Where Can the Witch Escape?

Wuhu, the classic fairy tale from Kai Da is back. I hope I can get back the touch of writing Shen Huang and write another classic.

"Da Feng's Watcher" sparked a craze for articles about catching monsters in court, and veteran experts like Kaihuang also consulted forensic literature and joined the ranks. The title of the book is a bit confusing, but similar titles seem to be very popular, such as Where to Escape/Leave Me/Please Respect Yourself, and Where to Find the Monster. Perhaps this is the editor's request, thinking that such a title is more attractive. However, it is true that compared to "Dafeng's Watchman", this book is simpler and older, and lacks the freshness of the times. Changing the title to a more serious one, such as "The Six Daosi of the Great Jin Dynasty" and "The Demon-Slayer of the Great Jin Dynasty" might attract less precise book friends, and the results would not be better than now. The story background of this book is based on the story between Ming Yingzong and Ming Dynasty Zong as a template, creating an imaginary world of monks and demons. The protagonist Li Xuan lives in Li Xuan, a forensic police officer who worked for the Criminal Technical Detachment of the Municipal Public Security Bureau in his previous life. After time travel, he became the second son of Uncle Chengyi's family and worked in the Liudao Division. The so-called Liudaosi is a semi-official organization established thousands of years ago by six schools of Confucianism, Buddhism, Taoism, Mohism, Legalism, and Military. It is responsible for slaying demons and eliminating demons, and its power is implicitly superior to the imperial power. But not long after time traveling, while listening to music in Goulan, he was framed for murder and almost went to jail. At the same time, because the second prince and Princess Changle were attacked and disappeared in the Yangtze River, my father was dismissed from the navy admiral and was confined at home. The world is hot and cold. Not only are some colleagues in the workplace turning against each other, violent female bosses are also becoming more demanding. Moreover, the blind date girl also slapped the protagonist in the face in public, saying that the down-and-out protagonist was a toad who wanted to eat swan meat, and even asked the licking dog to find trouble all the time. In addition, he also provoked a super ferocious female ghost in red. The evil spirit naturally invaded his body, and he was about to die soon. The beginning is well polished, the suspense is high, the pace is tight, the heroines come one after another, and the plot is laid without any confusion. Later, you can access the rhythm, upgrades and layout that the author is good at. As an online novel that has gradually evolved from a suspenseful fairy tale to a daily romance about a harem, let's talk about solving crimes and the harem, but before that I'd like to mention some unique practices. When Li Xuan practices ice-based exercises, he must visualize cold objects. Li Xuan is not a stickler for rules. He visualized the modern liquid dichlorodifluoromethane, which is softer to the touch, lower in density, but full of cold power, and the effect is very good. Later, he gradually visualized other refrigerants such as liquid ammonia, sulfur dioxide, methane, liquid nitrogen, liquid helium, etc., So that the cold power he exerted when he was in a low state was ten times that of the same kind. Don't dwell on the question of which is heavier: 2 pounds of cotton or 1 pound of iron. This is not the case in the real world. While practicing the ice and thunder method, Li Xuan imagined that he used flammable ice to generate electricity, and then used thunder and lightning to cool down, completing a complementary cycle. The rate of growth of true energy is so high that it explodes. The first type of perpetual motion machine was created. After that, there will be electronic transitions, superconductivity, and using computer language to analyze skills, spiritual energy, and so on. It is a slight improvement of the immortal cultivation method by modern people's thinking. In this world, the original method of solving crimes should be very unscientific. For example, you can smell out the traces of a murderer, conjure the souls of the dead, or read the minds of suspects. If this is not possible, there should be a reasonable explanation. Otherwise, using forensic science to solve crimes would feel weird and out of place. Besides, the forensic literacy of the pioneers is not that high. Li Xuan's real golden finger is the "Replay of the Dead". The vague memory images of the deceased when they are about to die will appear in his mind. The case is a bit stiff, as if the prisoner did it deliberately just so that Li Xuan could solve it. These cases cannot support the core of the novel, they are just a layer of skin that floats on the surface. Feedback from readers was also poor, so later content in this area was toned down. There are four main female protagonists. The arrogant female boss Jiang Hanyun is violent and arrogant. She has a crush on Li Xuan when she was 12 years old. He has a strong sense of justice, loves his subordinates, and is used to solving all problems with violence. When he was seriously injured, he made a symbiosis contract with the fox monster, and his body transformed into a half-demon. He needed to cultivate with Li Xuan to restrain the fox transformation. As the woman who is apparently closest to the protagonist, she is criticized by other female protagonists and contributes scene after scene of Shura field to the plot. Xue Yunrou, the direct descendant of the Tianshi Mansion, has a wealth of wealth, unparalleled elegance, fame in the two capitals, and is the most beautiful woman in the world. She is the woman that all the martial arts nobles in Jinling most want to marry. During the Ghost Ghost Festival, he and Li Xuan entered the underworld together. From the beginning, they looked down upon him with disdain, then ended up finding nothing, until he was rescued by Li Xuan, and his heart secretly promised. She even asked her cousin Jiang Hanyun if she was in love with Li Xuan. She was going to fight for his love. She was both gentle and sinister. The real identity of the super ferocious female ghost in red is Princess Yu Hongshang of Changle. She had her eyes gouged out, her tongue cut off, her voice bones taken away, and her life and memory taken away in a way that the world changes and the stars change. As Li Xuan's guardian spirit, the female ghost in red is interdependent. She not only helps him get through a lot of troubles in the early stage, but also consumes his life and forces him to work hard to become stronger. Although she is not the Princess Changle who must be the protagonist of the time-travel novel in the early Tang Dynasty, Li Xuan will certainly become Princess Changle's consort. The vicious purple butterfly witch Xia Nanyan (Luo Yan) is good at disguise and her identity is confusing. She is a thief who robs the rich and gives to the poor. She has an excellent reputation among civilians. She is also a wanted criminal in the Six Daosi Division. He and Li Xuan have a close connection and a very high synchronization rate, so they fall in love and kill each other. After the woman disguised herself as a man and became Li Xuan's subordinate, their relationship gradually became closer, and she was even considered to have a habit of cutting sleeves. After the Lan Yue Tower incident, his identity was revealed, and Neptune Fish Pond was delighted. In addition, important female supporting characters include the humanoid Baidu Le Qianqian, the mother's personal maid Leng Yurou, the dragon king Ao Shuying, the jade unicorn Meng Qingfan, etc. Of course, the blind date girl Xi Xueer is not a female supporting character, she is just a small villain in the early stage, and was later sold to the Jiaofang Division. The setting of the heroine feels a bit vague and does not fit well with the background. But if you ignore their environment and agree with the protagonist's attraction to them, the scenes in the Shura field where they get along are still lively and vivid. The veteran author is still very stable in terms of plot fluency and rhythm control.

