Uchiha Red Flame of Konoha

I just read Chapter 10. Author, please allow me to say a few words. Do you know why it's so bleak? Not to mention the writing style. Because, well, there are some places where the protagonist acts very silly and naive (she reveals her identity, as if she's afraid that others won't know, and she also looks a bit like Senju Hashirama, etc.), But also has the good qualities of a holy mother. I won't go into details about Jiraiya, who can be called the Hokage version of Jade Xiaogang. Later he found Tsunade. . . Countless people have performed that trick, okay? The routines are similar to other stories, and there are some leftovers. It can be said that unless major changes are made, it will basically not be outstanding. This is just my personal suggestion🤫

Change your hairstyle. . Sasuke's killer hair style is too average. I still like Obito's hedgehog hair style. It's dry and sunny.

Deidara is 17 years old and hasn't joined Akatsuki yet? He was recruited by Itachi Uchiha. Isn't that how the plot was changed?

The way he spoke made me feel like I was reading a martial arts novel. . . . .

I feel that the main character's setting of the Virgin is correct, but readers nowadays are less able to accept such an active Virgin protagonist. If you write a new book next time, you can try to use the system or practice system to control the passive virgin, so that there is no sense of violation. In short, the behavior of the protagonist is analyzed from the perspective of capital pursuit of profit, whether it is cultivation, research, using tools to speed up cultivation, using capital operations to collect cultivation resources and other things.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is hard to describe.

I have been looking for this kind of fan fiction about cultivators traveling through Naruto, but I finally found it. I hope the author can update it more.

Don't write in such a Chinese style, it's not like a martial arts fairy...

What are the two-pillar twins?

Damn, the last picture is in the wrong order.

Why don't you use the spiritual energy of heaven and earth and follow the ninja to play with essence and blood to turn into energy and damage your foundation?

Use Jiraiya's death to sacrifice the protagonist's Mangekyō Sharingan!

It's so beautiful😭. I've never seen such a beautiful book in my life😭. It's really enjoyable to read.

The protagonist reminds me of Yi Xiaochuan