The Self-Cultivation of the Female God and the Male God

I read the first chapter. The writing is great and I feel deeply involved. I can learn from you.

I want to talk to Tudou Tudou should be one of the best writers on female supremacy. (Personal opinion, I have visited many places). Everyone has a world of their own in their hearts, and the author is actually someone who is willing to share (no matter what the original intention is). When your own world becomes work, this is not a beautiful thing. The best writer of Tudou is the real man. (Famous work), I often see people discussing about real men in the comment section of other apps about female supremacy. There is no doubt that this book is very successful, especially when a good book about female supremacy has not been published for several years, and there are not even a few books that can be completed normally. After all, it is still too niche. Why do I say this? I still feel that it is a pity that Tudou does not write it. After all, there will be no more books to read after the person who carries the weight does not write it. The writing of this book is not very good. It can be seen that Tudou's writing is very perfunctory, which is understandable. After all, niche people cannot be full-timers. The success of a real man is inseparable from the energy and passion that Tudou puts into it. This leads to the conclusion that it is not that the writing is not good, but that it is not written well at all. It is a part-time job, an endless loop, very helpless, and a pity. The only way I can think of is to add some other elements, no longer so niche. Tudou must have had this idea a long time ago, so I changed the name (Girls in this world are super fierce), but it failed. The first and middle stages were good, but the hot spring suddenly collapsed, and the characters were all in a mess. I can't help it, it's like someone else has written it. The reason I can think of is that the performance of this book is far from what Tudou expected at the beginning, so I suddenly didn't want to write it. Failure is a failure, but I think the idea is correct. The reason for the failure is not that the combination of female heroes and cultivating immortals is unattractive, but that Tudou has never written a book on cultivating immortals at all, right? It's my first time, so failure is normal. Also, the title of the book limits me to death. In short, I think that if Tudou is serious, he should be able to do great things again. I don't want to persuade Tudou to come back and continue fighting. I don't have the confidence to do so, but I just feel that it is a pity and want to say something. Do you want to try again? Invest some time, some energy, some passion and give it a try, maybe? Don't you feel sorry for yourself at all?

Can this book end? Since you and Su are like this, are you still hanging on to Su? Do potatoes just hang like this and keep sinking into the water? This will only make this book less interesting, right? Taking a long-term view, the evaluation of the book is very important, so the two of us can just write the next book.

Author: You are about to enter the Pacific Ocean. There are really many plot problems in this book. First of all, it is the character of the male protagonist. Zhang Hao in the previous book was okay and he still had masculinity. However, Shen Xuan in this book feels like a false criticism. He always smiles perfunctorily and passes away. The psychology of the male protagonist Mature and steady, your physical reaction has completely disappeared, and then there is the issue of male and female protagonists. After watching for so long, there is no progress. Occasionally, we have to have some porn to make us enjoy ourselves. I suggest the author here to describe the male protagonist and other characters in a more profound way, and then organize them well. Let's take a look at the plot line. The plot has a bit of ups and downs. I'm really not nitpicking. It's really daily life. There is no progress in daily life. It's so short. It's really uncomfortable. The author can add some psychological language descriptions of serious people (lsp), which can also satisfy us serious people. Jingren (lsp), we only comment on your books because we like them. Author, we understand that you are tired from work, but please don't be so short, sort out the plot first, and it doesn't matter how slow you write. What we value is quality, and we hope that the author can improve it a lot.

This is a feminist novel that was thrown off the shelves after just a few dozen chapters. The reason for the rejection was that it was urban fantasy, but I think the author's previous writing was good. In Tudou's next book, the male protagonist shouldn't change his taste? The male protagonist of every book is carved out of the same mold and we get a bit bored after reading too many of them. Change to a more realistic male protagonist, like this book. The male protagonist is used to living a life of food and mouth. He can't survive on his own, so he goes to catch a rich woman he likes, and then introduces a supporting female character. Logically speaking, readers should hate such a bitch male protagonist. I don't know if it's because of the author's good writing or some other reason, but he doesn't dislike the male protagonist at all. You can take a look at Potato and learn from it. Readers won't mind if I copy it. After all, it was published after writing dozens of chapters, and the author has been running away for many years. I feel like the next book will be too boring if I write it like this. A real man who just started reading Potato would not be able to fall asleep after reading it. The more he read this book, the less motivated he became. It would be a pity to abandon it if it is boring. I haven't read any books recently, and there is no one on women's rights except Tudou. I want to write a book on women's rights. I think I am confident that I can write it well, but I am just too lazy. I am just a salted fish. I'd better wait for Tudou's book.

