Global Gaowu: My System Was Sent to the Wrong Person

I have read seventy chapters and just read the table of contents. Let me share my opinion. I think the author has put the cart before the horse a bit. First of all, this is fan fiction. What is so cool about fan fiction? Yu Shuang should all agree, right? For regrets, for compensation, for injustice, because I like it, I am willing! To flip the table! ! ! This is the first Second, I have written almost 300 chapters now and have not yet reached the peak. You must know that there are still about ten levels later, and I can only torture the younger generation such as Fang Ping Tietou. The so-called higher-level layout and digging pits are not written at all. This is one point. Third, the story of the global high-level martial arts world is concentrated in just three years, which is very unfriendly for writing fan fiction, so you have to start a new main line and don't follow the original work. I think the layout of such a powerful Golden Finger is too small. You can write one Write about the skills, training and tactics of all the worlds, golden finger space and time flow speed, trump cards, etc. When it comes to trump cards, I found that the protagonist has no trump cards. If those old yinbi suddenly find the protagonist interesting and want to capture you to study and study, how can you resist? You have to be protected, even though we as readers know from our perspective that the protagonist can make a comeback! (Generally speaking, what I wrote is criticism, and I'm sorry if I don't express my feelings. This is my family's opinion. Please forgive me if it offends me. Come on!)

When I saw Chapter 8, I didn't understand. Is it necessary to write such a useless story about the grandson of the protagonist, Dean Jingwu? After the college entrance examination at the beginning, the character design is just a waste, and the mentality is also useless. When meeting Fu Changding, he will be all kinds of coward and have no bottom. After all, this is what he does after a famous family? The characters in "Eagle High Martial Arts" are all kinds of ruthless and hard-working characters, but Zhao Xuemei can't beat Fu Changding with just one bone tempering.

Fang Ping was absolutely confused when he saw the pig's trotters. They were all martial arts secrets he had heard, and Gao Wuli called them tactics.

To be honest, I haven't read many chapters. I feel that the protagonist portrayed by the author is so awkward. He has been reborn through time travel and lived in two lives? Why do I feel that the protagonist is no different from a primary school student, and his behavior and communication are similar to those of our real-life children in fifth or sixth grade at most. As an adult, my head hurts from watching this.

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Well, just change the protagonist and change it a little bit. You can do it. It's awesome. I really admire your shame for writing this as a fan.

It feels like the male protagonist follows the protagonist's path, changing the soup without changing the medicine. In this way, there is not much difference between the fanfic and the original work. Also, the fanfic starts with the plot and then follows the protagonist's path, leaving the protagonist with no way to go. Eighty percent of the fanfics are like this. Such fanfics are a bit boring because we have seen the growth history of the protagonist in the original work, and then in the fanfic, the male protagonist takes the protagonist's path and then watches it. Wouldn't it be boring? It is best to do it before the plot begins. When growing up through time travel, it is best not to take too long, and then stand at a certain height at the beginning of the plot and change according to your own ideas. This is more pleasing to the eye. There are many fan content that is even more miserable than the original work. People who read fan fiction hope that the content will be more humorous and funny. The result is that the content becomes more and more miserable. How to read it like this, the male protagonist in this book always feels like a manipulated chess piece, being played with by others.

It's a martial arts system that's being sold like a sheep's head. I've only done a few works of Kung Fu until now. The protagonist's IQ is worrying, and he was forced to lose his intelligence. Even some of the characters in the original work were ruined.

I think too much. After all, the original work is just right. If your writing skills are better than his, you won't be able to copy him 🤫

It's a bit poisonous for the protagonist to take the road of human emperors. There is a system and the future is promising. Why must he completely tie himself to the chariot of the human race? As a human race, it is okay to fight for the human race, but there is no need to completely sacrifice oneself for others and make selfless sacrifices, right? You must know that the Human Emperor's Way is truly a path of both prosperity and loss. No matter how strong the protagonist is when he embarks on this path, he will have an obvious and fatal weakness. To a certain extent, the protagonist's cultivation is not his own. Since the protagonist is so righteous, why not dedicate the system to the country?