A blind guess, the ending of Crystal Palace is very good, but Xue Yunrou will definitely not get the first blood, because if Xue Yunrou gets the first blood, it will not be easy for Li Xuan to continue with others. The only way is for the protagonist to have an accident with others first, and then start a game. In this Shura field, the protagonist is trying to settle things, and the better choice is probably Jiang Hanyun. Although she is very fierce, she has a good temper and is easy to coax (easy to coax and focus on). In this way, Xue Yunrou will have two choices, leave, or continue. If she chooses to leave, then So this strategy can be put aside for a while and then brought back when the time is right (but in reality it is often easy to be poached, which is a high-risk ending), so Li Xuan will probably try his best to keep her, so that after the first step of compromise, it will be very easy Take it easy, and maybe Xue Yunrou will give it to Li Xuan directly because of the stimulation. Le Qianqian is more suitable in the next step. It is best to give up the baby, because Le Qianqian is in a unstable state now, and it is easy to just take it with strong medicine. Le Qianqian's character They will not fight for the throne, but Jiang and Xue will at most be a little angry and start a wave of Shura fields. As long as the two women are settled, they will change their plans to win over Le Qianqian because they can't do anything. Le Qianqian will most likely be fooled by Xue, but she will definitely be killed because of Jiang. If Luo Yan is vacillating and unable to make a decisive impact, then it's time for Luo Yan to join. It's actually very simple for Luo Yan to join, because she will most likely take the initiative. However, if Luo Yan joins, she will be muddying the waters. Don't think it's too easy for others if she doesn't get the rightful place. , In this way, if the harem is in chaos, there will be less resistance for princesses like Leng Yurou and others to come in. In the end, Xue will probably join forces, and Leng Yurou will probably just not participate with Li Xuan or help Jiang to prevent her from losing. Princess (but not There must be her) most likely to stand up to Xue openly, but in fact he is the same as Luo Yan. In the end, Long Jun is probably an attacker and has his own faction. The same goes for the female ghosts. With this internal fighting in the harem, the Shura field will not be able to affect Li Xuan himself, and the ending of the Crystal Palace will probably be achieved. Will it make me more serious if I talk so seriously?