From the time I started to follow it until now, this book has been discontinued for almost two years.

It's terrible. Updates are interrupted every three days, and the relationship between the characters is also inexplicable. At first, I thought Su Yanqing's private life was messy, so I pushed it off. Later, I found out that it was a misunderstanding, and I still pushed it away. I didn't refuse to live or die. It's really disgusting. It's really disgusting. Three books are so ugly. Otherwise, it will be unfinished or it will be dragged out. It's disgusting.

Looking at it now, I find that it has not improved at all compared to the previous book. It feels like it just relies on all kinds of ink-stained and bad plots and writing.

It's good to read. In fact, I thought the previous book about women's rights cultivating immortality was quite good. I couldn't understand why I gave up that book and started transitioning.

After seeing An Ling's real character, he immediately quit. This author really has a problem with his thinking. Are you writing purely funny articles? If you think so, that's no problem. But is it really?

The first and only fully ordered book, both in terms of plot and personal feelings about the characters, are very full. It is also the most beautiful female novel I have read so far. I don't want to talk about who ends up with whom. I think it will be good as long as the author can give a complete ending instead of a bad ending or a eunuch. At the same time, I would like to thank the author for taking time out of his busy schedule to write a masterpiece.

After reading novels for so long, this novel is the only novel that I have read several times! After that, there are non-player characters and Xiao Cangming's book 🙂

The writing is pretty good (overall, it's pretty good in my personal opinion. There's a long section in the middle where I express my personal opinions, which makes me feel a little tired. The details and the plot need to be adjusted), and the writing style is OK (the article has allowed me to deepen my feelings about the character's image and personality many times. It's OK, but here's a small comment. A small mention: Su Yanqing is fierce and LSP's image explodes in me), it looks very comfortable (it poked my XP and the overall plot), but there are typos and inverted sentences that gave me a bad experience. I know that the author is also a human being, but I also hope that the author can slowly improve. 🙂

After chasing it for so long, I think I still want to say something. In my heart, this book still can't surpass the tomboy one. Some of the scenes of pretending to be slapped in the face were really embarrassing for me, and I wanted to skip it quickly. Anyway, I read the author's book and didn't spend money just to read it. But I have to say that the author really knows how to describe those innocent and lovely female characters. Whether it is Yuehua in the first book or the elder sister in the book of cultivating immortals, the descriptions are really great. Obviously there are not many appearances, but they are very impressive. Please write more scenes about Gu Weixi in this book

This author is really too short. One chapter only lasts eight or nine pages. If this continues, I tell you, the author, you won't be able to finish the book without two thousand chapters. 🔨

I heard there was a eunuch here, so I came here to see if it was true.

The first part is okay, but the more I write later, the more awkward it becomes. I don't even know how to write it, so I'm jumping to read it.

Brought here from the browser. Although this book has been discontinued, it is still the best book written by a woman. There is no other book.

I have been using the 123 Novel Network to read the author Da Da's works for free (mainly because I am a student party and I don't know that I can watch advertisements and "buy for free"). Now I have read the official version. Please forgive me for my incorrect behavior in the past [f n=12]                                                                     But I'm still buying other authors' works for free, otherwise it would be too troublesome 🙂

This book can be said to be far inferior to the author's previous book. The previous book had clearer logic and plot lines, was more attractive, and the writing was pretty good. What is this new book? Do you want to use the routine of low-end assembly line writing for female videos to open up the male video market? Then at least use some caution. Readers also have brains. The author just sat there waiting for the money to come in. He didn't write it carefully at all. The writing style is much worse than the previous one, and everyone suspected that it was written by a gunman. The author listened to my advice: Your behavior is ruining your future. You want to make money but don't work hard. How can such a good thing happen?

