The Unparalleled Swordsman Who Emerged from Ashina Castle

The pace has been deliberately slowed down recently. It's not tense, exciting or even interesting. It is recommended that the author dare to write original plots. The protagonist has gained such a powerful power that he can fight everywhere to start the Warring States Period. He can also take the title of God of War and show off everywhere. There are plenty of plots to write, and there is no need to limit himself to playing on the map of Sekiro until death. Frankly speaking, with that little plot, if you play another two hundred chapters at most, there will be nothing left to write. Moreover, the overall plot is anticlimactic and uninteresting.

I read more than a hundred chapters in one go, and I have to say that the author has put in a lot of effort. The various background supplements have been done very well, far surpassing other Sekiro fanfics. I hope this quality can be maintained, and I hope that the following stories can also put in enough effort. Good stories are not afraid of not subscribing! Tickets are presented |｡･㉨･)っ♡

As a new writer, the author's writing is quite good, but there is a problem with the subject matter. Sekiro is a niche game with global sales of only over 5 million, and the maximum number in China is 800,000, and only more than 60% have passed it. How many of them read novels, and how many read the original version. When writing fan fiction, they rely on big IP to attract readers. The author's choice of Sekiro may not be as well-known as Shanghai Fortress. I have never seen anyone else play it except me. It is better to just write the history of the development of bandits, called From Bandits Ruled Japan, in which the character setting remains the same, the storyline remains the same, the names are changed, the focus is on characterization, and the protagonist is set as a time-travelling newcomer who does not know the plot, relies on intelligence, abandons the fan setting, and writes a story of his own. Moreover, if this book becomes popular, it will only inspire Sekiro, but will not feed back the Book If it contradicts the author's opinion, the above opinions are pure fart.

Wow, I've wanted to read a Sekiro fanfic for a long time, but I've never found a good one. The writing in this one really hits the mark for me, and I give you three recommendation votes. To mention some of my own opinions, Ashina Castle is very rich in iron ore, so much that it can be mined at will on the surface, and there are knives like Kakimaru with indestructible properties. His forging can actually add a special setting, and then there are people like Robert. In fact, there are many things that can be evolved in armaments. If Japan's armaments in that period could always have a heavily armored army, they could go out to grab territory and population. The population of Ashina is too small. If it wants to develop, it must be a way to increase the population. The world of Sekiro is different from the ordinary world. I hope to see the dreamy side, Orochi, and the monkey army with superb swordsmanship. I don't know if the author wants to write that the whole world is different or just Ashina is special, or I hope to see a wonderful story. Come on! ! ! Want more refinement. . .

I finished reading it in two days, and I was holding back to evaluate it. The writing is still good, and it is worth reading. Starting from Hades, I don't know if it's a self-increasing world view or something. Anyway, I feel that the style has changed suddenly, and it has taken a sharp turn. The theme is unclear and inexplicable. Although the protagonist has achieved ghosts and gods, he has been forced to decline. The author feels sleepwalking. Suspected of mixing word numbers

Why do you feel like it's a little watery after it's put on the shelves? Or maybe the author doesn't know what to write? Go out and lead troops to fight, with conquest as the main line and sword practice as the side line. It would be great to experience the local customs and various supernatural events along the way. There is also the heroine, the female ninja. Either accept her or write less about her. Who can bear it if a seed is buried in the soil and never sprouts.

There are very few Sekiro novels. Come on, author.

I felt in the early stage that it would be a masterpiece, but I was also wondering why there were so few people. When I saw it on the shelves, I didn't even think about the full version. Later on, it became more and more popular. What I wanted to see was the protagonist killing monsters and upgrading, fighting for hegemony during the Warring States period, or practicing sword practice on a daily basis. Why Out of the Underworld? It's really hard to watch Monkey. It's too watery. Even deleting 2,000 words from one chapter doesn't affect the viewing. Really, this is a book where the protagonist kills the inner palace, kills snakes, watches Tokugawa Ieyasu, kills dragons, and can score 85 points all the way. What a pity.

When I had nothing to do, I took a look at the discussion forum and saw all the monsters and monsters that shocked me for a whole year

The protagonist suddenly turned Sekiro into a Nioh.

