The Strongest Thresh in Another World

How can I put it... The setting is okay, and Goldfinger is okay, but I feel that your plot progress is a bit slow, and you always use one or two chapters to describe other people and put the protagonist aside, which feels very awkward. I wonder if you have read too much physical literature, and always want to write long paragraphs of descriptions of supporting characters that have nothing to do with the protagonist. I can't say that. It just gives people the feeling that skipping a chapter does not affect the reading at all.

What can I say, the book is okay, go ahead, I stopped reading it when I saw it on the shelves. The main reason is that the protagonist is so miserable, too miserable, and there is something wrong with the idea. I think an ordinary person, a lazy ordinary person, shouldn't grow up in the wilderness. Anyway, there are so many so-called monsters, but this can be excused by the author asking for leave to advance. However, it is outrageous for the protagonist to be bled. . . And there is a soul lamp in the back to help absorb spiritual power. Why doesn't the spirit stone soul in front absorb it?? But, Thresh, as a soul harvester, why are you running around the dead? Is the rice field over there more fragrant? That's outrageous

I think it looks okay, but why is there a little repetition at the end of some chapters and at the beginning of the next chapter?

Testing the poison, how should I put it, I have read more than 80 chapters, and I am getting more and more annoying every time. There are still three girls, one is lame, one is blind, and one is stupid. The father of one of the sisters sacrificed the protagonist and drained the protagonist's blood to cultivate the sisters. I can't stand it anymore. I am blindly guessing the harem in the later stage. You can watch it if you have high poison resistance.

Everything is good, except that the protagonist can't understand anything and is a bit annoying. He has no memory when he goes through it, can't understand the words, can't read the words, and then he keeps drifting with the crowd. He does whatever others ask him to do, and sells him when others sell him. . .

How should I put it? The author wrote a mutilated version of the warden, that is, he is not passive. It is very rubbish and makes me feel depressed.

From Chapter 8 to Chapter 32 (only seen here), there are bits and pieces related to the protagonist - being sold, eating food, rescuing others, eating food to upgrade

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 9. I wanted to say something, but, eh, goodbye. I hope it will get better and better.

By the way, if you have time, I hope you can revise the previous articles little by little, because in this way, at least your book will still have something. You should listen to the readers' suggestions and change it when you first buy it. Now for your book, the biggest problem is that your previous articles may drive away a large number of readers, and they may not be able to read your subsequent articles. So the suggestion is that you can revise the previous articles in your free time when it does not interfere with the main update. , The main thing is to revise my thoughts, deal with some interpersonal relationships, not to show me so many indecisive scenes, and also to remove some relatively unreasonable things.

Everything else about Chapter 70 is fine. But did you check it after you finished writing it? There are too many bad sentences. Listening to the book is okay, the past is gone, but when I read it, I still don't know what it means after reading it several times, and I have to sort out the sentences myself, which makes my brain hurt 😡