I'm a Stitch Monster

The story is good, but it's a pity that I don't like the author's random use of the First Emperor. How can you insult an emperor through the ages?

Although it has not been exposed, I read it when you wrote more than ten chapters. It is still on the bookshelf. This time, he also read it in a certain book. After seeing your book, he remembered it and came back. I personally suggest that you describe more interesting uses of Goldfinger. Of course, you can't be like me, who said that the first 20 chapters are all about introducing things, and then asked me about the plot Your writing style must be better than mine. The voice typing I used was full of typos and punctuation marks everywhere. But except for the scene at the beginning where the eunuch is sewn into a guy, which is eye-catching, I rewatched it again and found that the subsequent plot is indeed more ordinary, which is why some book friends said whether the characters have been replaced. Our book is very similar to Goldfinger. I just happened to focus on the outline of the ghost. Some of the settings I made before are very suitable for this book. I won't list them one by one. Just tell me the direction! In this weird world, the monsters you set are a bit normal. The Cthulhu-style monsters are scarier than those monsters and monsters, and their abilities are more bizarre. After all, how can a suture monster be normal? Let's take the first stone man as an example, add some flesh and blood, and let It can devour corpses, bond more stones to form a shell, and control it as a core inside. It is more impressive than a simple earth element stone man. The shell shatters the flesh and blood inside, turning it into a liquid that melts flesh and becomes very decaying, and spurts out directly like a gas tank. Another example, who stipulates that stone people with earth elements must be extremely hard? They cannot directly cover each other like quicksand, attract each other, forcefully squeeze the other side, condense into stone, fix the other side, and make it unable to move. Why can't it turn into invisible dust and enter the other side's eyes, ears, nose, and body to cause destruction. The above are just examples, countless eyeballs are sewn together, brains are sewn together with books, weird things are sewn together with houses. A dry and dead scarecrow, plus some vibrant items. The powerful parts of different weird bodies are sewn together. Countless bugs stitched together. Even. You can use the future as the core and sew a group of ants on it. It's time for me to go to bed. After all, I have to go to work at 2 o'clock. I just want to give you some advice. If you don't like it, don't complain.

I can't figure out what the world is like in the author's description. There's a sect of cultivators, a woman in military uniform, and then there's a shooting

The author's creative subject matter is worthy of recognition, but the writing style is too stretched. Keep up the good work 😡😡😡

The story is interesting, but the setting feels inconsistent. It can be said that the current situation outside the city is difficult to survive, which means that there are no more than ten people left. The fields outside the city should be considered completely deserted, and trade is basically out of the question. However, inside the city, there is a peaceful scene, and occasionally some weirdness can adjust the feeling of life.

There are many places where I was a bit confused. I'd better read another book. Come on, author. I hope your writing will improve next time I read your book.

Golden Chapter Three, with a confused look on his face. Gone.

The realm is so chaotic. The son of an ordinary businessman became a golden elixir in his teens.

When I look at it, I feel like I have changed the author. The writing style doesn't look like it was written by the same person.

The key parts are written vaguely and intermittently. There are many places that have been covered in one go. There are also some inconsistencies.

If you take a different approach, this subject matter is simply heavenly! ! ! There is no outline, and there is no mention of sutures in the content.

The title and introduction of the book are pretty good, and the first three chapters are pretty good too. But after the fantasy world, it felt boring.

The creativity is very good, but the power system is a bit confusing without any introduction.

Why do my readers feel intermittent😵😵

The subject matter may be too confusing.

The plot is basically incomprehensible once you get to the First Emperor. How on earth did you get such fighting power?

It's good to have a father as the protagonist and a golden finger

The subject matter is good, but the writing is messy and toxic.