Sell Konoha

Finished reading it, I like it very much. Especially if the original cp is not removed!!! Those who are with the protagonist and Tsunade, those who are with Kushina, and those who are with Mikoto, I want to blow their heads off every time I see them, they are so angry. It feels like they are just trying to satisfy their own selfish desires and have no respect for the character or Naruto at all. Fortunately, this situation did not occur in this article. It respects the original work and I was very happy to read it. The protagonist is not a good person in the traditional sense, and there were times when he wanted to accomplish things by any means necessary, but in the end he knew what he should do and was able to find himself, which moved me very much In fact, when I saw the protagonist getting a clone, I was afraid that the clone would turn into someone who was against the protagonist. Fortunately, it was not designed in this way. This is a very warm article. Try to satisfy some of the regrets in the article. Although the Uchiha were still exterminated, the protagonist did not expect that the third generation would do this. And there are no weird descriptions of women in this article. In fact, when I was reading novels at Qidian, I saw some authors who couldn't describe women at all. Every time they described beautiful legs, beautiful eyes, beauty, etc., I felt that it was better for these authors not to write about them, because these things looked really strange to me, just like boys reading novels about overbearing presidents and posting sentences describing the appearance of overbearing presidents. It's really strange. Actually, this article is not perfect, but it is my favorite of the many articles I have read on Qidian. The protagonist is a good person. After accepting the care of the fourth generation, he will work hard to resurrect the fourth generation and Kushina. After their death, he will take care of Naruto like his own son. Would like Tsunade and Jiraiya to be together. After the clones have their own ideas, they will be respected. Let them have their own lives. The protagonist is really nice and someone who respects others is really a plus point. Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better articles, make a lot of money, and become a famous author.

The beginning is pretty normal, but from the end of the first volume to the second volume the pace is a bit too slow.

So, what the author thinks is a cool article is someone who is involuntarily working for others due to various threats? And then I still don't know if I can go back alive. Is this kind of life a happy life? My feeling after watching Chapter 21...

Why is the organization name not called: What don't I know? White Zetsu: Obito, another organization has recently emerged Obito: What is it called? White Zetsu: I don't know what it's called Obito: Is there any information you don't know? White Zetsu: I know Obito: What's that called White Zetsu: I don't know what it's called Obito: ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It always returns to the original plot inexplicably. I'm so speechless. Man, when you write a fanfic, you have to make changes. It always follows the original plot.

The writing is quite good. The only crotch-pulling thing is the protagonist. I suggest you delete the protagonist and keep only the clone. It would be perfect Keep an eye out. Please remind me when the crotch-pulling thing of the protagonist disappears 😒

I got a headache when I saw this chapter. A few points First, as long as you don't curse people or post illegal things, no matter good or bad, I won't delete a single comment Second, if you are right, I will change it. For example, a book friend said that the defensive ninjutsu of water release has a water formation wall. I think it sounds better than my own ninjutsu, so I changed it. If there is a problem with what you said, you and I will discuss it reasonably(I am the one with the timeline issue) There is really no way to do it. Time is not given for many things, so we can only speculate reasonably. Some times are given, but there are conflicts) Third, if you insist on fighting, I will fight with you to the end if I have time. Just like a book friend, I must say that all Konoha ninja orphans can be well taken care of. Please, the Yondaime's own son drank expired milk. Do you need to say what the situation is like for ordinary middle genin? Or put it this way, in the ninja world, has there ever been a good orphan? Finally, I would like to thank all the book friends who support me. Your collections and various votes make me full of motivation for writing. I promise that I am responsible for all my comments and replies and this post will never be deleted

Published a book in Konoha, aged five, the poisonous spot was too big, and he died.

It's good. I feel like I'll keep reading it. It's better than many books that have been recommended over 10,000 times. Good luck to the author.

I can't stand it anymore. I don't know what the author wrote. It's such a mess.

Readers who can continue reading must have maxed out their poison resistance.

Another book that relies on its introduction to deceive people <(｀^´)>

I wrote about loneliness, but I also saw emptiness and said goodbye.

I can't understand it, I feel like I'm always talking about myself, there are cheats, but my IQ is low

In the same reincarnation, there is no difference between Sasuke and Indra, but the difference between Naruto and Shura is huge. So the question is where did Naruto's Wood Release go? I don't know why Senju is nothing but why he can fight against Uchiha. He may be the descendant of Asura. As for why he was reincarnated as a waifu, I don't know. Also, what is the use of Isshin? The clone can do anything, and can also be used to make a living. Other ninjas such as Sasuke will not use the clone to accompany his wife, but Naruto does. The clone practiced on his own, and he didn't know how far away Myoboku Mountain was from Konoha, so Asura Chakra strengthened Naruto's brain and amplified his positive emotions. So Naruto is a psychopath.

