Three Kingdoms: Riding Across Thirteen Provinces

Doesn't the author know how to write? Starting from helping Dong Zhuo defeat the Yellow Turban, the number of words is really impressive.

If you don't want to write, don't write. Anyone who is a bookworm is familiar with the Three Kingdoms stuff, so there is no need to popularize it!

Too much introduction to history. Most of a chapter is about history.

It is recommended that the author pay attention to the title. In the Han Dynasty, you could not directly call people by their names. You usually called people by their names. Calling people by their names in that era was a curse. People with official positions cannot be called "adult". In this period, "adult" refers to the father. Generally, the other party will be called a certain envoy, a certain governor, etc. According to the official position. This is a personal suggestion, don't spray it if you don't like it, thank you!

Is it so good? Ninety-nine percent of the content is popular science. Who reads novels to read these contents?

I really couldn't stand it any longer, so I just copied the history. I couldn't watch it because I didn't know if I missed the point. It didn't have any nutrition or the main plot. Four or more of the five or six chapters were written as history books.

As a new author, no matter how you write. Never give up because of other people's opinions. The only recommendation vote is for you. I hope you can work hard. Just give a few comments for the author to refer to. After all, it is not easy to revise the outline First: In ancient times, there were three wives and four concubines, plus political marriages and many other reasons. It is normal to have two or three female protagonists, but don't be unable to walk when you see a woman Second: Don't make all the fierce ones The generals will all be under their command, and as long as they are the generals under their own command, they will not die. I don't think even people like Cao Cao and Li Shimin can do it, let alone a modern person who knows nothing Third: To write a historical novel before the Sui and Tang Dynasties, the political struggle of aristocratic families must be written well.

This is the first time I have read such a bad Three Kingdoms novel. If I were to rate it out of ten, I would give it 0.1.

Nine out of ten of your chapters are historical introductions 😅😅

I feel like the author is insulting my IQ. With 600 heavy cavalry and more than 4,000 infantry, I almost lost against 10,000 Yellow Turbans. You can win with your feet. Why don't you put the Four Saints of Soldiers on the opposite side? Otherwise, I feel like winning is too easy.