Quick Transmigration: Ascending to the Pinnacle of the World

Oh my God! I have gone through untold hardships, overcame numerous difficulties, devoted myself to practicing Taoism for more than 30 years, and finally gained a glimpse of the way of heaven and formed the golden elixir! Entering the coveted golden elixir avenue! Why did you destroy my Dantian and shatter my Golden Dan! "Pah! The little nurse next to me patted me and said, "Stop talking so much! Isn't it just a gallstone? As for that? In the obstetrics and gynecology department on the second floor, there is a girl who is so talented that she became a Nascent Soul at the age of 16! Why don't you let us take it as usual? So there are several distraction periods in the mental hospital next door, there is an out-of-body state in the underground morgue, and there are two integration periods in the hotel opposite. No, there is a new Mahayana master on the second floor who has just survived the thunder tribulation~🤓

I think the content is quite good, but the concept is good and attractive, but the writing still needs work. Many places are not smooth. Although I know what I want to express, it is always awkward when I read it. Come on The more you read later, the more you feel that the heroine's character seems to be a bit broken? I feel a little arrogant, good or bad, especially when I just read the chapter "The Perfect Mermaid" and I feel a little uncomfortable.

Support the author! Still writing? Basically, if you don't read the guide, it's pretty disgusting! I can't stand it anyway! There are many ancient and modern texts about women finding a man and then falling in love and nothing happens! I'm really speechless. I've read several fast-traveling Chinese novels, and the protagonists don't fall in love. They're quite interesting!

How should I put it? Generally speaking, it is OK. However, the description in some places is not very clear, which made me confused. I beg the author not to reduce the number of words. Also, my mother's summary felt very irrational, the cause and effect relationship was not strict, and it was easy to escape from it. You don't know why the heroine recognizes her son and daughter inexplicably. There is no reason for the readers to imagine 😥😥. Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, the writing is still OK

The first few chapters are great, the way is wild, and the tricks are interesting! It's hard to put an end to the Jianghu cancer after it started!

Author, didn't you find the problem in your writing? There are basically no modal particles such as "" and "" in the sentence, so the article you wrote is very tiring to read.

I love the author so much. He wrote such a beautiful book. Ahhhh.

Why does such a beautiful book have so little exposure? This is a real boss book. If you don't fall in love, you won't have a guide. The duties of the heroine in each world are very interesting.

If nothing else, I just want it to be updated as soon as possible. I'm saving up to read it 😭

Dad, sometimes I really give in to myself. My self-control is so poor. When I'm not at work, I just play with my phone all day long. I always want to read. But a long time ago, I cried while reading and studying. At that time, when I was in the key class of junior high school, I was in poor health because I was always absent from class. In the later period, I was always afraid of being at the bottom of the exam because I always had to be ranked. At that time, I cried while reading when I was stressed. Then I took medicine, which made me look very fat, and I only got a few points in the physical education test. Later, when I was studying, I would always think of the past, and I would often cry or be very anxious. Now it is difficult for me to make up my mind to learn anything. Now I am in my twenties, a post-1995 generation.