Dragon Ball Saiyan Arrival

This plot is broken. Just go to a planet and give a spiritual power fruit to others. The Holy Mother's Heart is overflowing. According to your previous settings, a spiritual power fruit has a combat power of 300 to 500,000. This thing can be given away to people casually. I have a brain. I only met once. I don't even know the other person's character, so I just give this thing away casually.

I stopped watching when I saw the protagonist's method of giving Qi to the alien king and giving him the spirit tree fruit. This part was too poisonous. The king first wanted the protagonist and then wanted to hand him over to the people of Frieza's Legion. It's okay if you didn't kill him, but he ended up teaching him to practice. According to the setting of the book I saw, the fruit of the spirit tree was to increase combat power by 500,000, and was given to him. The key is that the gods of the earth taught the "protagonist" the Qi cultivation methods and realm before. How did the protagonist treat the gods, and the cat fairy too. I really don't understand this logic. "Repay kindness with hatred, repay kindness with kindness" Anyway, I gave up after seeing this.

It's much better than those novels that always rely on Dragon Ball. The only feature is that you don't accompany Goku through the original plot. If you accompany Goku through the original plot, is there any need for the protagonist to appear?

Before the protagonist traveled through time, he was not a kung fu master, nor had he practiced ancestral martial arts. If he did not learn Dragon Ball martial arts, he would be like a strong man. The highlight of Dragon Ball fandom is the process of the protagonist practicing martial arts to increase his energy, and then killing monsters and vegetables to bully various masters in the original work.

Leila

Your early combat power of more than 1,000 was weighed down by 1,000 pounds of clothes? ? ? ? According to your statement, a Saiyan with more than 1,000 combat power on Planet Vegeta can even crush something with a mass of 50kg? What NC plot? It's all a joke that one hundred thousand pounds can create something new, but I didn't expect that there is someone who is more like a dragon and a phoenix.

The front is barely there, but the appearance of Laila is a little bit different. Among Dragon Ball fans, the most fearful thing is using the blood and body tissue of the protagonist to copy or create people. . . There are also many authors who directly use the Namekian Dragon Balls to make wishes for their own separated body tissues, etc. They cannot create life without their own permission. It's really a bit poisonous for you to use blood to create humans.

I skipped fighting Frieza, the author is really awesome. Why would you write Dragon Ball if you don't write fighting scenes in Dragon Ball? Give up instantly.

Custer

What the hell is Laila? Regardless of age, according to the plot, he is a god, right? That's it? Even writing it as green tea would be better than nymphomaniac. In my countless years of experience as a Kaioshin, I have never seen any demons or monsters. Not to mention being together for 8 years, even if I want to have a relationship between a man and a woman for 80,000 years, it will be difficult. He looked at me with an embarrassed look on his face and left with poisonous hair.

Am I the only one who finds the writing awkward? Looks weird

Support, support, everyone who writes Dragon Ball supports it

To be honest, just a few chapters into the game, I grew to more than 5 million by eating the fruits of the spirit tree. Although the fruits of the spirit tree are eaten by the gods, they are just fruits, otherwise the level of Kaiōshin and others would not be above the second level. It is impossible to keep increasing. Is it really good for you to just keep eating and increase the combat power?

Is this a Dragon Ball fanfic? The combat power is set so high in the first few chapters, and then the fight against Frieza is skipped. The next few chapters are dry and watery, and a few chapters jump to Majin Buu, which is unbearable.

Bunny Girl

It's short and weak, pretending to be mysterious, and inexplicable. Without explaining one thing clearly, it jumps to the next. Nonsense

The effect of the fruit of the spiritual tree is not that great. Dales had eaten it before he came to the earth. He also planted trees on the earth because the earth's environment was good. Although the fruit of the earth greatly increased his combat power, his combat power was not even close to a million.

This is a bad author, his sentences are not fluent, what is he writing? It looks really awkward, I have to complain about it

It's boring. You are invincible before the enemy appears. So is there any need to write? It can be finished with just one period.