Personally, when I saw Chapter 188, I felt that there were a lot of flaws in the logic. But personally I feel that one of the biggest shortcomings is that the combination of history and fantasy is not done well. The author explains why the imperial court was so leaky in history. But have you ever considered whether there are demons, ghosts, and awe-inspiring righteousness in the book? Literati have fighting power, Taoist monks have it, and doctors have it. At the same time, there are also semi-independent forces such as Dragon Lord and Yin Cao. Force is no longer completely controlled by warriors. When a town rebels, is it reasonable that Nanjing, a huge city, cannot find experts to rescue them? Is it reasonable that no other experts can be seen except the Li family in the two major incidents?

About science and law. It is acceptable to rely on advanced system regulations to achieve fame and gain. However, relying on force to calm down to overcome greed, not using force to overcome lust, not living long enough to overcome the desire for power, having too many relationships and touching one's heart, picking up people's teeth and asking questions, these behaviors of relying on external forces to get through are not honorable, and cheating is not conducive to shaping the image of the protagonist. It is not easy to wear the high hat of being a scholar and a protector of the law, and it is not as straightforward as coming out directly to cheat. Haoran's righteousness is a double-edged sword that can attack the enemy but also limits oneself. If he accepts the position of Neo-Confucian Guardian, can Li Xuan have a clear conscience and maintain his righteousness? If he doesn't accept it, is he confessing or covering up? I am not satisfied with this plot, let's see how it will be dealt with in the follow-up. Keep your body upright, uphold your heart and be fair, act with restraint, and speak with discipline. If you want to create this image, there are many things to pay attention to.

It's You - On Nanjing At the beginning of the book, Li Xuan was arrested in a restaurant and wanted to be framed. It was Jiang Hanyun who intervened to change the situation. The last words of the murderer Wei Shi were: "My wish has been fulfilled, but I still hate you." The mysterious woman and the female ghost are possessed. After all the foreshadowing at the beginning was revealed, I suddenly realized that it was you, echoing back and forth. From beginning to end, it must have taken a lot of effort to set up the outline, and the Nanjing chapter is full of exquisiteness. As the opening chapter of the book, it is used to introduce the story background, characters, levels, forces and other settings. The Nanjing chapter is quite good in bringing out the personalities and backgrounds of the main characters. Li Xuan, Jiang Hanyun, Xue Yunrou, Zidie, Le Qianqian, Hongyi Nai As for Li Chengji, Li Yan, Su Zhaojun, Mrs. Liu, Qiu Qianqiu, etc., They all have written personalities. But Li Xuan's sacrifice suit settings are used too much. It should be replaced later, and Li Xuan should make his own decision, rather than just being affected by the suit. Only then can you feel the growth of the protagonist. True and fake Chang Le, Jiang Hanyun/Li Xuan's childhood memories, Xue Yunrou is strong but needs to To be supported, etc., Are all well written, and even Tianmastiff is very unique. The chapters in which it appears are always gags and smiles. As a supporting role to adjust the atmosphere, it is fully qualified. Next, I will talk about the problems I think. What attracts me most to reading the book is actually the gorgeous and passionate battle scenes, the explosion after layers of foreshadowing, and the scenes before, during and after the battle. The battle of wits, the back and forth between the enemy and ourselves, these are increasingly rare in Destiny and Demon Girl. The Demon Girl so far, the most interesting battle is Huanglinkeng. The psychological changes of both sides and their respective trump cards are described, but they are still not as good as before the Great Rebellion. Whether it is Yue Yu versus Haotian and Kunpeng in Junlin, or Zhongzong Shou in Shenhuang Fighting alone against Daomen Guerrilla or Zhang Xin several times, Ying Chong and Zhuang Wudao's layout are all evocative. In the battle of Xiaoling, Changle's body and soul merged into one, and the extreme yin and yang merged, but the effects were all described by others. Among the three punches against Yu Yanjun, none were shown, which is a pity. For example, in the first punch, it can be written that the cold and heat switch broke through the barrier. These problems are actually It is also related to the characteristics of today's online novels. Everyone is eager to see the protagonist make a comeback and the villain lose, and they have to update every day. In order to meet the requirements of book fans, they can only speed up, and inevitably there will be a lack of details. It is recommended that in the future, the comments during the battle can be appropriately reduced and streamlined. Needless to say, the repeated parts should be used to convince book fans with descriptions of attack effects. In addition, Li Xuan's level setting is too low. , Not refreshing enough. Since Yu Jianji was injured and Helian Fulong was seriously injured, let's postpone the fight for the crown prince for more than half a year. The court should also provide disaster relief and rectify the canal. I hope that when fighting for the crown prince, Li Xuan will be at least a sixth-level building. Based on the setting of this book, Li Xuan of the sixth-level building should already have top-notch third-level combat power to conquer the young elites in Beijing.

