The Fourth Calamity of the Late Ming

This alternating way of writing at the beginning is really rare. It makes an old bookworm like me shine. The writing style is good and the writing is vivid. It's like a fairy! It's a pity that the more I read, the more awkward it becomes. The realistic writing style and the forced intelligence plot create a strong sense of tearing. And in this sense of tearing, the author also wants readers to feel their nostalgia for early online games, so people cannot read it into the article. Then the main plot is unclear. Are they preparing to make money or fight against the Qing Dynasty? The author said in other answers that the setting cannot be falsely advertised, but have you never eaten pork and never seen a pig run away? What does it have to do with the fact that the mall can only sell ingots and my NPC selling skins🐶? What is the relationship between the currency Yuanbao used by players and the background silver used by indigenous people🐶? ... The final right of interpretation rests with the protagonist. Doesn't it have to be the protagonist's final say on how to interpret it? Why do you want to make money by selling food and be sanctioned by players? TM is all an excuse. You directly set it to buy something in the mall to restore satiety. Eating indigenous food will cause you to lose blood. The scientific explanation is that players are all special humans composed of right-handed genes. If you eat food made of left-handed genes, you will lose blood. Poisoned to death... There are too many ways to solve it, but the protagonist is forced by the author to suppress his IQ and use lame techniques to act like a clown🤡. He just walks with the stupidest steps. Just like this, he still wants to make readers laugh. I can't laugh, tears are rolling in my eyes🐶... To give a few examples, the protagonist made a tool man with immortal style to deliver a message to Shi Kefa, but was stopped by the city gate (the corruption of Dameng is also described here). Logically speaking, even if he is not given a lesson, he should just break in! If it gets a little too big, someone will definitely take care of it. They will decorate it, fly directly, and add some special effects such as lotuses growing step by step. Will Shi Kefa dare to come out? But what does the protagonist do? I'm asking for a dream. I'm not asking for a normal request. I'm going to give you a dream of Cthulhu. Is it really fun to forcefully add something that has nothing to do with the plot? Then there are the street signs. Not to mention the metal and wood being stolen, why don't you get a stone one instead of a mud one? Or even be more direct and make something that only players can see? Earlier in the plot, the protagonist knew how to make a high-density material that looked like a wooden fence, but why did he forget about it later on? To sum up, the author either has no writing skills or can't write, or he is addicted to self-pleasure and wants readers to miss ancient games with him. However, the background and purpose of the choice create a sense of tearing, which leads to the early dismissal of Xiaobai (multiple twists and realistic techniques that make Xiaobai have no sense of substitution), and the later dismissal of old bookworms (forcibly demoralizing, addicted to self-entertainment, and the plot is blunt). Finally, I hope the author can restrain himself a little. It was supposed to be a small but beautiful work, but now it is becoming more and more useless!

20201206 I finished reading it in the middle of the night and voted for recommendation. Let me share my thoughts The author's writing is average and there are no logical flaws. In the PS section, it can be seen that the author has checked the information. There are no big mistakes and the book is written seriously. These are all pleasing points This book is creatively excellent. History + player flow. At the beginning, I have read another book with the same theme that has been eunuch for seven months. This writing has great potential The following is my personal opinion The author thinks your writing is very attractive. Although there are problems that other readers have said before, the plot part is sometimes too little and the explanation part is too much. This consumes the reader's patience, but the overall situation is still good enough to cover up the flaws What is the main highlight? It is the creativity of the theme and the interestingness of the content it extends. Personally, I think the player's behavior is quite satisfactory, but what attracts attention is the slutty operation. For example, stand-alone players like to go to NPCs' homes to collect supplies, various stuck bugs, guess the plot, and find hidden objects; online game players have achievement challenges such as group books, world's first kills, golden groups, hairy equipment, etc.; In addition, stand-alone online games do not distinguish between love and hate; for example, when it comes to names, "Mom said if the name is too long, people will find it if you hide it behind a tree" and other funny names. The collision of the absurd and disorderly behaviors of players I think this is what attracts me the most. Here is a book recommended by the author. The portrayal of players in Sister's (Creating the Game World) is very spiritual. Of course, the fireproof girl prprpr Finally, this is just the words of my family. You take the essence and discard the dross. I wish this book will get better and better. I wish the author's writing skills will become better and better like a distant pupil. This book will be a god.

After reading Chapter 38, Fairy Bear can't get out of my mind~ It was a clumsy work, and Bo Jun smiled (=^▽^=) Hahaha, I finally drew it hahaha

Brain madness in ideal Brain madness in reality

The author is really a genius. This gamer alien type can also write about the feeling of frustration. . . . . . It feels like the protagonist's IQ is really low. . . . . Slipping away

It seemed interesting at first, but after thinking about it, I suddenly felt that it was quite nonsense. The author's so-called story world is completely nonsense. For example, since the protagonist is the only god in the universe at the singularity, let alone whether there are other advanced civilizations or alien high-tech in a super galaxy, it is just that in In the time and space of the late Ming Dynasty on earth, as long as the protagonist accelerates the time flow of the earth and improves the historical process, then the so-called getting rich in real time and space is simply too simple. Even according to the alien civilizations in the parallel time and space universe, it is estimated that the protagonist can become a super leader in real society.

The author should also know the truth of the three golden chapters. I resisted reading the fourth chapter, and then nothing happened. I don't even know who the protagonist is, what you are writing about, what you want to express, and I don't think your writing seems very personal. The author, you will know by looking at the comment area. No matter how good your subsequent content is, few people will be able to continue reading it.

The first photo is of Tongguan City looking north and south. The valley in the middle is the forbidden ditch. Three hundred years ago, twelve connected cities were built along this passage. Ma Shiyao also went around behind the Qing army from here. The second photo is an old photo of Tongguan before it was demolished.

I hope I can write two chapters of Enemy of the People when I have nothing to do.

I've read Chapter 51. It was interesting the first time I read it, but the more I read it, the more poisonous it became. The pig's feet are set up to make money, but the whole book is not designed to make money. It's only one million for a city lord. Are you trying to persuade me to quit? Do I scare people away first and then wait for the author to forcefully write back? The setting conflicts with the plot development. Moreover, the more and more witticisms he writes appear to be more and more clumsy. Isn't the ready-made first-charge monthly card good for making money? How much is 30 per person when the AI ​​comes out? Poison!