Harry Potter and the Great Old Ones

I haven't finished it yet, but I want to say, is it worth it?

The emotional line is really good, the author is awesome!

I understand, Harry is the natural attacker, and the protagonist is the vicious sufferer. In the future, Harry will use his lion's bravery and sincerity to melt the insecure protagonist, and Lao Deng is the matchmaker.

Except for a slightly rotten feeling, there is really nothing to say about the plot. The protagonist is seeking death in a reasonable way, not dying in a reasonable way, and being cleansed in a reasonable way. I can only say that it was written by a science student. It is so logical and rigorous that I almost believed the last explanation.

I found that the protagonist is becoming more and more inhumane. When they first approached Harry, Hermione, and Ron, they had an attitude of taking advantage. The key is that the Harry trio truly regarded the protagonist as their friends, and the protagonist would only take advantage of Harry. In the end, he even acted like I took advantage of you because of you. It looks good, and the attitude of the protagonist, the so-called friend, towards the three Harrys is quite insincere, and the Christmas gifts given to friends are also quite perfunctory. It is not a question of whether the gift is expensive or not, but the perfunctory mentality of the protagonist himself (this is not what I am saying, the protagonist of this book feels the same way). The protagonist is always scheming, whether Voldemort or Lockhart, but because these two characters are not likable, I won't say it. But for the Harry trio, I feel that they are just acting to take advantage. I always feel that the Harry trio is annoying and often interrupts my study and research time. I wish I could stay away from the trio, and I have to act like I am good friends with the trio just because I can take advantage. It's so hypocritical! What else makes me feel uncomfortable is that the protagonist does many experiments that are against human nature, such as letting Peter give birth to several little Peters with a female mouse in the mouse state, and promising to help Sirius retrieve Regulus's body, but in his heart he is planning to use the soul of the summoned demon. Washing away the memories and putting them into Regulus' corpse to achieve resurrection is the most unacceptable thing to me. Not to mention playing with life, this is completely playing with other people's emotions. I can imagine what Sirius will do when he sees this "resurrected" Regulus. I think he will be very happy and excited! But I also want to know how Sirius will feel when he knows that the soul in his "resurrected" brother's body is the soul of a demon! Anyway, if I knew that the soul in the body of my own relative had been replaced by a demon soul, I would not be happy, no matter how similar the other party behaved. So I said that the protagonist was a graduate student in his previous life, and his family was quite happy. He basically never experienced too many hardships or even hardships, and therefore lacked the necessary empathy for others.

I read it in one go yesterday and it feels like it is the most interesting HP fanfic I have ever seen. I will continue to follow the author. Although no one can't understand the author's crazy comments, the protagonist is really contemptuous (laughing) In addition, many places accurately stepped on the laughter of my engineering monk and old African chief investigator...? I have to say that I am indeed very interested in the disease-ridden Voldemort and the hybrid (?) Mouse This protagonist is very suitable for being a module boss (feeling suddenly happy?)

I came from Red Ji and just caught up with the latest chapter The author writes very well, and the plot and setting are very attractive. Tell me a few possible poisonous points. 1. There are some gay jokes in the article that may make people uncomfortable (not gay, not gay, there is no emotional line in this article, just the ggad-like memes that the author likes to play) 2. The path of redness is not easy to follow in online articles. Even a very brilliant historical novel like Ge Qin will cause great controversy, and the author is recommended to avoid it. Especially in the Ke system worldview, red transformation is always a bit inconsistent, but it is still ok to write as a meme.