There are more than 100 pictures, brother, you are still in the third level 🤤🤤, can't you break through this realm?

After reading Chapter 200, tell me your personal views on the characters in the book. The characters of the protagonist's relatives are a bit stiff and deliberate. They feel unrounded, unreal, and seem a bit naive. The author wanted to write about a feeling of home, reflecting the noisy and noisy atmosphere of a family but also the warmth and tenderness within it, but I didn't think he had a good grasp of it. For example, between father and son, Lee Seung-ki is a great master, not to mention a strict wife, and his relationship with his children is like being in a relationship. However, he is a man who cares about the common people, but he always exudes a funny atmosphere. Between brothers, I really don't understand Li Yan. What I can tell is that this elder brother cares about his younger brother, but he always wants to find trouble for his younger brother, make him look embarrassed, and regain face in front of his younger brother. His words are also extremely sarcastic. Seriously speaking, this kind of character will not appear in reality, because he has a very split personality. This kind of writing is also found in novels, and I have read it a lot, but the sentence is still not rounded and a bit too much. Another example is the fight between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law. The only positive description of the fight between Liu and Su Zhaojun in the plot I saw was a bit trivial in my opinion. It was like a joke. It was not like something an adult could do at all. The writing seemed a bit small. There is also the triangular relationship between the character Qiu Qianqiu and the protagonist's parents. I was speechless when I saw it. Does the protagonist's family relationship need to be so complicated? Finally, let's talk about the heroines. The character Jiang Hanyun was well written, with strong tenderness and strong character. She was not pretentious or pretentious. She had a slight emotion with the protagonist but didn't know how to describe it. It was well handled. The character Xue Yunrou feels very ordinary, not because she is backward. This character does not capture the connotation and the character does not stand up. First of all, she is a Taoist. The character card also mentions a Taoist nun friend of mine, but I did not see any words about her relationship with the Taoist nun. It is not surprising that this character does not match the initial character design. (It may also be the reason why I didn't see the back part) The two characters of the human form Du Niang and Hong Yi are not many, but the impression is still good. They are soft and weak, which is pitiful. Yes, Hong Yi feels pitiful to me, but her personality is that of an emperor. Leng Yurou is a woman who really embodies her name. She is cold and gentle. I always feel that many people in the book are like this. The overall book itself is good for taste, even if there are some small complaints, I am also looking forward to the subsequent plot development, as well as what new heroines will appear in the future, and the more exciting Shura field, Jie Jie Jie. Some simple personal opinions, you are welcome to correct me, thank you!

This book is unexpectedly well written. If it hadn't been for the ghost American Immortal King that lost all its fans, the book should have had a good start. However, although it is good now, there are new books in the same genre such as The Watcher, Where Are the Monsters, and Fire Bites. The author is a bit pressured to do well in this book. If there is an outline to control the plot, this book should be rated as Xiancao-.

