One Piece: Healing System

If you leave, there will be a pitfall in the first chapter. Although Eiichiro Oda is a manga artist, but if you travel to One Piece, it will be a real world. If the red-haired arm is bitten off, it can only mean that he deliberately broke the arm to make Luffy feel guilty and take the path of a pirate. As a result, the protagonist directly prescribed a god-level treatment to grow the red-haired arm.

Believe it or not, there is a man who wants 100 million. He wants 100 yuan. From the first chapter when he refused to go on Luffy's ship with Shanks, he is the top crane top red. To be honest, whether it is writing later or based on basic logical thinking, it is the best. . . Bad choice. With Luffy, I basically know half of the process. Readers want to see something different.

Is it better to watch anime than just watch the anime and come to read your writing?

Is this following a boat flow? To be honest, it's rare to write about yofune-ya now. Most readers don't read yofune-ya. They usually read navy, dark pirate, underworld, and righteous pirates, because many authors can't write a better protagonist than Oda!

Hong? Luotian, Youhong, what, a lot of typos

Ah, a long sigh of nostalgia. It feels almost the same as my first book. As someone who has experienced it, I don't know whether to talk about it or not... The emotional driving force of pig's feet must be highlighted. It doesn't have to be pig's feet, but it must have emotional driving force, and this is what impresses every reader and attracts readers to read. In other words, what does the pig's foot want to do when it comes to this world? Farm! Still cool? Like falling in love with Luffy? Otherwise, the main plot... Maybe in this book, you will continue to fight and kill mediocrely until you reach the One Piece, the treasure of One Piece. Of course, if you dump it somewhere in the middle, it will become a running account, so you can't say for sure. While there are not many words at the beginning of the game, try to save some and fill in more daily life at sea outside of combat, such as fishing and seafood dinners. Or come to a small island and have a small unit theme like the movie version... Well, after all, I am not the author of this book. All I can say is cheers and support. It depends on how you write and think. Come on! I am Shui Taiwei, and I speak for myself.

It's really cool to copy a god-level healing technique without changing its name.

I originally wanted to watch it, but you repeatedly emphasized that you are hundreds of years old, and there is no sense of substitution. Can't you just wear it cleanly? It must be hundreds of years old, and he repeatedly emphasized it. And then you are still so impulsive when you are hundreds of years old, and you are still acting like this when you are hundreds of years old. Poisoned to death.

The protagonist's name changed in several chapters, and then became louder and lowered. Looking at the confusion, I suggested that the previous one should be changed.

An invincible start in the previous life, this. . . No, this is not an apocalyptic plot. We need the help of this past life experience. Everyone knows the pirate animation.