Survival Title Master

I read about 40 chapters. I feel that the biggest problem is that the emotional scenes are rather blunt, so I suggest you write them less or not at all. Also, this level-clearance reward is a bit funny. When the second dungeon reward is given, it is really a bit smart.

The subject matter is good, but the more I read it, the more awkward it becomes. I don't know if it's a problem with the writing style or something else.

The second world can't understand it! Want to trust a mentally challenged person? Their spirits are too fragile, and the more emotional people are, the more likely they are to go to extremes!

Pay attention to the paragraphs, it is too tiring to read.

The protagonist is a eunuch, which does not fit the image readers have in mind. He didn't sleep with the heroine for a year. It's so fake, and the character of the protagonist is also hypocritical. In the zombie world, in order to survive, if you encounter unstable factors, just kill them directly, and you can also play tricks to test people's hearts. I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist does not fit the character of most people who want to kill decisively and it looks very awkward.

If you take a woman with you so quickly, is there a big stallion in the harem behind you?

😵Read a little bit. Arriving at a new place and a new mission without any transition is too abrupt. It's a bit confusing to watch

What is this book about? Constantly trying to survive? The protagonist survives on the Titanic, and then suddenly goes to the wilderness to survive. The rainstorm is not over yet and the scene suddenly cuts to the hunger platform. This transition is so unexpected that it feels like several chapters are missing in the middle, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

What should I say, I feel like this book might be banned. But I think it's still ok.

Sorry, the chapter posted today has become a draft. It was my mistake, I'm really sorry. Feel sorry

It is written like a running account, one plot after another is not connected at all, and the skills rewarded are of no use.

I have been busy changing jobs recently, so I will temporarily stop updating for a few days. Sorry to everyone who has been supporting me! Updates will be resumed after I move to another construction site.

Author, the number of words in one paragraph is a bit too much

It just looks weird. It doesn't feel smooth enough. I can feel that the picture is incoherent. The transitions are also stiff. The subject matter is great. Let's continue reading.

The twist is abrupt and inexplicable, leaving me looking confused.

Don't speak politely and be civilized between you and me.

Brother, I beg you, please do it in sections, and also correct some typos. Is this typo a problem with your pronunciation or something else?

Can you recommend any good movie games? Maybe I can write it into a novel