The Great Tardy Immortal

Writing according to the original story line seems simple but is actually difficult. Writing too much content in the original story line can easily cause fatigue, which will test whether the author's imagination is rich enough.

I was late for the immeasurable calamity, and could only watch the immortals disappear into thin air. Leave me alone to create the world. Woohoo….

Don't want a heroine, don't accept random apprentices, don't give random treasures

How to say it! It feels a little less fairy-like, and the main character feels like a loser to me.

After all, it's a Chaos Demon God calling a vixen sister, it's too tasteless! Drive high and go low!

At least the protagonist is allowed to participate in the great events of the ancient times, but it feels like the protagonist has no sense of existence at all

I don't understand, the starting point is too high, the achievements are too low, a chaotic demon god, the incarnation is just a golden immortal,

It's too verbose. The first fifteen chapters explain one's life experience. It's too long-winded.

Not to mention that the Chaos Gods and Demons have a high starting point but low achievements, and they even surpass the protagonist in terms of cultivation. The Zhulongs are all quasi-saints, there are many Da Luo in the dragon clan, the protagonist is a golden immortal, this advancement is too slow, and the aptitudes of the Chaos Gods and Demons are not very bad. Later, I finally became the Taiyi Golden Immortal and returned to the True Immortal. Now that you are in the Six Saints period, you are just a big Luo. Do you really think that everyone is a senior? Does Fengshen still want to die in person? What about Journey to the West? The timeline is so long, you can't keep pressing it, right? The starting point of chaos gods and demons and the final sanctification is the end point?

I haven't seen the protagonist for several chapters. The protagonist is so faceless.

This introduction is poisonous. I don't dare to see what to do. I don't have the strength and opportunity to turn into ashes under the calamity 😏. I'm still late. . . Sudden

I can't stand the first chapter anymore. A majestic Daluo Jinxian has a dream and doesn't know who he is? It was beeping for a long time. The protagonist is really mentally retarded. When we wake up from a dream, we know at a glance whether he is at home or not. The protagonist is already a golden fairy. When he wakes up from a dream, he finds that the Jade Emperor is still a boy. Doesn't he know what's going on? Like a psychopath, the author made the protagonist look really mentally retarded.

The Four Swords of Zhuxian has nothing to do with Pangu. It belongs to Luohu. I think it's okay after reading the comments. What are you writing? Are you kidding me?

What are these two chapters about? Already about to collapse?

It's almost 300. It's not a little bit better.

What is the highest level of being late? He just didn't arrive. He was obviously the protagonist, but he didn't participate in any plot, so he was late. If he was late, he would be punished, but under the halo of the protagonist, he would be rewarded for being late. It is said that the prehistoric era was a period of striving for the first step, but in that era when there was almost no shortage of immortality, there were many people who managed to rise in the end. For example, Ran Deng and Sanqing both came from Zixiao Palace, but except for the Fengshen participation once, they were not reborn. When they were reborn, Sanqing was all imprisoned, but he became a Buddha, sitting in one place and being worshiped by thousands of people. So it's okay to take a step later and the sky will be brighter!

There are too many poisonous points, I don't know what to say? A Chaos Demon God can be used as a slave by a weapon that is about to be damaged. Your Chaos Demon God's skills are really low. Even if the Chaos Demon God is injured, how can he be injured? Its essence is still very strong, so to speak, Hong Yang Mei, Yin Yang, and Five Elements, they were also seriously injured. Why were they also Da Luo Jinxian when they were born? Why is the protagonist's birth strength so low? I suggest you discard the book immediately after reading the reviews! This book is very popular