I have watched it for so long, and I can only say that it started to change its flavor starting from Vajra Temple. I couldn't watch it and it was a bit boring. . . I don't know if it's just me. To be honest, Kongangji Temple is okay and quite satisfactory, but it's not okay when that woman appears in the back.

The 500 comment limit is really a scam. Can I get a refund if I write poorly later?

Chinese rural fighting

It is basically invented to release internal force, so I won't read it. Especially since internal force can be released in various forms, the most important thing is that anyone can learn it. This is a bit unacceptable. I originally wanted to keep it up at the beginning. The first part was pretty good, but I didn't expect it to be finished. The plot at the end was not ideal either. Let's take a look and check it out. Hmm, hmm, the book is finished.

Tsk, how to say it? As a Sekiro fanfic, it's pretty good, but it's a bit far from my expectations. I thought the protagonist would lead the eldest brother and the second brother to use the name of Ashina as a springboard to reform the Warring States period and then fight for world domination. But it seems that the author is a little bit happy with Ashina's three-acre land. In fact, looking at the story of Sekiro, if it weren't for the current hands, In a nutshell, 500,000 words would be enough to write "War of the Thieves", and 200,000 more words to sort out Ashina would be about the same. I would also be able to pave the way for the Warring States Demonic Change, which would almost reach the current number of words. As a result, it is now 1.1 Million words, and it is still spinning in Ashina. I can only say that the "water" of this novel is too deep, and I can't grasp it.

It's really getting a little wet now... The key is that the underworld collapsed a lot after that. It's the same as what a big boss said. It's a good idea to follow the original plot and change it until you kill the BOSS or something. If you want to develop, you can also compare it to Japanese dramas like Daou. Just very comfortable. But now, there is really some water and some mystery.

The author thinks that chickens can only eat grains, which is done for convenience in modern times, and chickens that eat feeds and grains get fat quickly. The chickens raised in the rural areas of my hometown are treated as garbage chickens, processing vegetable leaves, kitchen waste and other things. Chickens have really good appetites. As long as they can eat spicy, salty, bitter and smelly things, they will eat them all for you to see.

It looked okay from the beginning, but when I saw Xianfeng Temple, I felt that the protagonist was crazy. He killed all the unsuspecting monks in Xianfeng Temple without caring about anything. Then he let the mercenaries play some kind of cannibalism game. After playing, he made up some lies and killed the last survivor. This is completely crazy. It can be said that he is murderous and kills for the sake of killing.

I feel that the bigger the plate, the more the plot collapses. When I write about the underworld, it feels a bit broken. Then there will be a rhythm of a pig's foot team going to the underworld to save another one after death. It was obviously well written before but it has to be brought into Chinese mythology. Forget about writing about mythology. The timeline is still a mess. The history of the dynasties does not match up. It is obvious that you can kill the last BOSS according to the game plot and then stay in seclusion for hundreds of years to show off in modern society

My rating is Send

My personal thoughts, I made it up. I think the reflex arc and balanced type in the first chapter are too weird and don't match up with those two. I made up two names for reference only. The reflex arc is renamed Shen Zhaofeng, and the balanced type is renamed Zhou Tianheng. Of course, this is just a reference. Someone may have better ideas?

The wolf in my heart

Such a beautiful book, why haven't I recommended it?

The epic-level strengthened Isshin can directly kill the opponent's general with a dragon flash, and then randomly fire a few dragon flashes at the enemy's position, leaving half of the people to flee back to promote propaganda. The shogunate will never dare to attack again. Next, they can start competitions such as the world's best martial arts club or preach to the entire island country to artificially start the resurrection of the age of the gods. Unfortunately, these are meaningless. You should update more 😒

I'm very curious where the author saw the names of these generals.

It's too watery. You can give it up when you see Xianfeng Temple. It feels like you have completely changed into a different person. You are forcibly suppressing your intelligence and seeking death indefinitely.

There are really very few good Sekiro fan books, let alone good books with over a million words.

Good-looking, but too little and slow to update

When will Zhang and Ba come out?

Wait until the monkey episode is over before subscribing. I feel like this episode is not good to watch.