The Beginning of the Ninja World Eternal Eye

It's not enough to feel like it was over before Naruto was born.

After reading Chapter 337, I really can't stand it anymore. As a time-travel novel, the protagonist obtains an eternal kaleidoscope as soon as he travels to the past. Anyone who has watched Naruto knows that the Eternal Kaleidoscope was the peak combat power in the early stages of Naruto, not to mention that the abilities acquired by the protagonist are also very strong. As a result, I read more than 300 chapters and couldn't bear to watch Night of the Nine Tails. Several years have passed since the time travel to Night of the Nine Tails without any changes to the plot. The protagonist's strength is getting stronger and stronger, but regardless of whether he should die or not, he still follows the original plot, except that a time traveler appears in the middle and pretends to be cool. The author always says that he is afraid of changing the original plot and what will happen to the Otsutsuki clan. Without the protagonist, in the end, wouldn't the Otsutsuki clan deserve to be killed, killed, and damned to die? Why don't you do it here? It's really hard to watch a time-travel novel as if you were writing the original plot here. Be careful not to fall into the trap...

It's funny when I see the introduction. Ignorance, shamelessness, and arrogance must be tempered. Hehe

I don't know Naruto at all, so I must have just read it casually and decided to write a fanfic.

I have read more than 20 chapters of the layout of the journal. 1. Orochimaru was never said to be mentally weak in the original work. On the contrary, he is an all-rounder and is quite proficient in illusions. Anyone who can fully develop the forbidden art of playing with the soul is not a fool. The protagonist's early attempt to threaten Orochimaru is basically a dream, unless it is cheating. You must know that Itachi has the illusion kaleidoscope bonus, which is normal for most people. 2. As the protagonist is an Uchiha, it goes without saying what he is in terms of political correctness. 3. Inexplicable friendliness. At this stage of Kakashi, to put it bluntly, if you treat him, he will also treat him as your tool. It is good to have a few words. I have never experienced a war, but I still want his friendship, and they also develop the best ninjutsu together. Many settings are rigid and do not have a complete set of logic.

This is the worst time that human beings have been hacked The protagonist's IQ is among the top five among humans. I suspect that the protagonist traveled to the pre-apocalyptic world and there are less than five left.

Looking at the introduction, I couldn't help but wonder which university student the author was, who had the confidence to write about a protagonist with one of the top five IQs among humans.

I just read Chapter 8 and I'm convinced to give up. The total number of my two lifetimes is almost 40. It was originally planned to show three magatama two years later, but when he saw Shisui, when Shisui said that he had also opened two magatama, he ended up using three magatama. This was too childish. It's totally like children's play house. You have two and I have three.🤭🤭

As soon as I read the introduction, I knew this book was going to hit the street. Is it in the top 5 IQs in the world? How can the author write about this IQ? When you write this article, you must at least crush the IQ of all readers, because no one who reads your book will think that they are in the top 5 IQs in the world. If you write it to make them feel that the protagonist is not as good as themselves, then the book will be finished, because IQ is not stated, but reflected by the actions of the protagonist. Some people say what if the author could really write about the feeling of being in the top 5 IQs in the world? Then he still writes a stupid online article 🤓

Find a factory as soon as possible and work hard. Writing a novel is beyond your ability. What are you writing about?

If you want to write about the top five IQs in human history, there are certain requirements for the author's IQ.

Top five in IQ? You are insulting humanity

Just in sb logic, we can return to the top five IQs of humans

I really don't see how the protagonist's IQ is high. He talks like an NT, just like this author.

The protagonist's character is too annoying... After reading more than 20 chapters in a row, I was really forced to retreat when I fooled Kai into trouble with Chen. Does the protagonist treat everyone as a fool? I didn't realize that he was arrogant and arrogant. He took advantage of others and pretended that I was doing it for your own good (the protagonist really thought so) and it was your honor to be my tool. He was self-righteous and complacent. He had no manners at all and looked down on everyone for no reason. Even if the author insisted on adding "respect and admire geniuses who work hard" and insisted on portraying a well-liked character, isn't that a contradiction? Although he is clearly using others as tools, the author still insists on describing "friendship and growth" at every turn. He either openly deceives people or makes friends openly. Would you make friends with someone you look down upon and disdain? Just the protagonist? The first person who is both cowardly and crazy. You might say that his strength is equal to that of others, but he doesn't dare to expose the kaleidoscope. You might say that he is just trying to develop. He doesn't hide his madness from others at all. In short, it feels like I want to combine various popular characters but I can't master it well and I can't make it consistent. Because I still like the settings mentioned in the introduction. I would like to ask if there will be any growth in the future? Or have you always been so awkward?