One day, the early morning sunlight shone on Shen Xuan's face through the window. Shen Xuan sat up rubbing his eyes. Shen Xuan walked to the living room in his pajamas, opened the refrigerator, took out a carton of milk, poured it into a cup, and drank it all in one gulp. Today was a day off, so he didn't have to go to school. When passing by the sofa, I saw Su Yanqing sitting on the sofa with her knees in her arms and a rabbit doll in her arms, staring attentively at the program on TV. Although Shen Xuan felt something was wrong, he didn't think about it and raised his hand to say hello. "Morning, Mr. Su, what do you want for breakfast?" After the misunderstanding was resolved, Shen Xuan and Su Yanqing were no longer so tense, and their lives returned to their normal routine. Although Mr. Su would still occasionally harass Shen Xuan, Shen was used to it. "Well... Just listen to Brother Shen. Su Su can eat anything." The program on TV was very interesting, but it was a pity that someone's eyes were firmly attracted by the big magnet Shen Xuan. "Oh... Eh!!" Shen Xuan responded first, then turned around in horror after realizing Su Yanqing's last words. After Su Yanqing found out that Shen Xuan was looking at her, she shyly raised the rabbit doll and covered her face. Shen Xuan took out the toast and milk, and after a casual breakfast, he returned to his room, locked the door, took out his cell phone, found Shen Yue's number, and dialed it. "Hey... Sister, do you have time? I have something to ask you... Okay, let's go to the coffee shop we went to before... Okay, see you later." After hanging up the phone, Shen Xuan went to the bathroom and poured a handful of cold water on his face. "There must be something wrong..." Shen Xuan changed his clothes, said hello to Su Yanqing, opened the door and walked out. Su Yanqing only responded after Shen Xuan went out: "I want to come back early..." Unfortunately, the door was already closed and Shen Xuan did not hear it. Su Yanqing patted the rabbit doll's head in annoyance and hugged it again. Without that person, the TV show would be meaningless. Su Yanqing turned off the TV, put the rabbit doll on the sofa, ran around the house barefoot, found the No. 3 Robot that had been repaired by Shen Xuan, and placed the robot in front of her. Su Yanqing sternly patted poor No. 3 With her hand and said, "Brother Shen is mine, can't you take it away?" No. 3'S sensor lit up, turned around and walked away. "Ah! Don't run! Bad boy!" Su Yanqing chased after him again, torturing No. 3 Who was cleaning the room. In the coffee shop, the atmosphere between Shen Xuan and Shen Yue was quite solemn. "... So, Mr. Su is in love?" "This is just my guess, because I can't think of any more reasons why a person's character can become so exaggerated." Shen Yue, opposite Shen Xuan, was dressed like a strong woman today, which was completely different from the usual Shen Yue. "Ah... I understand, forget it, never mind, sister, do you want to go shopping somewhere?" After hearing that Su Yanqing might be in love, Shen Xuan was inexplicably a little bit disgusted. "Of course, being able to date such an outstanding younger brother is really something I wish for." "…" How come even my sister has become so exaggerated. In the evening, when Shen Xuan returned home, the first thing he saw was Su Yanqing lying in front of the door, holding cleaning robot No. 3 In his hand. When their eyes met, Su Yanqing's face slowly turned red. She let go of No. 3, Grabbed the rabbit doll beside her and ran to her room to close the door, knocking her leg in her rush. Shen Xuan cooked the meal and walked to Su Yanqing's door and knocked on the door, "Mr. Su, have you eaten?" Su Yanqing opened the door and walked out. She was limping with bruises on her legs and tears in her eyes.                                                                                                                        <br       After dinner, Shen Xuan picked up Su Yanqing while she was not paying attention, and walked towards Su Yanqing's bedroom in a princess hug. Su Yanqing exclaimed and hid her face in Shen Xuan's arms. After settling down Su Yanqing, Shen Xuan walked towards his bedroom, but the corner of his clothes was pulled. Su Yanqing put the quilt over her head, but her hands stretched out from the quilt, and a dull and sweet voice came from under the quilt. "... Sleep together... Can we..." Shen Xuan was stunned for a moment and couldn't help but laugh, "Yeah." ... Late at night, Su Yanqing's steady breathing came from my side, but I couldn't sleep no matter what. I thought about what happened today, looked down at the little Mr. Su curled up in my arms, and felt a little healed. The shy Su Yanqing, the well-behaved Su Yanqing, the Su Yanqing who is strong even if she knocks her legs, the Su Yanqing who relies on me. If you tell me, no one will believe it, right? That domineering and willful Su Yanqing turned out to be like this. How could my Mr. Su be so cute? With my thoughts flying far away, I fell asleep unconsciously. The next morning, the sun was gone and I was woken up by the pain on my face. As soon as he opened his eyes, he saw Su Yanqing pinching his face with a half-smile, but he actually held Su Yanqing tightly in his arms. "Xiao Xuanxuan, can you explain why you are in my bed?" "..." I was stunned and didn't know how to explain. Su Yanqing turned back to the domineering and willful Su Yanqing. Looking at Shen Xuan's dull face, her expression softened. "Ah, forget it, I won't hold you responsible, but you will give me a massage tonight." I nodded stupidly, but still didn't let go of my hand. Su Yanqing gently took my hand away, stood up and walked towards the living room, "Really, do you like me so much?" I looked at Mr. Su's tall back, and my thoughts flew away again.       ， However, Mr. Su is not bad at all. End. ps: At the end of writing, I suddenly remembered the light novels I read in the past two days, so I tried to use the first person. As expected, I am only suitable for reading and writing, so please be merciful...

