The Journey of a Goddess Starting from a Pirate

Um. . Is there really someone who doesn't hate Kirby? The red dog is just unpleasant, but Kerby is really disgusting.

It was written too fast and is a bit exaggerated. It would be better if the pace were slowed down.

Come here and step on the tiger, come on, I am a rotten leaf

You write first, and I'll read it after you're done. Don't end it after writing a few paragraphs.

Sliding the knife into someone else's body means cutting everything.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but it lacks a bit of fighting excitement.

With such a bloody scene of war, I read it as if I were reading a historical document 😅😅😅😅😅 The writing was smooth

Good life😄I haven't read the book about a time-traveling pirate who turned into that fat woman (ಡωಡ)

It's okay. It feels like it will be over in a short time.

Come on, author, practice your writing skills. Get out of this sea of ​​suffering as soon as possible.

I thought it was a waste to add Haki to Demon Slayer.

Although Pirates is fast, Pirates is well written, especially when it comes to the queen, with Pirate infrastructure flow + micro ship + two beauties fighting, and someone who saves Ace and does not engage in love and does not accept the protagonist group. In addition, the attitude towards pirates is very good. He hates evil and is clear about right and wrong. The punishment of pirates should be done by the people, not the navy, no matter whether the pirate is good or bad.

Generally speaking, it is readable. The problem is that there are not many ups and downs. It is not a running account, but it is still a bit straightforward.