of writing actually doesn't involve too much elaboration, so it's okay. Later on, I gradually felt that this way could bring out the personality of the characters in the original work and retain the flavor of martial arts. Instead of a protagonist who can predict the future and mess around with everything. (By the way, forewarning in advance, one or two real "unpopular planes" may appear later in the article) As for some people asking: 1. Ah, why does the protagonist join the martial arts world if he doesn't know the plot? This problem is very simple. All the characters in the original work do not know the plot. How they survive is how the protagonist survives. The protagonist is also the direct disciple of the Blood Knife Ancestor. 2. Some people think that the protagonist does not know the plot, so why can he still encounter the original plot by coincidence? There doesn't seem to be any forced coincidence. I think the only coincidence is that the first time I traveled through the world was deliberately arranged by the "Jianghu Order" that traveled through the martial arts plane. The following ones were an extension of the relationship between the characters. The protagonist was in the Jianghu, so he naturally couldn't help himself. The plot is not solely instigated by the protagonist, but all the characters will naturally promote the plot together. This is exactly where the plot of the prophet protagonist will proceed differently (similar to the nature of traditional martial arts). From the second volume to the present, the protagonist seems to have not followed the original plot that was forced to coincide. If you feel that some part of the plot development is very illogical, you can point it out directly and discuss it in detail. This is normal, rather than "just talking". 3. This protagonist makes people feel uninvolved. There is no solution for this book. The solution is to look at other more immersive and better-looking martial arts time travel works. There are many of these works, and you can recommend them in the comments below, which will save some book friends who don't like this book but like martial arts from reading this book. And if someone says, spraying is to let other book lovers see it, so as not to fall into the trap. So I will post here first and explain it clearly to new book friends. Having said so much, I should make it clear. Finally, I may post some discussion posts about the original work in the book review area in the future. Everyone is welcome to participate, thank you! Thank you again to all the book friends! 🙂 Okay, please start recommending other good time-travel martial arts series works in the comment area to those book friends who don't like this book 🌹🌹🌹

In recent chapters, I can feel the repressed desires in the author's heart. Why not let go and write, and make the protagonist's asshole explode. You can be regarded as making a name for yourself in the online literary world.

The protagonist actually doesn't know anything about the plot! ? Readers who come here to read basically like martial arts novels. You have never read the protagonist of Mr. Jin Yong's work? There is no sense of immersion at all! ! !

The protagonist doesn't know the plot at all! This is not fun to watch at all! On the contrary, it's very depressing! It's better not to be a time traveler!

Unlimited martial arts flow. The background of the story is that the protagonist is reborn in the world of Lianchengjue and becomes the disciple of the Blood Knife Ancestor. He goes out and gets involved in the struggle between Ling Tuisi and Wan Zhenshan. After killing Ling Tuisi, he is hunted down. Like the original work, he joins forces with the Blood Knife Ancestor to fight Nansiqi on the snowy mountain. After that, the master and apprentice finally win the battle by luck. Then he entered the world of Swordsman and was involved in the Golden Pen Washing Hands incident. Entrusted by Mr. Mo Da, he rescued the Liu Qu family. After his martial arts progressed greatly, he faced off against Zuo Lengchan and entered the Five Mountains Merger Incident. The advantage of this book is that the author's writing style is excellent. The fighting descriptions and character dialogues have a very strong traditional martial arts flavor. In terms of style, it better integrates the characteristics of the two martial arts schools of Jin Yong and Gu Long. It has the weight and calmness of Jin Yong's martial arts and the cleanliness of Gu Long's martial arts. The shortcoming of this book is that the character of the protagonist is unreasonable, and there is a problem of selling meat at the head of a sheep. The protagonist claims to be a time traveler, but in fact his actions and thoughts are that of an indigenous person. The sense of substitution is not strong, and the character is repetitive and the work style is inconsistent. It is difficult to justify it. Moreover, the plausibility of many plots in the novel has not been very high. It can only be said that it is barely above the passing line. To sum up, the main reason why this book can be recommended and read by many readers is just that "there is no hero in times, so Shuzi becomes famous." ----Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" Come to us for the book desolation!!!

