My Main World Is in Naruto

No one will read if you write blindly. I write a diary and my mother keeps track of updates. I am too lazy to read novels myself. But the awesomeness of writing a million-word novel was blown away. Even if you write blindly, you will achieve a million achievements for yourself.

Damn, the novel is so bad, but I can still continue writing it!

I'll give you some advice after reading your million words. The most important thing is to segment it. At first glance, it looks like a big lump and I really have no desire to look down

I feel like the author has written female videos before

It can't be divided into sections. If you see the first chapter without sections, you won't be able to watch it.

It feels a bit rigid and lacks a sense of immersion.

I flipped through a few pages and wanted to make a complaint, but someone made me comment in advance 😅

To be honest, the segmentation is too random (#-.-)

No one can really read this without paragraphs, and usually a chapter is three thousand words long. Your chapter of one thousand words feels weird, so I suggest you merge it.

It's okay. Except for some flaws in the paragraphing, the plot is passable Author, don't think about others, just be yourself Can you give me a reply, one of your readers!

Open the book, read two pages, close the book and say goodbye. No line breaks or paragraph breaks, you are really not afraid of readers getting confused.

Anyway, divide it into the next section. . .

The segmentation was very unfriendly, I felt dizzy after just one glance, and I was not in the mood to read the content, so I gave up.

Dude, I also write Naruto fanfic Looking at you like this, I feel a bit miserable

A lot of men understand a woman, and the author is probably an old pervert.

What did you write? It's such a mess, one moment the Hokage is passionate, and the next moment it's a city of nothing.

The author should upgrade the protagonist. The knowledge of traveling through so many worlds is useless.

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I won't talk about the writing style in paragraphs. You also cast fantasy. . . . .

I want to know why there are more than 1 million words. Chapter serialization with more than 1,000 chapters

Is this Naruto from Abnormal Psychology?

How should I put it? 🤔 I am very curious about the author's mentality when writing this book.

A book of three to four pages and one chapter, without paragraphs, makes it uncomfortable to read. The author is really awesome.