I Cultivate Immortality in a Wuxia World

The author seems to have some misunderstanding about the state apparatus in the martial arts world. Killing an emperor is so easy... Look at the skill sets Jin Yong gave to the enemy states surrounding the Northern Song Dynasty. Even the Dali Kingdom, caught in the middle of a three-way power struggle, had its own ancestral martial arts techniques.

A cultivator felt that his Taoist nickname was Tongtian, so he lost interest in reading it.

The author's direction is off. What does a cultivator need the Wind God Leg technique for? Your pursuit should be using formations and spells to fly and dive into the earth, okay? This doesn't fit the system's setting. The Wind God Leg technique might be okay in martial arts, but it's not even in the same league in cultivation. We're looking at cultivators; please don't confuse the primary and secondary points.

Taoist cultivators dare to use the Taoist name "Tongtian" (通天)? Are they planning to establish the Jie Sect?

It's ridiculous. The protagonist transmigrates into a Taoist priest, and awakens a system while worshipping the Three Pure Ones—a cultivation system, no less! Doesn't he have any reverence for this? He immediately gives himself the Taoist name Tongtian.

In Chapter Two he was still kneeling before the Three Pure Ones, and in Chapter Twelve he's already calling himself "Tongtian"? What kind of crazy move is this?

Honestly, martial arts and cultivation novels don't necessarily have to revolve around other people's plots. You've already got the cultivation techniques, so cultivate to a certain level before exploiting them. My personal feeling is that the author is using the cultivation theme to create unnecessary drama, which feels awkward, like all the gods are descending to exploit you.

I initially thought the first two chapters would be a decent read, but the more I read, the worse it became. The characters are overly cautious with small tasks, and when faced with minor troubles, they have endless internal monologues that don't actually advance the plot.

This novel has a novel theme, but there's a reason it's not popular. The abbot had no idea that Xiao Feng was Xiao Yuanshan's son; otherwise, he would have killed him long ago, and there wouldn't have been any attention paid to Qiao Feng in the story.

After looking at the post, I can see that the later posts are all from amazing people. I quit right after Chapter 7! Point of contention 1: Huang Shang spent decades studying the Daoist Canon before writing the Nine Yin Manual, while this guy just looked at a few ordinary cultivation manuals and came up with a cultivation technique for immortality. Amazing!