Add a picture of Poseidon In fact, he is really handsome, but there are not enough pixels to make him look not so handsome. He is truly a noble boy from childhood.

Insert a picture

Hurry up, author. I'm going to slide when I see your avatar.

No novel about physical clones is particularly good. To be honest, it looks like a lunatic. It's hard to read a book with physical clones showing off.

The protagonist's abilities are a bit confusing, so I won't explain them.

Didn't you get the first generation bloodline from robbing Orochimaru? There are quite a few other blood successor limited characters, and their clones are all so snatched up.

Could it be that the protagonist wants to have sex with the joker? That's really too poisonous. The avatar he created cannot be restrained. -_-|| If he still wants to do it, then I'm really speechless.

I think the other points are okay. You spend a lot of money to set your appearance, write a book at the age of 5, etc. But being a ninja requires a lot of money, which is outrageous. Ninjas are not samurai and have special privileges.

Hey... Come on

The Holy Mother couldn't stand it at all, and she didn't dare to sell the body of the deceased What did you, a waste like you, travel through?

Uchiha Izumi's father was not an Uchiha clan member, but her mother was. Later, her father died and her mother changed her original name and moved back to the clan. So how could her father be killed by Obito?

Finished reading it, I like it very much. Especially without removing the original CP! ! ! Those who are with the protagonist and Tsunade, those who are with Kushina, and those who are with Mikoto, every time I see them I want to blow their heads off, they are so angry. It feels like they are just trying to satisfy their own desires and have no respect for this character or Naruto at all. Fortunately, this situation did not occur in this article. It respects the original work and I was very happy to read it. The protagonist is not a good person in the traditional sense, and there were times when he wanted to accomplish things by any means necessary, but in the end he knew what he should do and was able to find himself, which moved me very much In fact, when I saw the protagonist getting a clone, I was afraid that the clone would turn into someone who was against the protagonist. Fortunately, it was not designed in this way. This is a very warm article. Try to satisfy some of the regrets in the article. Although the Uchiha were still exterminated, the protagonist did not expect that the third generation would do this. And there are no weird descriptions of women in this article. In fact, when I was reading novels at Qidian, I saw some authors who couldn't describe women at all. Every time they described beautiful legs, beautiful eyes, beauty, etc., I felt that it was better for these authors not to write about them, because these things looked really strange to me, just like boys reading novels about overbearing presidents and posting sentences describing the appearance of overbearing presidents. It's really strange. Actually, this article is not perfect, but it is my favorite of the many articles I have read on Qidian. The protagonist is a good person. After accepting the care of the fourth generation, he will work hard to resurrect the fourth generation and Kushina. After their death, he will take care of Naruto like his own son. Would like Tsunade and Jiraiya to be together. After the clones have their own ideas, they will be respected. Let them have their own lives. The protagonist is really nice and someone who respects others is a real plus. Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better articles, make a lot of money, and become a famous author.

Writing novels at the age of 5 is really awesome! May I ask what the author thinks? After reading your reply, you mentioned the killings of Naruto, Sasuke and Itachi, but the killings were no more than a nod. The world itself is one of the weak and the strong. Going to the battlefield at the age of 6 is also based on the war period. Failure to kill the enemy means that the family is destroyed and waiting for invasion. Being able to cultivate chakra itself will strengthen the body's functions. The combat power of the Naruto world is somewhat stronger than that of the One Piece world, and it is also close to the local Xianxia world. 5 Years old! The life of a 5-year-old child is limited to the village. It is impossible for the guard to let the 5-year-old child go out to travel. His world view is limited. Moreover, you want to allow a 5-year-old child to leave the village during the war. What is the logic? The guards were on guard against enemy invasion, so he could still get out? He hasn't started school at the age of 5, so he doesn't have access to systematic education, and the protagonist's family is just an ordinary Chuunin family, let alone a family family. How can such a 5-year-old child acquire knowledge? When you write this novel, you have to write all the characters. What you write now comes from your knowledge, and it is still in the situation of the national big data Internet. The era of our ancestors was similar to the world of Naruto. It was difficult to transmit information, and they all lived in isolation. Isn't this poison enough?