Top five IQs?-_-||That's it? Even with ten years of cerebral thrombosis, I can't write this plot.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist is 6 years old and possesses the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, which has the ability to turn a person and all abilities into his own through contact, or turn another person into a permanent clone of himself. It also comes with 6 phantom bodies, which can be attacked and healed. As long as it is not an instant kill, no matter how serious the injury is, it can be transferred to the phantom body in seconds, and it will be resurrected immediately with full health. Moreover, even if the 6 phantom bodies are gone, you can immediately consume chakra to attack again. At the age of 6, you already have the strength of the invincible ninja world... 6 Years old

With this IQ, was the protagonist's previous life a post-apocalyptic world? Did only four people die in your world? Otherwise, how could this be ranked fifth? Only four people and one dog were left dead.

After reading a little bit, in general, the protagonist is a bit stupid, talks too much, is useless, is naive, arrogant, and has high ambitions and low ambitions. Acting inconsistently, inexplicably, without considering the consequences. You think he is stupid, and suddenly he becomes a little smarter; you think he is smart, and the next moment he becomes stupid again, which makes people confused.

Why must it be among the top five IQs of humans? Can you write that kind of IQ

... I think the results will be better if this book is placed at the next station.

At the beginning, you have the Eternal Eye, Jonin Chakra, and the eye is still feeding back to itself, and the swallowing and fusion ability has been refreshed. The Phantom God can already produce 6. You only need time to develop and exercise your ability. What is the result? Go and learn Taijutsu from Konoha Shenron, or learn thunder escape from Kakashi. If you really want to learn it, won't it all be yours if you devour Konoha Shenron? If you want to use thunder escape, can't you just control the phantom body to steal it? Or can't you just swallow the fused tailed beast directly? What kind of physical skills do you want? All he lacks is chakra. If he swallows a first-generation cell, wouldn't it cause a super shadow? Like a two-armed one

In fact, you can quit after reading the introduction. It is quite difficult to write a high-IQ protagonist. Because this also tests the author's IQ. If your IQ exceeds that of most readers, this book will definitely kill people. What kind of genius is among the top five IQs in the world? Not to mention surpassing Einstein's achievements, at least he is a god who can withstand 200 teachers. Just write about the IQ of this kind of person. You yourself are at least smart enough. Why is Liu's book so popular? It's because Da Liu himself knows a lot and has enough IQ. People write about all kinds of high-IQ talents, and they can write that taste.

After all, I am a newcomer, and there are indeed many shortcomings, but there are still some interesting things. Stick with it and work hard slowly.

In summary, the writing is poor and the reading is not smooth. You will torture yourself if you continue reading.

Unlimited vest flow! The whole book is full of the protagonist's vest, and no one has any sense of existence! It's Shado, it's Red Boy, it's Magic Form, it's Kakarot and Vegeta, it's directly from the earth to the universe.

This book is actually still readable with so many Naruto fans out there. Don't look at the comments and the comments. In fact, this book is much better than many Naruto fans.

The protagonist is too young. Sasuke opened his eyes at night when he destroyed the clan, but Magatama alone couldn't hold it. The main reason is that he is too young, his body and chakra are not good, and the logic does not make sense. It's okay for you to open a kaleidoscope at the age of 12 or 16, but it's okay to open a kaleidoscope at the age of 6? It is simply a strange species in the ninja world.

There are only five people in the protagonist's world. There is nothing wrong with being in the top five IQs. This is the first time in so many years that I have seen someone admit that his IQ is among the top five in the world. Niubi

It's a little interesting at the beginning, but basically not interesting at all in the middle. You can see it before you have tried it, please respect it after paying.