The Elf User Starting from Fairy Tail

Well, how should I put it... The setting of this book is copied from "All-round Fantasy". That's not to say that I copied it all, but that I read the book three times. I just hope there will be a different world and ending. I am very optimistic about this book. Come on, it's all booked~

Author, this is no longer a second design. You are basically trying to change it under the cover of Fairy Tail.

I say long live Wendy and long live Loli! The heroine needs to be Wendy

A simpler story respects the original work more, and is equivalent to adding a character to the original story. The first volume "Young Song Xing" is a little boring to write, but the second volume "One Piece" has more of its own content.

A lot of information is inaccurate. For example, Macao is the Purple Flame, not the Emotional Flame. For example, Smoker, Drake and Akainu are not from the same class. Smoker had not joined the Navy before Roger was executed, and Drake only joined the Navy after the surgery fruit incident. It is impossible for these two people to be in the Navy now. After all, Roger has not yet become the Pirate King.

I see, it's really similar to "All-Round Fantasy" written by Ru Qing Ru Chuang...

The literary talent is average, and the writing style is retro. It feels like the author spent ten years in prison before being released.

I came for Fairy Tail, but ended up with a messy, crazy second design, and even changed the original settings. Elves + Fairy Tail are very good themes, but why add a comprehensive comic?

You, Fairy Tail, still make a comprehensive comic that makes me numb. You also add a mess of settings. Is it interesting to have a hodgepodge?

Although Larulas is a little annoying, I can bear it, but if I am stronger than the summoned objects and don't want to watch it at all, wouldn't it be better to just write about warriors?

I don't write about the good Fairy Tail, I only write about it in a mess. He is obviously an elf user, but there are not many elves. Goodbye

The settings regarding the elves are already perfect according to the original work, but you have to make random changes to them, making them nondescript.

It's a good dog, just evolve into a wind speed dog, but it also has 3 stages of evolution. I don't understand why it has to have 3 stages of evolution, and then go to the magic world to box, then you might as well write a boxing wish from the beginning. After reading the first few chapters, I have no desire to read it

Mirajane is not that weak, even if she is ungrown, you are too deliberate.

If it's Fairy Tail, I recommend it. Plus, there's Larulas in it. I recommend it even more. Besides, the author's writing is good and it's basically to my liking. When I read Chapter 6, it was basically a good one. Unfortunately, there were a lot of bugs, which made it a bit awkward for old Fairy Tail fans. I hope the author can correct the small bug Ex: Natsu was led by the guild leader, Erza was me, Gray, I'm not sure There are also multiple orders for joining the union...

I just came in after seeing the elves, but it ruined my outlook on life and left.

The world of Fairy Tail is so good, why do you have to travel through time to do other things?

Let's talk about it, many of the places mentioned above are similar to Omni Fantasy, the plot is also similar, even the method of time travel and the identity of the protagonist are the same, and the descriptions of the chaos surrounding Tenrou Island are exactly the same!

What the hell. Changed beyond recognition

Is this unlimited streaming? Or just Fairy Tail?

In Chapter Nine, he died of poison. The first setting is that Gu Wu endured it. Before the second setting, the family developed the mental method. My advice is to paddle away.

Sorry, I've been poisoned to death after reading ten chapters. There's something wrong with the timeline. Mira was already using magic to kill monsters before she entered Fairy Tail. The order in which the main characters entered was wrong. Gray is ten years old and still doesn't know magic. Where did the ice magic he learned before go? In the magical world, I play martial arts and weapons. I have practiced more than 20 kinds of weapons for several years and it is impossible to be proficient in it. The result is like cheating to torture Natsu The dialogue is also very awkward, forcing Mira to have a good impression. . . It might look much better if the elves alone were in Fairy Tail

The subject matter is indeed quite novel, but the writing is terrible. I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 9. Abandoned

The more I wrote, the more OOC I started to write. Maybe I started writing without seeing the plot behind it. Maybe I didn't even see Tianlang Island. I obviously wanted to write about elves, but also about ancient martial arts, and later about armor transformation. . . . . . . . . There is also the Elf Era, where it is said that the male protagonist may have been an Elf royal family in his previous life. The eldest sister has died in the Qing Dynasty, so you don't need to imitate Yuan Shikai's self-styled here. . . . .

I'm really speechless at the beginning, I can't even read it

The beginning made me lose all desire to read it. It's rare for a fic to have nearly 2 million words, and the subject matter is pretty good (´-ω-`). As a result, the plot and the beginning created a bond with Mirajane, and then I briefly read the chapters. After a while, I ran behind the pirates, became a god-killer, and then went to cultivate immortality. Instantly, I lost all desire to read it😔

If I just write about Fairy Tail, my grades won't be too bad, but if I write about Pirates, I won't want to read it.

There were a lot of typos, which made it uncomfortable to read. I couldn't stand Chapter 35 anymore. It's easy to change settings as long as you can talk about the past of the garden, but the writing is not strong enough and there are a lot of typos. What do you think?

The pirate timeline is so messed up that I can't stand it anymore

Since you have chosen the Goldfinger Pokémon, just write this directly, why do you have to make a fuss about the Ancient Martial Arts Master? ! If you want to write about it, you can say that it is a skill given by the system. What kind of past life does it have to be rehabilitated? There's something wrong with my head. This is a fan fiction, not a modern urban novel. Can't you find a place to insert this ancient martial arts thing? Return to the past life, Ha Te😤