Konoha Storm Lord

Come on, come on, your writing style is great 😍

Good guy, here comes the Nitrogen Slash, which does range damage and directly expels the air from the enemy's body.

He is regarded as an outcast by Konoha and won't defect, so goodbye. I don't like to watch the abuser.

Can you control lightning and air? Isn't the plasma cannon just A (ಡωಡ)? Then it's not too much to use hand fusion for the ultimate move (ಡωಡ)

I don't want to write anymore, and I've lost all my attendance. I planned to put it on the shelves in January, but it didn't work. I planned to put it on the shelves in February, but it turned out that I didn't have full attendance on the 1st. 1500 is more than half a month's salary 😭 I knew that my writing was bad and my grades were poor, but I never thought that anyone would subscribe. I just wanted to be a perfect attendance worker. As a result, I had no full attendance for two months in a row, and I was heartbroken. I lost all my strength and it hurt to breathe. Oh, let's stick to the single update until next month, and then start the full-time update. Try to stick with it, it's the first book after all…

Let's add a couple to the relationship between Lei Chen and Hatake Sakumo. The relationship between Lei Chen and Sakumo is Sakumo. If this is not love, what else is love?

Onoki relied on the Light and Heavy Rock Technique to fly. Is it related to atmospheric pressure? Liberal arts students don't quite understand

After reading the introduction, nitrogen should not be electrolyzed. It should be that under the action of lightning, nitrogen and oxygen react to form nitrogen oxides, which are one of the causes of acid rain.

Hinata Yuki is a pretty good character, but she ended up with a nephew like Hinata Tianyu. It's quite unlucky.

The fan who wrote Chapter 116 posted it in the chapter description. Everyone is welcome to read it.

Author, your writing is good, but the poison is too obvious. Don't do this kind of thing like turning the first mob that should have been solved in the first three chapters into a boss in the future.

I really think I can write it well. Still supported. Come on

I have already signed a contract. I didn't have any hope at all. I didn't expect that I could sign a contract with such a bad writing 😭 Thank you very much to the editor Anyone who has investment ideas can invest. There are not many people now. As long as you invest, you will definitely make money. I will also complete the achievements related to the update. I invested 500 points myself, hoping to make a fortune 🤓

The plot of Chapter 124 is really poorly written.

Your biggest problem is that the timeline of your fanfic is messed up. Those who don't like Naruto won't come in after seeing the name. Those who like it will almost leave after seeing White Fang's investigation. After all, White Fang has committed suicide when there are rumors. How can you keep reading? And with Goldfinger, what kind of genius is it? The rewards are not proportional to the mortality rate.

The protagonist obtains magic, can think in the opposite direction, the most simple way, speed and magic thunder, no one can stop it, raise the sword horizontally, attach the chakra of lightning, magic. Lightning instant body slash, the attack is concentrated, and the person can be cut in an instant

Good guy, 20 first orders is definitely more than enough. Judging from the fan list, there should be more than 7,000. So I wonder if it should be updated. The requirements are not high, just like an eagle.

Come on! Write well and stick to your own ideas. Will be fine

I saw this book from another novel website and thought it was pretty good.

Can you change the punctuation 😰

Very good, very good. Big turning point. Can't wait.

The writing is quite good, much better than some other fics of the same period. Please check out the updates later for the others.

There are restrictions on voting for monthly votes. Holy shit, it's very well written. Kudos to the author.