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*Reminder: This article is a fan creation. The author insists on implementing the hopeless cp in the book, ooc belongs to me *And: If the main theme of the world is love, then regardless of identity and gender, I hope Tiera will know that he has had feelings on the road of madness This is the first winter that Harry has spent in London since returning from a business trip as an Auror. He walked out of the London station carrying his suitcase, blending easily into the crowd of Muggles. Most of the people around him had expressionless faces, and there was a damp and cold air as they passed by. The corridor inside the station leading to the Commercial Street was not very long, and it did not leave Harry enough time to think about where to stay tonight. He stopped on the porch at the exit of the station. Sirius lives only a block away from the city center, but he doesn't want to go back now. After finally leaving behind the burden of the past, Sirius embarks on various new adventures. He is passionate about traveling to the wonders of the world, experiencing their charm up close and composing music for them. At the same time, he also opened a [Wonder Museum Restaurant] so that customers can enjoy delicious food and experience this art at the same time. It has now been listed as a new tourist promotion spot in the British wizarding community. But for Harry, when Sirius was not around, there was no smell of home in that gloomy single-family mansion. Whenever he approached the gate, the suffocating feeling of the Order members nervously discussing intelligence and battle plans during the decisive battle seemed to rise high and sweep him down. "I borrowed it, thank you." My thoughts were interrupted by a steady stream of passengers coming from behind. He stood there alone with dull eyes. Like a stone emerging from the stream, it abruptly blocks the flow of water behind it. Occasionally, a child who is being held by his mother will turn to look at him, wondering if the big brother with the scar on his forehead is waiting for someone to pick him up. But Harry was just looking at the streets extending into the darkness. It is a common day with heavy snow outside, but it is also a rare day with little wind. Snowflakes as big as a newborn baby's fist fell straight from the sky, but made no sound on the ground. It should have a sound, but few people hear it, Harry thought silently. What about me? He heard his heart question. What about my voice? His heart whispered: Do you hear my voice? He suddenly turned around and walked quickly towards the dark alley nearest to the station. "Apparition" Harry pursed his lips tightly, enduring the brief discomfort caused by Apparition. After a few seconds, he was mentally prepared and opened his eyes. Then he saw the attic where he and Tiera first met. The Chinese restaurant downstairs is at its peak business period. There are only a handful of restaurants that are open until nine o'clock in the evening on such a snowy day. Many people are looking at the menu in the waiting seats of the restaurant carrying large and small bags after shopping. The Chinese couple who adopted Tiela did not move away from here, even though Tiela had clearly told them when he parted with them that once he entered the magical world, he would never come back. But the couple is still a little worried, worried that if their children want to come back they won't be able to find them. Harry listened quietly for a moment, then raised his wand. "Silent" A layer of blue ripples spread, covering the room. He then raised his feet, leaving dusty footprints on the rotten floor, and then sat down on the bed covered with a layer of plastic sheeting. Everyone's childhood memories are clear and vague. You may remember scenes from certain special moments, or you may wonder if you have ever owned a certain period of time. But Harry completely remembered that day, which was his birthday and the most dazzling day in his life. It started from zero o'clock, and every frame painted warmth and happiness. He once cried with joy because he had made the first friend in his life, but now he was lying on his side on the same bed, so dazed that his eyes were so astringent that he didn't even shed a single tear. Then this is probably not sadness, just unwillingness. He thought too many times, if his magic had been stronger when fighting Voldemort, if he had been more vigilant, and if he had paid more attention to Tiera's anomalies during the Triwizard Tournament instead of the grudge caused by "competing with another warrior", whether the prophecy Tiera had seen would have been rewritten. Would the first friend in his life, the friend who always provided tolerance and companionship to him, not embrace death resolutely, and would they not be strangers to each other? He could not imagine Tiera's relief and indifference to death, nor could he empathize with it. Because when he discovered his Horcrux identity, the breath of death was so cold that he almost despaired. But Tiera always smiled during the last period, more dazzling than before, and no one would take their eyes away from him at the ball. "I don't want anyone to cry at my funeral. Students in need of help are always welcome at my grave." Savoring the shock at that time and coming back to life after contacting Tiera, he felt that he had never been so far away from this good friend. After that, Tiera's appearance always seemed to be accompanied by fire. Whenever he appeared, everyone on the scene wore a flattering smile, and the efficiency of passing bills was greatly increased, and his reputation once surpassed that of the first generation Dark Lord. Everything he did was so dazzling. But this room enveloped by the winter night is dark. Harry was a little sad. Only when he saw this huge contrast did he remember again that Tiera had completely left for ten years. The number of people mentioning Tiera is decreasing year by year. After all, the news always prefers to pursue "living heroes". He may never appear again. Tiera stood in front of Harry. The two of them were in different divine dimensions, which meant that Harry could not see anything. The fateful protagonist of this "testing ground" has grown up. 27 years old, the youngest director of the Auror Office in history. Tiera silently looked at the savior who looked like he had not slept well with his messy black hair. She only felt that the other person was still very childish. Harry covered his frozen hands, rubbed his face, and stood up. He looked around the small attic one last time, as if to imprint all the details deeply in his mind. Probably a farewell. He circled and prepared to return to the old house. "Goodbye, Tiera", Harry's voice was almost inaudible. "I might..." Tiera stood there and said nothing. He could not talk about his current mood, but simply sighed: Winter is indeed a season when it is easy for people to feel lonely.

The best-written novel I've read this year, the plot, rhythm, and logic are all excellent It's a pity that hp is a niche subject, otherwise this book will definitely become a hit

Who is the protagonist? I see that now I feel that the protagonist has a relatively contradictory personality. It is likely that he has an extremely strong desire to survive in a grammatical context, so he has closed himself off and tried to be as ruthless as possible to reduce unnecessary emotional burden. It is reflected in an extreme lack of security and incomplete egoism (in fact, the protagonist's methods are quite measured), but I also feel that the protagonist also longs for someone he can rely on (I would say that the protagonist's childish behavior with Lao Deng may not be entirely acting, and he may have put down a little bit of his own mask). Although most of the articles in the article are plotting against Harry, the calculations are also done to ensure Harry's safety (otherwise I feel that Harry will change The Son of God was sacrificed, and I felt a little nervous when I saw the protagonist's performance in the part where the three saints merged into one.) So I think the protagonist has feelings for Harry (a good friend type of relationship), because Harry's character is very difficult for the protagonist, and Harry's concern for the protagonist cannot be completely fed to the donkey. But it may also be my wishful thinking. The protagonist is an extreme egoist and has been calculating others to achieve his own goals. I still hope that the protagonist is the first kind of person, because I really hope that the subsequent protagonist can be broken by Harry's concern and finally be honest with Harry (don't think wrongly), and then become good friends (the normal kind of good friends), and the relationship with Harry can have a warm and loving ending. (Quietly, I don't mind if you engage in corruption😏)

Poison test completed: Rating, grass jelly- Remarks: Additional investment of 100 will give you a May pass

Come on, gay is so angry, don't say it's my fault, or don't write it like that, you are always flirting with Harry, why don't you change it to Hermione? Even if you always think about returning to the original world, wouldn't it be nice to bring a daughter-in-law like Hermione to your parents? She has to be gay.

