Evil God's Authority

From the beginning to now, I still can't figure out who the protagonist is, why is the protagonist so weak?

How many books have you read to practice writing? Why still no progress😅

I'm thinking that all the things I used to write and play with looked more comfortable to read than your thing.

( ･᷅ὢ･᷄ ) Strictly speaking, it's just for fun.

Now the protagonists of funny and neurotic flows don't eat Xiangla

It's very messy, and the protagonist is very stupid. Although it expresses confusion, you are writing about an evil god. You use funny metaphors to compare the protagonist, but you don't express it well enough. You look like a fool 😅, and in the first few chapters, there are too many characters, which is messy Come on...

Come, please don't have a female protagonist, dark interests will flow.

Is the protagonist's evil god useful or not?

It's very interesting to write. Keep writing more.

The protagonist is a good evil god, but it's a bit boring to eat humans.

There is no sense of substitution. The name of the protagonist, Western Fantasy, should look like Western Fantasy!