Rot into a Vicious God

It feels uncomfortable to write like this. If you need to kill, kill them. They have traveled through time. There is also Goldfinger. I am afraid that even the most feared person is no longer a human being. That person is still alive and is still a shady person. You can give your life to someone who knows your secret. How can you be so big-hearted? You can trust it. People are following you and they obviously have some agenda. Just kill them. There is nothing new about this copy and that copy.

Author, you started to engage in martial arts, but as a result, there have been dozens of chapters without writing about whether the protagonist has developed internal skills. The key point is that at first, you were too imitative. Basically, you wrote how others wrote about martial arts and cheating. Moreover, it seemed that you were interested in developing the muscle dominance style. As a result... You went off topic, and the market response was not good. The matter has come to this. If you don't force it right now, it will continue to collapse, but you have to change it in order to get back together. As for the martial arts, you have already written it, so you can't eliminate it... Personally, it seems that you want to use the protagonist's "yin energy" and "demon elixir" as characteristics to replace the internal strength and use it as a "training method" while using martial arts as a "fighting method". Together... To achieve a balanced effect. As for the new transformations... Personally, I feel that if this book is to be saved, body transformation is the key: this can reflect the specialness of the protagonist. For example, if the rejection reaction is too great, the protagonist's body may collapse and rot. In order to upgrade, the protagonist wanders between decay and rebirth with successful integration, and gradually becomes dehumanized and deified. This can bite the title and avoid being accused of selling dog meat. In addition, there have been comics and animations before, in which the protagonist fights a boss to recover an organ, and finally gradually becomes a complete human being. And your book... Maybe it can work the other way around: the protagonist fights a big monster and fuses an organ, seizes one of the monster's abilities, and combines it with suitable "martial arts" modifications (for example, the spider monster can spray silk from its butt, how does the protagonist spray it? You can't just spray it from below, right? Spider-Man mode? How can you do it? Once it's sprayed out, how can it be used? What means can be used to achieve what effect? ​​This is the direction of "martial arts"). Finally, take the comic (Dororo?) That sells well as an example. It can achieve good value. In addition to the superficial "upgrading" elements of the protagonist fighting monsters, it also contains deeper connotations of human ethics, morality, and philosophy: In the comic, see The father of the protagonist, who was introduced as a villain and killed the protagonist at the beginning, was actually motivated by "protecting the people, ending the troubled times, and seeking peace for the world." For this reason, he did not hesitate to kill his relatives for justice, but in the end it was an innocent person who made the sacrifice, but this innocent person was his new-born son. Is this considered selfless and noble? He seems to be a victim, but the upright protagonist, for his own selfish desire to regain body perception, regards the interests and lives of the people as trivial, and does not hesitate to base his hope of physical recovery on the constant suffering and death of ordinary people. However, by acting like this, he was only getting back what he supposedly should have had. Is this considered selfish and despicable? Who is the devil? Or are they just people with a different perspective? Or... There is no such thing as "people", everyone is "evil"? ! These deeper things gave this comic a stronger vitality than ordinary conventional comics, and it became an instant hit. When writing a book, have you ever thought about planning this? For example... What is a "fierce god"? Who is the evil god? A monster-like protagonist? Or, is he actually a character who is magnificent both in appearance and in his heart? Or... The evil god is just a concept, and the protagonist just embodies this concept. In fact, the evil god exists in everyone's heart, and everyone... As long as they have that condition, they will become "the evil god"? These are just personal opinions. I am not qualified to teach authors how to do things.

Seeing that I wanted to blame God for being unfair again, I felt like vomiting. As a pig, you have a golden finger, you are resurrected, and you have a good family, just a bit inhuman, but the basic problems are not big, and there is no one chasing you to slay demons. If you blame God for this, then those ordinary people can just kill the ball. . . .

I feel like it doesn't reflect the difference that the protagonist is a corpse. It can be read as an ordinary martial arts novel.

In ancient times, a rich official usually had a nursing home and a family with children. He bought out girls like that to serve in the inner court. The slaves and slaves were in their hands, life and death, and the officials basically didn't care. In this world of monsters, you still tell me about benevolence and righteousness. The slaves bully the master's kindness and ask for money. I wonder if that slave dare not steal anything. If you join forces and become bandits, poison them first and then kill them all. Is it difficult? In ancient times, refugees would cook anything when they were hungry, Zhang Jiao

To sum up, this book is selling sheep's head and selling dog meat.