Isn't Danmei a niche? Why is it not in the tags, not in the introduction, and not written before the first chapter? So disgusting

Seriously? I have read more than 90 chapters now, but I can already smell the author's intention to make something red. . . First, does the author definitely have more, solid, and solid literary skills to write red? Second, does the author really understand red? I may not understand, but I laughed when I saw what the author said about sympathizing with Dobby and what kind of proletarian he was. Can such a house elf be considered a proletarian? Even if he is an intelligent race, he is also the product of a failed war with humans. It seems unreasonable for the protagonist to sympathize with him. Brother, you still have to sympathize with an alien...,,, Didn't you say that the protagonist is a crazy batch of scientific researchers? A person who has appeared a few times in books and on the screen. After the failure of the war with humans, you have to sympathize with aliens...,, Sigh Finally, I want to say something, don't write red if you don't have that foundation. If you don't have enough foundation, it will only make people feel that they are wrong, random, and disgusting. Magic has come out. What do you think of the proletarians? It is impossible for the proletarians to revolution here. They are not the basic base. The uprising will only take a little wizard time. Let's write wizards.

It looks great I didn't expect much from this book after looking at the name. After all, there are several books on the Ke system and HP starting point, and they all combine nondescript ones. But! This book really has an internal flavor. As for what others say about being gay, I don't care. It's much better than having to have sex with Hermione every time I have HP. By the way, the author's skills are really good, and I shed tears of uneducated eyes just by looking at them.

Lich, the king of leave, quickly use your power and ask him for another month.

Let me make a little analogy here. It's like you now know for sure that a person has five million real banknotes, and then you happen to have five million fake banknotes that are difficult to distinguish. And you also know very clearly that these five million real banknotes will have no use at all except being displayed in a glass cabinet in the next year, and will be destroyed soon. And you only need to move your fingers to turn the fake banknotes into real banknotes. Can you hold back at this time? As for the character of the protagonist, first of all, my setting is that the protagonist has been wandering on the streets of London for several months. In these months, he has stolen everything he should and should not steal in order to survive. How can stealing a magic stone be such a heinous crime? It's just that wizards are more noble than Muggles. It doesn't matter if someone steals from a Muggle, but it's a heinous crime to steal from a wizard. Finally, please read the title of the book "Harry Potter and the Old Ones" carefully. I clearly wrote the five words "Kevin worldview" in the title of the book. It is better to find innocent Japanese under the atomic bomb than to find good people in the Ket worldview. This is more likely.

Harry Potter's appearance at its peak

To be honest, I'm very gay. I barely read about a hundred chapters and I feel psychologically uncomfortable. The author has always emphasized that there is no emotional line for the sake of convenience in the later stage. However, whether it is the protagonist's language or some small actions, as well as the description of the interaction with the trio, it does not make people feel that he is writing about a man. Instead, it seems like a woman has time-traveled into a man's body.

The gay flavor is too strong and really disgusting, just like a glass of ice-cold lemon juice with a few shit floating in it. The imaginary plot is very strange, but the author's unique taste always makes you sick from time to time.

Tied, waiting to be raised. . . 🤐 On the one hand, it seems that the protagonist matches Lao Deng and the others, but Harry's plot feels a bit prominent? When Harry entered the wizarding world, he met someone whose life experience was close to his own. He had a better temperament than him, and it was not because of his status as a savior. He also had various friends who helped him. It was normal for him to be dependent on him, but it felt like the author had written too much specifically for the big knife in the back. . . Would it be more harmonious if we added some psychological struggle? For example, with Sirius, it felt like Hermione could notice it, but Harry didn't feel anything. . . Then I'm actually a little curious about what the author said before about Harry being bent. . . A few more questions. . . For example, when Sirius got the Marauder's Map, he didn't seem to use it to see where Peter was. Why didn't Harry wonder later why Sirius could run with the protagonist's name? There are also typos in the chapter that need to be corrected 😭

I thought it looked good, but I didn't expect it to be a big one.

Although this is Klein, I have always felt that this is very suitable for the protagonist

[Fan] Come on, author, don't be too coo!

A rare HP fan art, the protagonist doesn't lick, and has a positive outlook on things. It's now fully ordered, and I hope to see more 😁 Can you add a preview? 😜

The author, I would like to ask if the protagonist and Harry will be together in the future? I also want to see the main character wearing a wedding dress. Is it convenient to disclose it? You can just return to full stop if you don't let it go.

It feels like this protagonist purely treats everyone in the HP world as a tool. He only talks about his guilt for his purpose, but actually has no psychological burden at all. Well, since we have written about such egoistic protagonists, and later became popular, doesn't the author feel disconnected?

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