I Have a Beginner's Village

The storyline for that woman really needs some revision; it feels a bit off. But it's fine if you don't change it; just write it at your own pace!

They retreated with swords; the centurion was just showing off with his sword! Use knives! A few soldiers were using swords.

To put it bluntly, this is an ancient battlefield, not a modern military setting. The pay is too high. At the start, a centurion only earns 70 taels of silver a year. If you paid half again as much as the normal government salary, it would win people's hearts. But these exorbitant pays of tens or hundreds of taels make silver seem worthless, easily leading to inflation.

It was alright at first, but when I saw the scene where the woman took poison and the protagonist insisted on saving her, I admit I was disgusted. You guys only met once, there's no real connection, and she's asking for it, why are you insisting on keeping her alive?! I'm outta here!

Before it goes on sale, let me briefly say that it's okay in the early stages, but it suddenly becomes toxic after level 70. First, his own father died at the hands of the Martial Alliance, and he inexplicably cooperated with the Martial Alliance, which instantly makes people think his values ​​are skewed. Of course, that's a minor issue. The second thing that's unbearable is that woman.

😅I was feeling pretty good at first, until Qian Shanxue appeared and became crazy and violent... Well, it was very abrupt. Then I read a few more chapters and the more I read, the more something felt wrong! Thinking about it after stepping back, it feels like a glass of ice water on a hot summer day—you're enjoying it, and then suddenly you bite into a peppercorn… 😵 In short, the exhilarating feeling is gone, and it feels a bit off.

Even if he's not your biological father and the time traveler has no feelings for him, everyone knows he's your father. What was ancient times like? Ruled by benevolence and filial piety? You're probably not going to die fast enough! Drinking and laughing with your father's killer, how arrogant! Ha! That's ridiculous.

I have absolutely no idea what the protagonist is trying to do. In a high-martial arts world, instead of working hard to improve his strength, why is he so ostentatiously developing his own power? He's not even strong enough; is he just trying to get himself killed? And that extravagant treatment—don't they know the saying "don't flaunt your wealth"? Do they think they're so cool for being independent and unconventional? They're just rich and stupid.

This protagonist is such a novice. As a time traveler, he knows nothing and seems like he's not a modern person at all, having never read any novels or watched any anime. Lin Jiu keeps asking him questions, and the protagonist, who has a cheat-like advantage, keeps saying things like, "It's better if you don't know about this too early, it won't do you any good," which is just trash talk.

The saying "The sun and moon in the pot, the universe in the sleeve"—is it a shill?