The starting point is also troublesome. I can't find good novels on the APP. I have to go to the website and use the computer version to find them.

What's going on? Didn't the protagonist turn into a corpse? He was still entangled with his original relatives, and the martial arts also changed from a sense of evil to an ordinary one with no highlights. As for me, I came here just to see the evil and secretive training and various evil martial arts of the dead protagonist, but now why is it basically the same as an ordinary martial arts novel except for Chapter 52?

It's quite interesting to read the introduction. I thought the protagonist traveled through time and became a different species and then reversed course. But in the end, he still became a human being. Can't he be the right person? Your protagonist's characteristic that attracts others is his rot. After you cure it, will your book be different from other books? There are only eight hundred martial arts books on Qidian. Why should I read your book? It has no core competitiveness.

If you are a dead person, you should not go to the Jiba style. Too much of the Jiba style will make your eyes tired. Wouldn't it be nice to just practice ghosts and immortals?

I'm so fucking convinced. After reading more than 30 chapters, there are so many points where I don't upgrade the two most important and fundamental things, the most important Corpse Raising Technique and Wu Qin Xi, but instead upgrade some bullshit martial arts secrets. Put aside your internal strength and go practice external strength; put aside your cultivation of immortality and go learn martial arts. Don't let go of things that can change your fundamentals and improve your foundation, and just learn some rubbish style of play. It's like giving you a company of weapons and ammunition instead of a complete industrial production system. The idiot is home.

Since they are already living corpses and have modifiers, why are they still obsessed with martial arts secrets? Wild ghosts and monsters have no place to learn Kung Fu, but they still kill Kung Fu masters to pieces. This article gives people the feeling that although there is an aircraft engine, the protagonist does not collect aircraft materials, but instead looks for materials to make bicycles everywhere. You think it is ridiculous or not.

In fact, sometimes when reading about this kind of heterogeneous protagonist, I always hope to show the characteristics of the protagonist's long life. When reading other novels, every time the protagonist destroys the enemy's plan for decades or centuries, jumping back and forth among the various methods set up by the enemy in the plan of hundreds of years, I have never seen an author who can write this kind of thing from the opponent's perspective. I feel that it should be quite interesting.

It has been 4000+ for thirty days in a row, and it has received many opinions and views. Thunder, rain and dew are all gifts from God. The useful suggestions and opinions were all written down, the encouragement and support were accepted, and the useless ones were forgotten.

A good non-human abortion, you will be ruined by yourself

The level is too low, the gimmicks are greater than the reality, and it is a work that is just a waste of money.

As a ghost, how can you be a qualified ghost if you can't even punch a wall? If you really can't write it, you can write it as a ghost controller. Each time you advance to a level, there is one more ability.

Another person who sells dog meat with a sheep's head, a good non-human genre, but was ruined by his own writing

The writing style is okay, but the content is a lot long-winded, without any sense of immersion, and the setting is cumbersome. Bad review.

The book is called Decay, and the whole process is embalming.

I watched half of it and then finished it. I watched the finale and it was pretty good.

Tell me, it's a good supernatural thing, but it's a pity that you forcefully write it as a martial arts, otherwise it would be like a paper man becoming a Taoist, now you can live happily.

It sucks. If you haven't come in yet, run away.

I was torn apart. I couldn't wait to watch it as soon as I waited for the update, but it turned out to be the finale? The ending was so rushed and a lot of things were not explained clearly. After reading this review, there is something wrong with the author's mentality and he can't write anymore... It's a pity. But it is undeniable that this is a good book, and the ending can't be helped. So I am looking forward to the author's next book. If nothing else, I will follow it.

It's okay to be reasonable. Write the next book firmly with your own ideas. I don't care whether he's okay or not. Let's talk about it first.

I was very optimistic about this book when I first read it, but then the author got upset, so I withdrew it.

I don't know if the author has published a new book

Let's start with the ancestors of Montenegro. This is called evil

Brother, are you writing about memories? I just saw "Go to Yizhuang", why do you think it is a memory? . . .

Why can this book continue to be written? Traveling through time to a rotting corpse, you don't have to jump off a building, jump into a river, or hang yourself. Wear it again?