I Have Been Visiting Wuzhuang Temple Since I Was a Child.

The beginning is okay. The protagonist is too out of touch, as if he is mentally retarded. He seems to be a newbie, which is understandable.

What level is this author at? Did Yun Xiao get it with just a few sweet words? Even if you can, you should give a rough account of Yun Xiao's psychological activities! Then, does the protagonist have a negative IQ? Opinionated? He has a villain face and has long ears? You still don't believe it, just making subjective assumptions? Or do you treat Yunxiao as an accessory, just a vassal, and listen to the protagonist in everything?

Well, the protagonist has been practicing for seven thousand years and is a fool. Like a reckless man, he can't even think.

The protagonist doesn't look like a monk at all, he's a talkative person, and he loves to jump around. He's really lucky if he doesn't die.

Hi! Everyone is welcome to comment. I accept all opinions, good or bad. This is my first time writing a book, so there will inevitably be some unsatisfactory aspects. I hope you can bear with me. Of course, it would be better to point out specific issues. What I want to say here is that the protagonist suddenly travels through time, and the personality change requires a process. I think it is impossible for those people who just think in a daze as soon as they travel and then integrate into life within a few days. Of course, this is a personal opinion, and whether it holds true or not depends on everyone. Copy a lot of articles from around the world and see if you can copy them. If anyone is the same as me, let's encourage each other! Finally, thank you readers, your support is the driving force for me to move forward! I wish you all a happy life, happy reading, and happy storytelling.

It doesn't have to be too greasy, sometimes the point is better than the words.

I decided to give up the book when I saw Love in the Sky. I felt so ridiculous and speechless.

When I wiped his back, he was like a licking dog, no, a idiot. I also wrote such a disgusting protagonist when I was drunk. However, you will definitely make money

When I saw the sentence at the beginning called "Mai", I knew it was time for me to leave.

Seeing that I was unsettled, I withdrew first.

Play ticket nature! The protagonist has the same mind-set as a child! Without the slightest rigor, how stupid do you have to be to beat a disciple of a saint in the saint's dojo! I think this is what the author wrote for fun, as long as the author is happy!

There are so many prehistoric figures with innate demon gods and feet, but there are only a few who have achieved Daluo Jinxian in five thousand years. The protagonist has a mortal physique and has five thousand years of Daluo Jinxian, and there is no golden finger.

It's so poisonous. I feel like I can make money. I'm right to keep you from entering the Sanjiang list.

Advantages~ The creativity is very good. When I saw the title and introduction of the book, I clicked on it and read it. Disadvantages~ 1. Problems with the writing style. Not only does the inner description skip the scenes, but it also conflicts with the historical background. 2. Problems with the character of the protagonist. Did the author intend to write a fool? The protagonist had a cerebral thrombosis 10 years before he traveled through time. He had surgery to remove his brain, but the blood clot remained? The above is how I feel about the golden three chapters~ Read on? Sorry, my ability to resist nausea is limited.

I was shocked when I saw Zhao Gongming being beaten violently

Withdraw, withdraw, I hate licking dogs the most

After thousands of years, he is still the same as a second fool. He has not cultivated his immortality and cultivated his mind. That mythical figure is just like a second fool.

Beauty, young man, what are you doing? Writing a Taoist friend is not good, it's so poisonous, I feel like I am completely amusing myself.