The first volume of Blood Knife is the best, but there are too many poisonous points in the literary youth later on... Especially the volume of Swordsman, the smell of cologne can kill you Returning to Swordsman, selling wontons and demolishing the school, the whole diary of a great master pretending to be an ordinary person and pretending to be a showman. In general, it has a classic martial arts style, and there are some exciting places, but there are too many private goods, and there is no strong main line purpose to support it. The follow-up feels too scattered I feel poisoned after reading it, and I am not happy.

If you write the plot like this, no one will be willing to buy it 😅

How to say this book is incomprehensible. The protagonist is like a headless fly. Is the author obsessed with imitating the style of writing, but in the end he fails to see what the main line of the novel is and what is the purpose of the protagonist? I was confused when I saw it, and I didn't know whether to praise or criticize it... I clicked on it in confusion, and got out of here in confusion. But I still want to ask all you book lovers, what do you think is good about this book?

It's another eunuch male protagonist. If you don't want to give Shui Sheng a hope, don't flirt with others. The family will be ruined, and the relatives will die and then be abandoned by the male protagonist. It's awesome. It's even worse than the original.

The protagonist of the eunuch, I can't stand any girls anymore

A person who was born in modern times but had no modern education or the influence of modern civilization traveled through time before his three views were developed. Then they were quickly assimilated, and their perspective on thinking about problems and their style of doing things were no different from those of the natives. Who is the audience for this book given this background setting? What percentage? Has the author investigated it carefully?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out recently read this book, and after reading a few chapters of the Blood Knife Chapter, I was hooked. A closer look revealed that it was the author of "Little People", which I liked in the past. At that time, I always felt that the author's understanding of the completion of the peerless double pride was unique, so it can be seen that he put a lot of effort into research. This Blood Knife Chapter increasingly shows that the author's writing style is mature and sophisticated. But it has to be said that from the beginning of Xiaoao, its shortcomings also began to be revealed.         ""，""， Starting from Xiao Shiyilang's chapter, the author's feeling of "losing taste" has become more and more obvious. This actually has a lot to do with the selection of the article. Gu Long's peerless double pride is a turning point in the "fusion of gold and ancient times" style, but from then on, Feidao, Chu Liuxiang, Xiao Shiyilang, etc., Like landscape paintings, pay more attention to freehand brushwork rather than realism. This freehand brushwork is actually reflected in the details. To give a simple example, after Fuli forced them to take out the deer-cutting knife, he first said: [Is this the deer-cutting knife? Then Zhao Wuji replied: This is the deer-cutting knife! These two sentences seem to be very different from each other. If it is an ancient dragon, it will usually be arranged as [Zhao Wuji first said: This is the deer-cutting knife! Then Fuli said: This is a deer knife! It's really not pretentious, but his arrangement actually hides the character's personality and many voiceovers. I really like the author Da Da, so I shamelessly wrote this nonsense. I just hope Da Da can find the feeling and charm when writing "Peerless Two Prides", because although the writing style at that time was not as good as it is now, the charm is above it. "Those who learn from me will live, and those who are like me will die." "I hope to discover the true meaning of this as soon as possible and reach a higher realm. Because I really hope that a good author can lead this sluggish martial arts era!

I haven't read the text yet, but I saw the author analyzing the characters in Swordsman, but I really don't like Linghu Chong. Being friends with the flower picker has damaged the reputation of the school. Moreover, if you think about what he did, it can be said that he doesn't distinguish between right and wrong, and is even unfaithful and unfilial. He does things based on his preferences, regardless of the consequences.

I traveled through time when I was 13 years old, and I had no sense of immersion at all, so I was persuaded to quit

The writing is good, and the details are attentive. What's even more rare is that it has the original flavor of ancient martial arts. Some of today's mixed martial arts always like to mix various elements in the narrative methods and techniques, which makes them look nondescript and jarring.

