Quick Transmigration: Ascending to the Pinnacle of the World

"Heavens! I, the Venerable One, have endured countless hardships and overcome numerous difficulties, devoting myself to cultivation for over 30 years, finally glimpsing the Heavenly Dao and forming my Golden Core! I have embarked on the long-awaited Path of the Golden Core! Why did you destroy my dantian and shatter my Golden Core?!" *Slap!* The nurse next to me slapped me. "Stop talking nonsense!

I think the content is quite good, the concept is good and quite attractive, but the writing style needs improvement. Many parts are awkward; although I understand the meaning, it's still very difficult to read. Keep it up! The more I read, the more I felt the female lead's personality seemed to be going downhill? She seemed a bit arrogant, both for better or worse reasons. Especially after finishing the Mermaid chapter, I felt a little out of place.

Support the author! Are you still writing? Basically, I can't stand reading novels where the protagonist doesn't read guides; they're really disgusting! I just can't stand them! So many ancient and modern romance novels are just female-oriented where the protagonist finds a man and they just fall in love and nothing else happens! It's really speechless. I've read several quick transmigration/powerful Chinese novels where the protagonist doesn't even talk about love, and they're quite good!

Well, overall it's okay, but some parts are not described very clearly, leaving me confused. Please, author, don't cut the word count! Also, the mother's summary felt illogical; the cause-and-effect relationships weren't rigorous, making it easy to jump around in the story. Don't you know why the female lead suddenly recognizes her son and daughter? There's no explanation, leaving it to the reader's imagination. 😥😥 Anyway, author, keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง The writing style is still okay.

The first few chapters were great, with wild and entertaining twists! But things got a bit toxic after that!

Author, haven't you noticed the problems with your writing? There are basically no modal particles like "" and "" in your sentences, making your writing very difficult to read.

I absolutely love the author! They wrote such a wonderful book! Ahhh!

How come such a great book has so little exposure? This is truly a masterpiece! No romance, no strategy, and the female protagonist's duties in each world are all captivating.

Putting everything else aside, I just want the updates to be faster; I've been saving them up to watch! 😭

Dear [Name], sometimes I'm really exasperated with myself. My self-control is so poor. When I'm not working, I practically spend all day on my phone. I always think about studying, but a long time ago, I would cry whenever I tried to read or study.