Elf Sandstorm Realm

Although the setting is quite outrageous, it has the flavor of an ancient fantasy novel🤔 You can tell the quality before and after being put on the shelves. The first 1/3 is very fast-paced, and it also feels like a refreshing novel. Maybe the results will not be good after it is put on the shelves? Keep dragging, dragging, dragging, dragging... The later chapters are particularly watery! ! ! A five-day competition can write 20 chapters. Others have just evolved from intermediate elves to level 23 or 24. You have written thirty or forty chapters to reach level 22?

I originally wrote this novel because I didn't like watching Cute Pet Team, so I'm going to say this once, it's a dark novel, if you don't like it and think the protagonist is cold-blooded, just go out quietly. Next time, read the introduction before entering the novel.

I feel so bad looking at your cover 😂 I made one for you. I hope you won't find it objectionable because of your poor craftsmanship! If you want a picture, I can change it for you! Add a finer 😜

Good guy, it's been two years and Yukira hasn't evolved yet.

No one is writing about biting a land shark. No one is coming, so I will.

The author writes well, keep up the good work

Yu Kira

Introducing a new book, traditional elf text "Rebirth of Fengyuan: I choose Fire Chicken at the beginning"

In fact, the Magical Guardian is much stronger than the Hercules. The physical attack is already high enough. Hercules is just the icing on the cake. The Magical Guardian is the real bug. Most attribute moves can be ignored. Only the fighting type can fight the Leave King. However, close combat is the King's strength. It beats the fighting type.

I can see that you want to write a dark and cold-blooded novel, but the more I read, the more awkward it becomes. The simplest thing is that in many chapters, I really can't see that the protagonist has any respect for his father. If I were the protagonist's father, I would want to beat him to death. How can I talk to my father like this and tell my father to shut up. . . There is also the plot of forcing a wealthy family. . . Isn't it good to write about normal civilians, and just add contradictions to it? It's too embarrassing. . . Of course, if this is darkness and cold-bloodedness that Da Da understands, then I have nothing to say. Come on Da Da, I, a little reader, will slip away first~

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Is the writing okay? Is the writing awkward? You are welcome to correct me and send me a message to make me happy 🙂

This is a fantasy, right? Why does the eldest daughter of a clan fall in love with a miner?😅

I want to ask more than 200 pictures, has Yukira not evolved yet? I looked at about 20 of them and looked at the catalog, and I thought, I haven't evolved yet.

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it anymore. It's a bit too poisonous First of all, there are some plug-ins given at the beginning, such as rebirth, the only successor of ancient martial arts, self-imposed attributes, the world has just accepted Pokémon for 50 years, and the protagonist is familiar with elves, and can condense rock resources by himself. 🙂It's really too complicated. Plug-ins are fine, it's not intolerable, the author is a novice after all. Then about the parents, the ancient early novel Long Aotianwei came. The father was a miner. He wrote more than ten chapters and did not say who the mother was. Then he said that she was a young lady from a big family who married another big family and ran away to give birth to the protagonist. This smell is too strong. I wanted to have some expectations, but the rest of it is restricted in this box. I will definitely not be able to bypass this event. When the time comes, it will definitely be like a traditional fantasy urban novel. Next, regarding the world view, the author designed a high-tech world, and also set up an alliance. It was enough to create a world view with many sects. There are so many sects, this is especially poisonous. The protagonist goes to a secret realm for the first time. The secret realm is occupied by a small gang. He kills a random passerby and charges money on behalf of the alliance. It's outrageous. Later in the university, I met some elite student and said he was from some high-level gang (┯_┯). The ancient fantasy flavor is back, and nothing will happen again. When others bully the protagonist, the protagonist fights back, and the family comes again. If he fights back again, the sect comes again. If he can't be beaten, he runs away again and fights back. Finally, I want to say something about the author's description of some nouns, just like the small gangs who occupy the secret realm just mentioned. The passerby resisted and asked why there was a fee. Someone next to him reminded him that this was a low-level gang xxx. Later, I also talked about the high-level gang xxx to the students in those schools. You can convert this from low-level to high-level and talk about it later. For example, just like the deputy director, would others be ignorant and call him deputy? They all call the director directly. It would be too obvious for the author to write this directly. And it's not just this, it's also reflected in other places. For some items set in the game, the author uses the word "artifact" because of the different increments at each level. From level one, level two, and level three artifacts, the actual difference is only a 5% increase. But this one really doesn't deserve the name. It would have been better to just call it a prop. In short, the author's writing style is too white, and the descriptions here and there are very inappropriate and quite fatal. The plot returns to ancient fantasy novels. Students in the academy can receive tasks to clear out the surrounding areas of the village. Why do we need an alliance patrol? Doesn't the village have self-defense? The students just ran away after being petted for a few months. There are too many disputes in the college. Students are almost hostile to each other. Teachers are almost hostile to each other. Teachers in various departments are almost hostile to each other. Later, it is estimated that various universities will be hostile to each other. Classic fantasy.

Familiar but with a strong sense of fragmentation, like a fantasy novel with an elf skin attached to it

Zhao Mo

Not bad, keep up the good work, Ollie gives ✊

Was it already five years ago? At that time, I was particularly obsessed with elf literature.

Add some fine white, all ordered

Is it really not updated?