Not a swordsman

Come from a small person in the world of Jianghu. Come on, author, it's really good-looking.

This is bullshit! So unreasonable! People's personalities change greatly! Traveled through several worlds! In Tianlong Wudi, you can return to Xiaoao and fight Feng Qingyang back and forth!

I want to watch the white-haired witch transfer to another plane

If you buy a pirated copy, you can make up for it, and there is no other problem except that the update is too slow...

This is the only martial arts novel I have read online in the past ten years. The author is great. I feel like I have gone back to the time when I rented books and read Jin Yong, The Ancient Dragon and Liang Yusheng more than 30 years ago.

As for sword skills, the protagonist has no flaws in his moves, but the wood-burning sword technique in Shaolin's Seventy-Two Special Skills may be of great benefit to the protagonist (after practicing it, he can quickly chop ninety-nine eighty-one cuts next to a dry wood, and the blade will not damage the wood fibers. The heat emitted from the knife can ignite the wood and make a fire) Moreover, in the later world, unless it is really a treasure of heaven and earth, a magical weapon like the wind and cloud, Gaobuli gradually becomes an inseparable thing, and plants, trees, bamboos and stones can be used as knives. Gradually reach the point where no sword is better than having a sword. When Ding Peng in Full Moon Scimitar dealt with his apprentice who had already obtained the essence of Full Moon Scimitar, he still defeated him with a wooden sword. I am afraid it is the same result through different paths. Understand the principles of the wood-burning sword technique, and practice it to the point where you can cut wood with bare hands and make fire. If you have the sword intention, supplement it with the black iron heavy sword technique. I'm afraid it's not much worse than the Flame Sword and the Six Meridians Divine Sword.

I've read almost 100 chapters, and it's well written But there are huge questions and logical loopholes Is this person who forces the protagonist to step on the horse really come from time travel? Why don't you have any memory of riding a horse? No information about your past life Don't understand the plot or characters at all? ? ? Forcibly traveling through time and not cheating? Then why is he still a bit suicidal and thinks he will not die?

This novel raises the level of martial arts fandom

I look forward to the author continuing to write martial arts fan fiction. Qidian martial arts fan fiction needs you.

Just blowing it up doesn't mean it's black, why? Because it's really good to watch, martial arts and martial arts, there are martial arts and chivalrous ones, martial arts can be fists and kicks, weapons, knights can be any chivalrous heroes, no matter how you choose, the most important thing is to have both "wu" and "xia"! Although this book cannot compare with the works of literary masters, in the current environment, it is indeed a rare masterpiece!

Now that I have seen the end of the Swordsman dungeon, I can only say that it is hard to describe it. The plot of Oriental Invincible was offline less than 10 chapters in. Regardless of the rationality of the plot, the brilliance of the content of the article, and the sophistication of the original work, is it understandable that Oriental Invincible died before doing anything? I don't understand, and the protagonist repeatedly jumps between the good and the bad, forcing himself to be indifferent, surrounded by enemies, and then publicizes the antidote to the Three Corpse Brain Pill to protect his woman. Why do you think that the originally restrained bad guy will become a good guy after the restraint is lifted? I don't understand how the plot was designed. In fact, the plot design of Xiao Li's Flying Knife dungeon and Lu Xiaofeng's dungeon in the previous book was average, but the writing was good and overall it was quite exciting. This book's shortcomings are greatly magnified. Originally, there were many things worth writing about the plot of Swordsman, but the original plot changed by the author himself was a mess. Seeing it now is not as good as the last one.

The blood rain comes out of the mountains, the snow and wind are far away, and the divine light shines immeasurably high in the sky. Being worthy of not being a swordsman, he is the best swordsman in the world.

The author is really tough. He clearly knows that the protagonist doesn't know the plot, which is very toxic, and a lot of people criticize him, but he shouldn't be, he is so tough. After all, he doesn't make a living by writing books, so he has enough confidence 😰