No Breathing While Playing

There is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, and the themes and ideas are clearly explained, but there is one big flaw, which is that I don't know why he always likes to make the characters look like characters. The evil person must be unforgivable, and the sidekick must have no brains, no brains, no brains, how can people be so simple? The most important thing about horror games and horror novels is actually the sense of substitution, and the sense of substitution is based on identification. For example, if you play Resident Evil for the first time, you will always be frightened by the monsters that suddenly pop out, because the unfamiliar environment, tense music, and scary atmosphere will make you feel nervous in it. So when you clear the level for the second or third time and can simply back it up, you won't feel anything about the sudden attack of the monster, and you may even hold up your gun and blow off its head without any psychological fluctuations. The author's facial makeup of the characters can easily make the horror atmosphere rendered awkward, instantly causing tension and substituting emotions to pop up. Is this it? I have seen this routine in xxx movies/novels a lot. This guy will definitely think and do whatever he wants next. Once it is similar to the expected "cliché", there will be a huge psychological gap.

The story is very interesting, and I listened to the latest chapter in one breath, which is like a fairy tale. But I hope the author will not develop the habit of forcing people to move, otherwise readers who have not reached the intermediate level of poison resistance will easily die 🙂

Many times, if you write that the protagonist cannot see the problem at first, and later explain that you can see the problem, you can actually put it into the mental activity at the beginning to let us know that the protagonist knows that he is a ghost and is just acting. Otherwise, we will think that the protagonist is stupid and abandon the book directly.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but suddenly there was an inexplicable addition of a woman later on. I couldn't figure out why I wanted to write about a female anchor who knew absolutely nothing? The male protagonist has no choice but to risk death threats to play games, so why write a beautiful female anchor to accompany him? Are you facing death threats all the time, and you have to take care of a woman who knows nothing? And when you know that there is a high probability of death, do you let an unknowing woman die? Is this looking down upon the difficulty of the game?

The protagonist has nothing but a little cleverness, and he is still the only player in the world who has cleared four levels? Is it a world where ordinary people have no brains?

After reading Chapter 45, I couldn't help but say that it makes sense. The character of the protagonist is not likable, and he does not have extraordinary wisdom. He does things naturally and thinks of one thing without regard to the consequences. The key is that he is already a third-year character. I feel that he has not grown at all. He is still hesitating whether it is abnormal when he sees obvious unconventional phenomena. And the endings of the first two episodes do have the feeling of forcing tears. Is the villain whitewashing? Not so good Because of the protagonist's occasional clever ideas, I have survived until now. I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I have given up on it for the time being. I'm really running out of books and will read it again. Come on author, overall there is a lot of room for improvement. 😄

It feels very strange. Looking at the situation of an exorcist priest who has been working as an exorcist for 20 years, it seems that there are supernatural things in the world and the frequency of outbreaks is not low. Has the government not set up a special countermeasures department? Is it all up to the private sector to solve the problem?

Why don't you just go back to China and find a Taoist priest to solve this problem? Since priests can conquer demons, then China's cultivation of immortals should not be overdone.

It's a bit like the horror games of the 1990s, Enborg Pentalogy, Clock Tower

Here you go, reward is here, welcome to the author (´ฅω•ฅ｀)ﾁﾗｯ

Write slowly, the author is a potential stock, write more, learn more, and learn more. The writing power has improved.

I always feel that the setting of the protagonist as a game anchor is a failure. Those barrage, the audience and the live broadcast feel too dramatic. I feel that since it is a horror and suspense novel, such things should not be included.

P site boss Viscum's paintings, I personally feel are more in line with Schnee, but unfortunately the weapons in the pictures are not very consistent. I look forward to her performance in the game!

It's not too much to give the scapegoat a female lead!

Starting from tomorrow, there will be one recommendation ticket every day 🤓. Please write it carefully.

The author's writing is not unflattering, it's quite interesting, but the first few books are a little bit toxic and may make you quit, but things get better after that, and I hope you can keep up the good work.

There is a problem with the protagonist's character. He wants to do one thing and do another without thinking about the consequences. If you are writing a fantasy invincible novel, I have no objection to you writing like this. Because you are invincible, you don't need to consider the consequences. But writing your suspense article like this is a bit like forcibly advancing the main plot, and there is no logic at all.

It's pretty good, faster and faster 😁

I have read Chapter 45 so far, and the subject matter is okay, but it feels weird when I read it. The third time I read it, I still relied on talking to beat the ghost.

The author doesn't know how to be a eunuch... It's pretty good-looking

It's been several days and there is no update. Is the author a eunuch?

The author writes a chapter to describe the situation Do you plan not to write it anymore?

The author of such a beautiful book must keep writing it.

The rest of the writing collapsed, maybe it was the eunuch, and Isabel appeared in the fifth chapter of the game. Moreover, the strength has become weaker after conquering. When I first met the protagonist, I was able to fight against the greedy original sin demon. Later, even the demon's subordinates in the church could barely fight with each other. I wrote Journey to the West. Before conquering, I was awesome, but after conquering, my combat power dropped drastically.

Hey, it's a pretty good novel, but the author ran away? No more updates?

After looking around, I'm still confused about the fact that there are only four people in the world who can complete the game in 30 minutes without using a cheat device. After all, if there is the first one, countless people will imitate it.