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Full booking is completely guaranteed, and occasional rewards can also be considered 😁 I have been advertising, and I have done it a lot, so I will summarize my best method (not complete statistics, if it does not change in the future, I can earn 300+ real points by watching advertisements every day, but I am a night owl): Start at 0 o'clock every day, any book There is an obvious advertisement at the end of the chapter (there are also free chapters) and an advertisement after clicking on the "red envelope". The two advertisements at the end of the chapter can be refreshed about seven or eight times by changing chapters, which is at least 150+ Then there is the subscription. If you subscribe at the beginning of every day, for about the first five or six chapters, after subscribing, a coin-clicking graphic will appear in the lower part of the center. After clicking, there will be advertisements. There are already 200+ here. Then there is reading. Generally, two or three times in half an hour of reading, a coin-clicking pattern will appear in the lower part of the center. After clicking, there will be advertisements. (It is best to return to the bookshelf after reading two or three chapters, and then click to read again. It is easy for advertisements to pop up. Do not go back to the bookshelf after the coin counting graphic appears. If you click on it again, the graphic will disappear and it will be a waste.) You can stop reading at this time, and the interval between reading advertisements will be lengthened. Go directly back to the bookshelf and then exit the starting point (currently, mobile phones generally have memory when running in the background. Exiting the reading page and clicking in again is also the reading page) Until daytime, preferably in the afternoon, enter the starting point again, enter any reading page, and the advertising coin icon will appear directly. There is no need to subscribe or read for a certain period of time, and you can continue to watch ads. Ads until it reaches the maximum number of ads viewed today After this process, 300+ is fine (by the way, a lot of advertising content is real SB) There may be some friends who are not good at time, but for the ads at the end of the chapter, 150+ is generally no problem. Not to mention supporting Tudou, it will not be a big problem to follow two or three more movies.

Has the author ever thought about how to deal with the harem problem? At present, it looks like it will be accepted in full, but the harem in the world of heroines is awkward to begin with, and it is so bland. The hundreds of awkward chapters will dissuade many readers. Comparatively speaking, rhythm is the most important thing for online novels. Unless the book has a single heroine, it will not end well.