To be honest, the facial expressions in the first two books were so severe that everyone spoke in the same tone and acted in the same style. Even with their names covered, it was impossible to tell who it was. The protagonist of the previous book, Destiny, was a little different from the others in the early stage, but I couldn't stand it later. But! ! This book seems pretty good at the beginning

Not bad, not bad. This book is worth reading. As an old bookworm who has read 6,000 hours on QQ, this book is worth recommending. The writing is very good.

Watching this extra episode made me very uncomfortable. In my opinion, Li Xuan before time travel and Li Xuan after time travel are not the same person. Jiang Hanyun's fondness for Li Xuan when she was a boy has been inherited by Li Xuan now, but it makes me uncomfortable. After all, Li Xuan was a libertine before he was transported through time travel. There is no need to clear his name and he cannot be cleansed, so just let him go. I don't want to understand him, and I don't want to take his place. It was very uncomfortable to watch.

On a whim, Li Xuan took the path of sacrificing himself for others, regardless of whether he wanted to or not. Will it be like this in the later or later stages? If Li Xuan truly sacrifices his life for mercy, his Crystal Palace will certainly not agree. In order not to make them sad, castration was used, which only cut him out of their hearts, and then died peacefully. Even bigger, cut him out of everyone's heart. No, I'm scared by my own thoughts

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Discuss the best tactics against cavalry in history The best tactics for farming people against nomadic cavalry in China and even the world were invented by Li Jing and Li Wei Gong of the Tang Dynasty. This tactic requires a combination of foot and riding. This tactic also has an interesting historical background. Tang Taizong asked Hou Junji to learn the art of war from Li Jing, and Li Jing taught Hou Junji this set of cavalry tactics. This tactic can deal with two or three times nomadic cavalry. Hou Junji was very dissatisfied. He wanted to learn Li Jing's strategy of taking advantage of the opportunity to make a surprise attack and destroy tens of thousands with thousands. Li Jing was unwilling to teach him because this kind of military strategy could also be used for rebellion. Hou Junji claimed that Li Jing was unwilling to teach him the art of war because he wanted to rebel. Li Jing claimed that he had taught Hou Junji enough. The tactic is actually very simple, and can be summed up in just two sentences: Use infantry to fight cavalry, and use cavalry to pursue. When it comes to battle, use elite first-class infantry (frontmen, crossbowmen) and nomadic cavalry to fight head-on. The second-rate infantry (garrisons, to put it bluntly, they are the heavy soldiers doing chores) protect the cavalry The cavalry dismounts to eat and feed the horses, and will raise the horse power After the elite infantry in front repel the nomadic cavalry, the cavalry who have eaten and drank enough and recharged their horses mount their horses to pursue. Since our cavalry is very powerful, the enemy's escaping nomadic cavalry will most likely not be able to outrun our cavalry, and the gains will be very high. In the war between China and the nomadic people for more than a thousand years, when the armies of the two sides met, it was never difficult for the army of the farming people to defeat the nomadic cavalry. The difficulty is that even if the battle is won, it is difficult to kill many enemies, because the nomadic cavalry has good mobility and will run away if it cannot be defeated. I'll make a comeback and be with you again. This tactic can use the limited cavalry of the farming people to increase the number of enemies killed on a large scale, leaving the nomads with broken bones every time they lose a battle. However, this tactic requires relatively sufficient training of elite infantry so that they are not afraid of the enemy's horses.

In the open book, there are no good people in Buddhism, but all the famous Buddhist monks with names are black-hearted things.

