The Dark World at My Fingertips

Author, do you know the concept of a weapon weighing more than 20 kilograms? Let me tell you this. The Miao sword I am practicing now is 145 centimeters long and weighs 3.7 Kilograms. It is difficult for me to practice now. I can swing a sword weighing more than 20 kilograms freely with a weight of 40 kilograms. In ancient times, even if it was not as good as Xiang Yu and Lu Bu, it is probably not far behind. One kilogram in the Three Kingdoms period is equivalent to 220 grams today. Lu Bu's Fang Tian Hua Ji weighed 95 kilograms, which is equivalent to 45 kilograms today. Zhao Yun's gun weighed 45 kilograms, which is equivalent to more than 20 kilograms today. A sword weighing more than 20 kilograms should no longer be called a Han sword. It should be called the Great Sword of Demacia. I'm not targeting you, I'm just telling you what a terrifying concept it is to be able to wield a weapon weighing more than 20 kilograms freely while carrying a weight of 40 kilograms... Based on my more than ten years of experience in reading thousands of magical secrets, your book is also very good in the same type. Come on!!! Finally, don't be an eunuch, otherwise I will really send you a big sword weighing more than 20 kilograms.

End this relationship as soon as possible. What is the concept of blood and fire for more than three hundred years? We have only been in love for three years, and all the emotions have been exhausted in such a long time. Why are you still struggling here? If you don't have the time, it's better to end it happily and start a new life.

Using something that had great influence in the past as a tool to attract readers is a common method for online articles. The original origin is unknown. The earliest work that can be accurately found is Infinite Horror, the founder of Infinite Style (there should be earlier ones, but the image is not deep, and it is estimated that the influence is not so). It used movies. Later authors introduced other elements such as games, TV series, and famous online articles, and quickly developed data flow stories. From constant time-traveling, the protagonist traveled to a relatively fixed world as a single player. However, I discovered a phenomenon: Except for infinite streaming, most time-travel games, when giving plug-ins to the protagonist, give almost all elements of the game theme to the protagonist alone. I guess the author wanted to give full play to the appeal of the game elements. Take the commonly used World of Warcraft as an example. Assuming that the protagonist's plug-in is to explode the soldiers of Warcraft, then the protagonist will be set to be able to explode all the soldiers in World of Warcraft. I guess the authors all thought that--some people liked the ax-swinging power of the green-skinned orcs, and some people thought that the human alliance's minions were full of plate armor, so they might as well have them all, so that all readers would be happy. But, here comes the question: When will the Alliance and the Horde be at peace in the game plot? Either at war or on the way to war. The hatred between the two sides is as deep as the sea. Greenskins and human infantry both working for the protagonist? Isn't it against the law? Can you imagine a situation where a sword master who wants to kill all humans has to work with a human paladin? If it is written like this, will these elements still be the same? Can it still attract people? At most, it may attract a few people for a while, but after a dozen or twenty chapters, the unrecognizable transformation will not please both parties, and the book will gradually be sold out. This is just an example. For example, let the protagonist wear a certain game template of a priest's stick, and then find it unexciting, and then let him summon skeleton soldiers. People with these two abilities in the game are originally mortal enemies... And so on. Will have similar effects as mentioned above. Because of this kind of thing, most of the online articles brought into the game were rejected. A few were okay for a while. If you pay attention, you will find that the authors did not reference elements that are incompatible with each other. For example, only the content of one profession in the role-playing category is brought in, and other elements in the game that are obviously hostile to it are not referenced. Actually... Going back to the old online article, I personally think that the solution to this contradiction was given at that time: as long as there is more than one person who travels through time, but a group of people, each with their own abilities, isn't it over? Why can't the infinite team battle mode be applied to a fixed world? For example, they are all stories about fighting and dominating in ancient times. It can be told in several lines. Five people can travel at the same time to five different corners of the fictional world and get plug-ins from five different camps in the same game. Among these five people, there are enemies and friends. And as the story goes on, the enemy and we are constantly changing, and they are constantly fighting with their own plug-ins. In this way, all elements of the game are present, which can attract more people. At the same time, everyone's abilities have no big bugs and are very coordinated. However, so far, very few authors have written this.

