Talisman and Immortal Path

Not enough details, but the pacing is okay!

I have read Chapter 52, and I have just finished a fierce battle with the Zhou family. The outcome was that both sides suffered losses. The Zhou family was almost wiped out, the Yu family's vitality was severely damaged, and a third of the clan members were left dead. It feels like there is no reason and it is very unreasonable. You did not introduce any conflict of interest before, nor did you say anything about years of feud. Anyway, the Zhou family has an extra foundation for no reason, and it has always wanted to destroy the Yu family, regardless of the consequences, regardless of whether the difference in strength is huge, and then colludes with the foreign enemies of the superior sect to destroy it. It is like losing one's mind. , You have never introduced the business of Fangshi from the beginning to the end, the scale and model of Fangshi, and you have not mentioned any conflicts of interest. Anyway, after one more foundation is added, it is as if the two families are incompatible with each other, and they must not forget the consequences. Even if thousands of people in the whole family die, they don't care, and they have to fight the whole family. It is too retarded. Let's talk about the issue of mentality. We are all cultivators. Who is not for the path of immortality, for strength, with a strong heart, and doesn't care about anything. It's better for you. If Yu Minghua can't bear the pressure, his mentality is not good, and his cultivation level can't improve, forget it. Are you coming back later? Did you also cause psychological trauma to the protagonist? Brother, you have to improve your cultivation in the later stage. I can recognize the inner demons of the protagonist. Now one is just practicing Qi and the other is just building the foundation. You have done this? Have you been a woman for a long time, or are you a woman to begin with and like these pretentious dramas? Then what articles do you write about cultivating immortality? Can't you write an urban gangster novel? Which of the immortal writings is not one with an extremely strong heart, one who is willing to risk everything for the sake of immortality, and who cannot be shaken by anything? After all, the world view is here. This kind of world is one of the weak and the strong. It is all for the sake of the road and resources. Once you have cultivation, you can build a family and build everything. Is there any problem? You act like a sickly girl spoiled by her parents, with a fragile heart like glass. This is too ridiculous. I wanted to praise you at first. You wrote a lot of details. There were more daily routines, not so thrilling. It was basically drawing talismans to exchange money for practice. I felt that this style was not bad. But you backhanded me and ate a big lump of it. The details were so detailed that it hurt my heart? Are you brave enough to follow two people on the ninth floor of a foundation, seize treasure from a tiger's mouth, and walk an extreme tightrope, but you end up feeling so fragile inside? Are you talking about whether the character is broken or not? Let's talk about it again, your pacing problem can also be said to be a plot arrangement problem. Since you want to design the Zhou family and Yang Zhen to turn against each other, have internal strife, and lose two ninth floors of the foundation in an instant, then you still have so much foreshadowing. Why are you so anxious to call for reinforcements and report to the top? Didn't you take off your pants and fart? You didn't write about their internal strife, but you wrote about the clan leader arriving with his people. I felt a lot better. But you did write it. Isn't this equivalent to sending the clan leader away and letting all the clansmen die? Then when the fight is almost over, the clan leader comes back to end it. The Wu family has not done any work, so they come to take advantage? I don't even dare to touch the Zhou family's assets. What's wrong, give them all to the Wu family who have done nothing? I can't understand the meaning or purpose of whatever is written here. Apparently there are three small families living in peace and harmony. The Wu family is the only one, and the other two families are equally powerful. They were all living very well. They controlled a city together and each supported their own family. However, without explaining the conflicts of interest, they just fought for nothing and it was all in vain. I didn't understand it at all. I'll see what happens later. If the protagonist's psychological trauma is still not good, then forget it and just give up. I'm too lazy to tell you about this inexplicable book. I'm too lazy to complain. I'll just say goodbye.

Give me a plug-in that can repair the broken talisman. Why is the protagonist better than others without it?

I hope it won't be written as a family story, and the heroine won't appear too early. For details, please refer to Journey to Longevity

Chapter 138: Breakthrough from the third level of foundation building to the fourth level of foundation building. It is obviously the breakthrough from the early stage to the middle stage, but you actually wrote the breakthrough from the early stage to the late stage, skipping the middle stage? ? ? .

The pace of practice is too fast and there is no detailed description at all. Secondly, by absorbing spiritual stones, your cultivation level increased so quickly? It's just a three-spirit root If this is not something that one person can do, then just use the spirit stone to cultivate people.

It looks weird without a golden finger

Unexpectedly, the author set the protagonist to practice the skills of the Nascent Soul stage, but they were actually donated by others. Your own skills are the fundamental secret and vitality of a cultivator. If the enemy knows the secrets of your skills, they will have direct means to target you. This means that your life and death are in their hands. Isn't this a joke? So sloppy and extremely disappointing. The exercises practiced by the protagonist are all written as highlights. Some even set up self-created exercises, which is a good thing for the author. What do you think?

There are too many settings outside of the plot, and it feels like watching a bunch of nonsense.

It's too bland, the protagonist levels up quickly, and there's no sense of urgency like a small family.

I think those with spiritual roots should be able to complete the five elements as they practice, and those with spiritual roots should not have shortcomings.

😁 Everything else is good, but it's all just a bit of a waste, and it's uncomfortable to listen to the book.

The protagonist will probably leave after repaying the favor. He doesn't owe this small family anything.

Come on! The content should be more compact! After all, others have written much better about the Mortal stream and the Immortal Cultivation Family. If we don't get into the condensed and exciting parts as soon as possible, it is very likely that others will read it in another book. Vote 9 for you tomorrow

I hope that there will be family plots in the future and that they will not be sold as dog meat (the old routine of previous fairy tale novels). Give some low-level treasures that are good for the development of the family to the family, and then the family will also give the protagonist some useful things. I am teaching the juniors of the first and second families to make talismans. In the golden elixir period, I have the ability to help potential clan members build foundations and so on.

Not much to say, first cast a recommendation vote and then read slowly

Come and support me. I hope it won't turn into the kind of cool post that pretends to be cool and slaps you in the face in the future.

The front feels fine, but the back is really unbearable.

I finally found the time to read the last eight chapters, and the ending was almost interesting. The new book has been collected and supported by two recommendation votes every day. Please be careful and I hope you write better and better!

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The writing is pretty good, but it progresses a little too fast and the character names are easily confused.

There is a book that is a bit similar to this one. I recommend reading "The Book of Talisman". The protagonist suppresses all kinds of ghosts and evil spirits.

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