Write some comments Actually, I have been writing a book about pioneering for a long time, and the subject matter has changed several times. This time, after Shenhuang and Evil Queen, I write about subjects with a lot of interpersonal interaction. So far, the results are good. This kind of book is actually difficult to write, because there are themes to promote, and at the same time, daily plots and cases must be integrated , foreshadowing in the incident, describing the changes in the character's mentality and emotional development, it is actually very brain-burning, and it has to take into account daily updates, which is not easy. What's even more troublesome is that it is difficult to reconcile. Some readers like to practice fighting, some like to solve cases and reason, some like to be slapped in the face, and some like Shura Fields. How should they be included in the plot? The distribution ratio can also give readers a sense of involvement and identity, and it is very troublesome to satisfy everyone's preferences. My suggestion is that Kaihuangda has recently tried models such as heart-centered assessment and ladder climbing. You can observe everyone's feedback in the chapter and which parts have higher praise, and use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. Every inch has its strengths and weaknesses. The passionate battles and battles of wits in the past have been well received. They can be further strengthened in this book. In addition, the character interaction is also well written in The Witch. Characters such as Tingtian are full of characteristics and can be continued to be described. As for copying books and slapping people in the face, it is a bit dry. It can be reduced and changed to laying out conspiracy or practicing plot.

Although the whole picture cannot be seen yet, judging from the performances of Luluo and Wen Tianxiang, it is obvious that Li Xuan is a chess piece set up by an expert. The purpose of this chess game and the players are still unclear, but one of the villains must be Jinque Tiangong. Li Xuan and Wenshan Yin themselves are things that can reverse destiny, Luluo They are also constantly deliberately strengthening Li Xuan and Wenshan Yin, and sooner or later they will face Jinque Tiangong and Qianqiubi. Yu Hongshang itself is a variable outside of history. Like Li Xuan, there is no such eldest princess in history, let alone her rebirth from death, which must be beyond the destiny of Qianqiubi. Basically, the change of seizing the gate is an important node in this book. Once the change of seizing the gate is the victory of Emperor Jingtai and Yu Hongshang takes over as the empress, history will be completely reversed and it will be difficult to reverse. And Li Xuan's faction owns the Navy Water Transport, the Dragon Clan, the Artifact Alliance, some Confucianism, and the Longhushan Branch. To the outside, being in red clothes represents the Jin Dynasty, and the power of the Six Daosi will also be integrated into Li Xuan. For Jinque Tiangong, it is a symbol that Li Xuan can officially compete with Tiangong. Furthermore, being in red clothes also means that the empress dowager, Gao Gu, and the northern generals have all been defeated, which is unacceptable to Jinque Tiangong.

Recently, Zi Die, Xue Yunrou, and Jiang Hanyun have stepped into the fourth gate, and Li Xuan has also stepped into the eighth floor. Changle Wuyi has entered the Soul Realm, and immortal treasures and top-grade magic weapons have continued to appear. It feels like the version is about to be revised and enter the era of heaven. It should take two or three more dungeons, and the opponent must be changed to the middle heaven level or above to be a threat. In the past, as soon as the opponents started to improve their level, they would often prepare to change the map. However, this book probably did not change the map. At present, the highest level in the mortal world has reached the extreme heaven position. At least there is no need to change the map before the extreme heaven position. As Li Xuan's position rises and his combat power increases, he is approaching the heaven position. The next step is to use Emperor Jingtai to first Waiting for someone to serve as a target, he began to climb to a higher level of combat power. In fact, I think Emperor Jingtai is very pitiful. His combat power is comparable and he is worthy of heaven. Yi defended the country and was seriously injured. Compared with the Tiansheng Emperor, the situation was even worse. There is still a lot to write about in the Six Daosi Division. Although Zhu Mingyue is strong, the leader of the Qinglong White Tiger Hall is a Tianshi Taoist and Zen sect. In addition to Qiu Qianqiu, he also needs the heavenly positions cultivated by other Six Daosi Divisions in order to hold the territory in the hands of stronger enemies after the revision.

Come on, the beginning of this book is getting better, and it is more attractive than the beginning of the previous book. In fact, the author of the previous book carefully checked a lot of information, but some people did not buy it. This book is a bit misleading except for the title, but the content is indeed excellent. At least the quality is expected. Come on💪, brothers, push me up

This book is based on the period after Tumu Fortress in the Ming Dynasty as the fantasy background. Many book friends think that the villain is too powerful. If you combine it with the historical background, you will find that it is a normal operation. Let me briefly describe that period of history here: The orthodox emperor Zhu Qizhen was captured in the Battle of Tumu Fort. At that time, Zhu Qizhen's son Zhu Jianshen was only two years old and was obviously not suitable to inherit the throne. In order to avoid the suspicion of being the master of the young country, Yu Qian, Wang Zhi and other ministers reported to the Empress Dowager of the Ming Dynasty to support Zhu Qiyu, the king of Yin, as the emperor, and respected the Zhengtong emperor as the supreme emperor. The following year, he changed the name to Jingtai. Later the Zhengtong Emperor was released by the Mongols. After the death of Emperor Jingtai's son Zhu Jianji, he basically lost the support of the civil service group, and was restored to the throne by Zhengtong a few years later. There are more villains in this book than in history, including the remnants of Emperor Jianwen and the Maitreya Cult. Do you still think the villains are too powerful?