After reading a few chapters, I felt a bit choked up by the poison, and I couldn't express some words quickly. As a veteran who lived for three hundred years before being reborn, he was betrayed, betrayed, imprisoned and tortured to death. After rebirth, not only will you be full of rage and prepare for revenge, but at least you will concentrate on accumulating strength. After all, you have a treasure, and if you don't have strength, you will die in the end. Instead, you have written several chapters with an ex-girlfriend who gave up on you. Brother, who still remembers her after three hundred years (т⌣̀_⌣́). I admire you for remembering your classmates in elementary school, and your grandpa, a high-ranking official who wanted to save his college roommate with a treasure. Ha, a high-ranking official will have a lot of people paying attention even if he dies, not to mention someone who was about to die but was saved. This is equivalent to It's the same as leaving five thousand yuan outside the door of your house. There won't be many people you see who won't take it away. It's just looking for death. As for finding a backer, it's more funny. Power belongs to the personal world, and strength is the biggest backer (*￣m￣). My personal suggestion is that it doesn't matter how you write this book, but if you want to be a professional, don't write it so naively. Even if you write about a ruthless madman, some people will read it, but no one wants to read a fool who can only live by relying on the aura given by the author to the protagonist, or a fool who thinks he is smart.

Basically, all the poisonous points are gathered together. The classmates are all the children of high-ranking officials. To save the grandfather, they force to show off, force to show off, force to be open-minded, and force to be mature. What a waste of the dark theme

After reading so many comments, they all say that the author's emotional drama is toxic, so I won't talk about the emotional drama, and let's talk about other aspects. First, after reading 30 chapters, 90% of the content is about a live-action dark game. I don't talk about the plot, it is really a game. It feels like the author is working as a game anchor. Second, in the previous life, the protagonist exposed the equipment of the dark world and was hunted for hundreds of years. This time, when he was still a weakling, he took out the healing potion and cured his friend's elder for the sake of so-called friendship. Then the friend's family exposed the protagonist in a very high-profile manner, and then used the protagonist's healing potion as a favor, and then various big shots went to find the protagonist. Whether it is poisonous or not is up to you. Thirdly, my first love of three years was snatched away by a young master from an aristocratic family, and I didn't even let go of it. The young master from aristocratic family didn't give up and sent someone to remove one of the protagonist's legs. As a result, the protagonist killed the two young men who were sent there. He also verbally warned the young master from aristocratic family over the phone. Then he just waited for the young master from different levels to provoke and retaliate. Shennong, is this poisonous or not? Anyway, I am about to be poisoned to death.

The relationship line has been revised from scratch, thank you for your suggestions! Some of the points I forgot to mention when writing, resulting in some awkwardness in the later text, have been adjusted. Finally, I welcome everyone's reading and suggestions after discovering any problems. Thank you.

He was originally chased to death for more than two hundred years because he exposed the dark world. After being reborn, he will be exposed again in Chapter 12? You are so wise. Poison hair.

Stop at chapter twenty-three! The subject matter is okay, but the plot is really poorly written. 1 There is no ex-girlfriend anymore. It's enough to still miss her after being betrayed. 2 I still want to give away potions. I was like this in my previous life and I don't have a long memory. 3 In the park, someone saw him hacking away. . . With the virtue of pig's feet, it is true that he deserved to be hunted down in his previous life.

A swordmaster who has lived for three hundred years, is always vigilant but is sneak-attacked by the lowest level monster, the Wire-haired Rat. And then he predicts that he cannot defeat five sinking demons, but after being discovered, he easily kills the sinking demons without any injuries. predicts that he can kill all the zombies, but is almost killed in reverse. I don't know how to complain about the author's character and plot.