Players Please Put on Their Equipment

Why do I feel that my machine is full of vitality since I was 21? Is there something wrong with me?

There are innovative settings, and the writing is not bad, but the plot is terrible. To be honest, either give up the aliens' direct urban abilities, let the aliens appear in the mid-term, or directly start the interstellar game. Since you plan to let aliens enter in the early stage, the plot of your first twenty chapters is completely meaningless. It is better to delete the first 20 chapters. This change is too big and it feels very strange.

Is there a group? There are a lot of typos in the book. It would be too troublesome to catch them one by one 🙂

I've read Chapter 31, and there's nothing too toxic. It's very well written. I'll give you three recommendation votes.

I saw Chapter 25, so the world background is that interstellar civilization created a game world to resolve conflicts in order to avoid war?

Are you talking about no heroine, single heroine, multiple heroines, or beauty?

I can't understand what I wrote later, mainly because there is no main line.

I have been writing for a long time and I don't know what the author is expressing.