Because it looked very comfortable in front of me, I booked it all without even thinking about it. But when I saw that the princess had given birth to a son and was hiding it from the protagonist, and it looked like she was going to hide it until the end of time, I suddenly felt sick and didn't want to watch it for a moment It felt so aggrieved.

What I wrote above is okay. It is a good book worth reading. It is okay in terms of emotional drama and plot. It may be a bit depressing, but it has no impact. In the middle and later stages, the author seems to have replaced someone else, and his writing is average or even ham-fisted, which is outrageous. It's okay if the fighting power has collapsed and the heroine can't be portrayed well, but after each heroine has a child, they always like to write that the child is more important than the male protagonist, and that the male protagonist still cares about the child after they have children. You can't write that the male protagonist is as important as the offspring. Apart from the main storyline, the only other thing I wanted to do was watch the Shura field in the harem. What purpose does writing this thing have besides disgusting people? It's okay to write it once, and I'll write this inner description once for every heroine who has children. The more I look at the back, the more I can't stand it. The male protagonist looks like a clown, which is really a failure.

Reading this book really disgusted me to death. I had to hide the child from the male protagonist. If the male protagonist hadn't found out, would he have had to spend his whole life? The male protagonist wants to be the father of his biological son and wants to be canonized by the emperor. How did you come up with such a plot?

I personally think that this book is the pinnacle work of the pioneering master. It combines suspense, delicate emotions, and intrigue into a fairy tale novel with a complete world view of Chinese history! I highly recommend it! ! !

After reading more than 600 chapters, I don't want to read anymore The heroine gave birth to a son without letting the protagonist know, and she didn't explain anything. It's disgusting. I originally liked Hong Yi, but now I hope the protagonist ignores him. The emperor is also disgusting and makes the protagonist's child premature.

I am currently reading Chapter 614. There is a very important event in this chapter, which is the appearance of Hongshang's child. I think the author's handling of this chapter is extremely bad. I have to say that the early content of this book is really fascinating. As an orthodox martial arts harem novel, the division of combat power is reasonable, and the main and supporting characters are clearly portrayed. In particular, the author knows how to scratch the itch of readers of harem novels. The book uses Shura Field as the chapter title and has written many single chapters. It can be seen that one of the pleasures of reading this book is to see the protagonist's interesting things in Shura Field and his daily quarrels with the heroines. But in this chapter, I really don't understand why the author must emphasize that after having children, the male protagonist is not as attractive as before, and the female protagonist is even very impatient with the male protagonist. This is the original text of the book. In my opinion, no matter what the name of the child is, or the plot development, it is all false. The most important thing is that the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist must be close. How can there be a harem novel in which the husband is forgotten after having a child? It's just nonsense. The biggest surprise is here. From this point of view, the treatment of the heroines in the middle and later stages of the article is definitely not the result I want. I regret to abandon the book and hope that the book "Big Devil" can achieve greater success.

Bai Laizhang was killed in battle, the plot was tight, and it only had two words to show off. The plot was already tense and there was a climax of fighting the sword demon, so it was cut off immediately. The rest is all a routine and the combat power has collapsed. It feels like an apple that has been stored for three months has revealed that the good part is rotten at the bottom.

This book is really good. Although I have never read the previous books of Kaihuang Da Da, this is the first one I have read, but it is worthy of being a master. The writing style and plot are very good. Those who pick this and that, according to the level of Kaihuang, then no one of your books is suitable, and you can find faults! Come on, master pioneer, let more people read this book! Your grades will get better and better. Honor is just one thing, and we don't deserve it for you!