The recording studio is not small, a little bigger than Shen Xuan's bedroom. Through the glass window, you can see the drum set and cello inside... Shen Xuan's eyes were incomprehensible and he glanced at Su Yanqing. Warm-colored wall lamps fill the entire room. This kind of atmosphere should allow people to adjust their mood and relax well. However, Su Yanqing was leaning against the window with her arms folded. Just looking at him coldly with her expressionless face directly froze the design concept of the international brand designer. 'Don't you need to turn on the heating? ' Shen Xuan thought subconsciously. He entered the house, closed the door, and walked under the louver vent, only to realize that the vent was blowing. Su Yanqing was very dissatisfied with Shen Xuan's procrastination and actually chatted with others on BB before recording! She was about to blame Shen Xuan for this matter and let him know who is the master of this family. "The heater needs to be repaired." Shen Xuan stretched out his hand, waved it in the wind, turned around and suggested to Su Yanqing. Su Yanqing's eyes unconsciously moved upward... To the left and to the right... And to the left and right again. A pair of eyes, almost turning into a little gray ragdoll cat under the cat's wand. "Mr. Su?" Shen Xuan's question scared Su Yanqing's little ragdoll cat away. Su Yanqing flipped her hair and didn't notice that her face softened slightly. She nodded: "I understand." Shen Xuan was a little confused about Su Yanqing's change in attitude. He attributed this to his control of interior details, which made Su Yanqing quite satisfied. "Then let's..." "Buzz! Buzz!" Shen Xuan's trouser pockets vibrated. "Why did you change your gender and nickname..." It's Sister An Mu. This message was not displayed for long before the screen switched to the video call interface. Two options - refuse; accept. Chen Xuan raised his eyes and looked at Su Yanqing. Cold, very cold, the kind of cold the next second you would make a phone call to inform a company executive that he no longer has to come to work. Shen Xuan felt a little tired. 'Sister An Mu, let's talk to her later after the recording is over. ' His index finger slid towards "Reject", but someone suddenly held his arm. "You didn't pay much attention to your work today! I'm going to deduct one day's salary from you!" ... An Mu held the phone with both hands and looked at the makeup mirror on the table. It was a very cheap round mirror - An Mu rarely put on makeup, she only used some skin care products after cleaning it with facial cleanser. So she doesn't have high requirements for this kind of mirror, as long as it can reflect her face. But for possible video communication, she got up an hour early. "How long has it been since we last met?" An Mu held her cheek with one hand and stepped on the slippers with her fair feet, urging unconsciously. Her ventricular fibrillation rate is a little fast. This is not normal. An Mu knew the cause of the abnormality, so she hoped that Shen Xuan's response could be used as an effective clinical medicine. The left foot was put on the slipper of the right foot; the toes of the right foot were sandwiched between the toes of the left foot and the slipper was lifted up. Like the heartbeat, anxiety. "Beep!" An Mu's breath shortened and she swallowed unconsciously. The picture is connected and the audio is connected. She arranged her hair with both hands, hummed twice, prepared her opening remarks, and then... The video was very shaken and the picture was very yellow, as if in a room... "... Careful! I will deduct one day's salary from you!" A woman's voice. An Mu was confused, woman? Salary? "You are so bad at serving others? I spent so much time..." "Beep! The communication has ended." The screen went dark, and only my face could be seen. An Mu sat quietly at the table, her slippers falling on the floor. "Da!" "Da!" "Da..." Hour hand on the wall - 06:12AM. Outside the bedroom window, the sky was still dark and there were few pedestrians on the street. (To be continued...) ———— 🙂🙂🙂

I don't know what to say. Thank you to the author for his efforts in bringing us happiness. Goodbye.

"Lingling, come here and say hello to your uncle and aunt." The woman was dressed simply, but she looked dazzling. She held hands, and there was a petite and exquisite girl behind the woman. She was holding her mother's finger, and her other cute little hand was holding the clothes tightly. "Hello, Uncle... Father... Auntie," An Ling stuck out her little head, trembling and almost crying. This was the first time Shen Xuan saw such a beautiful girl. Looking at An Ling, he thought she was so cute, but she seemed a little shy. An Ling also saw Shen Xuan next to her uncle and aunt. He was so cute. I... Want to marry him! An Ling, who has always been timid, made such a vow for the first time.         ，

Are there any other good-looking female characters?

Yanzhi Ling'er: Resurrect me, my love