The Immortal Martial Arts of All Heavens Enlightenment

The changed history is different from the original history and The Deer and the Cauldron. The only purpose is to pretend to remove the protagonist's precognitive advantage. But in fact, how different is it from The Deer and the Cauldron? This is exactly the same as writing a time traveler who deliberately forgets the original plot.

After hundreds of years, the leather of books about innate skills will not rot? Can you still see clearly the remains of the Double Ninth Festival? Furthermore, the Nine Yin Manual is a Taoist secret. Mei Chaofeng and Huang Yaoshi's disciples have not been able to understand it for several years. How can the protagonist understand things after learning a little bit at the lowest stage of martial arts?

I can't understand it! Killed Cholera Qing Ting Ao Bai, and then killed Wu Sangui of one side of the separatist regime? This is to help the Qing Dynasty pacify the world! Otherwise, Ao Bai and Wu Sangui will definitely fight Qing Ting!

To be honest, the supporting characters are more like the protagonists than the protagonists. It seems really weird for the author to write this.

Wear clear and non-rebellious chrysanthemum set of electric drill

Let me take a look at it and evaluate it objectively. Don't worry, I won't criticize you too much.

Okay, I will watch if you rebel.

I've only read a few chapters. Even if you can tell the story of Jin Yong's heroes, it's been over 500 years since the Southern Song Dynasty to the Kangxi reign of the Qing Dynasty. Not to mention the movement of ground veins, plant growth, etc., Even the bricks, tiles and concrete have long been weathered, not to mention the civil buildings of the Southern Song Dynasty? Whether it's the Chongyang Palace or the ancient tombs, there's no trace of them left. Don't doubt the intensity of nature's changes! If you don't believe it, go and look at the empty houses in the countryside!

Personally, I think the writing is good, the details are well described, the writing style is much better than some novices, and it is not mindlessly dependent on the system. The plot jumps too fast in some places, which makes people feel confused. For example, I am very curious about what Murong Fu said to Wang Yuyan. It would be nice if there were more.

As a fellow author, I applaud you and go for it! ! ! You can also take a look at mine when you have time, we are all in the same category!

Author, how many more chapters can you update? If I don't expect you to give me a glass of milk on the fifth watch, you should at least give me a loli on the third watch.

The first volume of the eunuch is terrible to finish.

Wang Fuchen was not absolutely loyal to the Qing Dynasty. He was still Wu Sangui's old subordinate. I feel that I should try to recruit this kind of fierce general as much as possible. It would be a pity to die.

It's really not very well written, so just take a look.