The Strongest Thresh in Another World

What can I say, the book is okay, go ahead, I stopped reading it when I saw it on the shelves. The main reason is that the protagonist is so miserable, too miserable, and there is something wrong with the idea. I think an ordinary person, a lazy ordinary person, shouldn't grow up in the wilderness. Anyway, there are so many so-called monsters, but this can be excused by the author asking for leave to advance. However, it is outrageous for the protagonist to be bled. . . And there is a soul lamp in the back to help absorb spiritual power. Why doesn't the spirit stone soul in front absorb it? ? But, Thresh, as a soul harvester, why are you running around the dead? Is the rice field over there more fragrant? That's outrageous

How can I put it... The setting is okay, and Goldfinger is okay, but I feel that your plot progress is a bit slow, and you always use one or two chapters to describe other people and put the protagonist aside, which feels very awkward. I wonder if you have read too much physical literature, and always want to write long paragraphs of descriptions of supporting characters that have nothing to do with the protagonist. I can't say that. It just gives people the feeling that skipping a chapter does not affect the reading at all.

I think it looks okay, but why is there a little repetition at the end of some chapters and at the beginning of the next chapter?

Everything is good, except that the protagonist can't understand anything and is a bit annoying. He has no memory when he goes through it, can't understand the words, can't read the words, and then he keeps drifting with the crowd. He does whatever others ask him to do, and sells him when others sell him. . .

Testing the poison, how should I put it, I have read more than 80 chapters, and I am getting more and more annoying every time. There are still three girls, one is lame, one is blind, and one is stupid. The father of one of the sisters sacrificed the protagonist and drained the protagonist's blood to cultivate the sisters. I can't stand it anymore. I am blindly guessing the harem in the later stage. You can watch it if you have high poison resistance.

From Chapter 8 to Chapter 32 (only seen here), there are bits and pieces related to the protagonist - being sold, eating food, rescuing others, eating food to upgrade

How should I put it? The author wrote a mutilated version of the warden, that is, he is not passive. It is very rubbish and makes me feel depressed.

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 9. I wanted to say something, but, eh, goodbye. I hope it will get better and better.

Author, the protagonist you wrote is too indecisive, not like a man.

By the way, if you have time, I hope you can revise the previous articles little by little, because in this way, at least your book will still have something. You should listen to the readers' suggestions and change it when you first buy it. Now for your book, the biggest problem is that your previous articles may drive away a large number of readers, and they may not be able to read your subsequent articles. So the suggestion is that you can revise the previous articles in your free time when it does not interfere with the main update. , The main thing is to revise my thoughts, deal with some interpersonal relationships, not to show me so many indecisive scenes, and also to remove some relatively unreasonable things.

How can I put it this way? This book cannot be said to be bad or good. What is good about it is that it is true. It depicts the situation of an ordinary person on the journey very realistically. The real protagonist is a bit miserable. The bad thing is that it's too bland, and there's no excitement in a bland battle with Dasha! The article is not concise enough, and there is a lot of nonsense. I understand that the author wants to explain the setting clearly, but instead it gives people the feeling of being shrouded in clouds and mountains, and it is a bit pretentious. I couldn't stand it when I read Chapter 66. The protagonist wants to save the Zhou Chi sisters together. It's not that it's wrong, it can't be said that it's not good, it's just a bit estranged! In fact, I had guessed it after laying the groundwork for so long. I just had the feeling that it would be better to leave it alone, but it turned out to be saved. The protagonists of online novels nowadays rarely have such a hesitant "good guy" character! Most of them are just straight-up literary characters who kill time and kill decisively and do evil. Your character design needs to be scrutinized, but your plot is too bland to be scrutinized!

Everything else about Chapter 70 is fine. But did you check it after you finished writing it? There are too many bad sentences. Listening to the book is okay, the past is gone, but when I read it, I still don't know what it means after reading it several times, and I have to sort out the sentences myself, which makes my brain hurt 😡

It's actually pretty good, but there are a few fatal problems. For example, the depressing scenes like the apocalypse are basically set off by other characters. To put it bluntly, it's just the description of the environment. The protagonist only expresses some emotion from time to time. The original intention is to highlight the feeling of despair, but it has the opposite effect. Furthermore, the protagonist's role is too small, which does not mean that he appears less, but that he participates in too few storylines. In addition, the sense of depression should be heavy, but the plot is too protracted, which greatly eliminates the tension. It is like everyone knows that they will die, but they don't feel so scared when they don't think about death. More tragic stories involving the protagonist should be added to emphasize this sense of despair. Of course, I am not a writer, I am just talking about my feelings while reading the book.

Killing swordsmanship, attack speed acceleration, madman exhilaration, endless

The idea is still okay, and the subject matter is good, but... Dare the protagonist's role be lowered? I vomited. I feel that the protagonist will become a supporting role.

Author, are you investing inward or contracted by a webmaster?

It's mind-blowing. The armor added by Thresh is not resistant to magic! ! Still very crispy

Baiyun Jiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)