Dream About Six-Legged Sheep

The writing is good and could continue to develop. Big support for the author ^0＾~

The introduction written in the first chapter can be made simpler and modified to make it more attractive to readers. The story concept is great, keep it up!

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The setting is very novel and the writing is good. I can't see the direction of the plot from the front. Is it a daily style?

The setting is relatively novel, and the first chapter follows current events closely. However, I don't quite understand what the title of this book means. It doesn't seem to have the flavor of science fiction. When I saw it, I felt a bit like fantasy? Think of something like a sheep-headed demon. The writing is okay, but the experience in the first chapter may not be very good.

It seems to have the flavor of the Lord of Mysteries. I have tried to write a scientific article before, but the academic level is not up to standard and I can't write more than 100,000 words. However, this article seems to have biological knowledge at my fingertips. The pace is fast, and it is quite comfortable for a reader to read. Someone said above that it is best to divide it into paragraphs, but I don't think so. It's not tiring to read. But I think the protagonist's name is too random, and I remember my high school biology teacher was named Zhu Linfang! So embarrassing. I read a few chapters carefully, and it actually inspired me in terms of the composition of the dialogue. Well, please forgive me, I just started writing.

A relatively in-depth article. I feel that the author really wants to make readers think. The writing style is delicate, but the name of the protagonist could be changed. It has been collected Most people don't read this kind of article nowadays, and it feels a little bit buried.

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