The Uchiha Who Started by Killing Their Own Kind

It's so disgusting. The main character is a psycho. If you don't want your loved ones to die, why don't you just kill Itachi? Why do you want to kill the whole clan and your friends? It makes me sick!

Overall, the writing is okay, but there is one big flaw that I would like to ask the author about. In addition to being stimulated to open a single-eyed kaleidoscope and being affected, the heart becomes colder, and at other times when the cheat is not affected mentally, it only travels through three years, and it didn't start when you were young. Where did you get such rich emotions? It's pure fun! It would make sense if you started the game as an orphan in your previous life and added some extravagant emotions to the plot. However, under the short time travel and the threat of genocide and death, the emotions you wrote are unreasonable, especially the feelings towards your younger brother. It is simply ridiculous! When a normal person travels to Hokage and receives family members halfway, under the threat of death, how can they have time to cultivate feelings? So it's inexplicable for you to write about your feelings! ?

It would be nice if there was a report button

The elderly and children in the clan were also killed😤😤.

Actually genocide? Where is your conscience?

Even with this poisonous plot, some people can watch it and be convinced.

It's not that the protagonist kills all his clan members, and then the ninja team chasing him kills none of them. And he also knew that the ninja team would kill him if they caught him.

What the hell are you writing? I wonder if science can save you?

Orochimaru's chapter has a very clear idea, I didn't even expect it

Author, I think your novel should be renamed "Bringing a Blame to Everyone in the Ninja World"

Weasel fans, you kill all the old, weak, women and children and you still have to pretend to be cool. Please don't say you've traveled through time. It's disgusting. Identification completed.

I made Danzo ramble on endlessly, how many chapters are there?

It is very unreasonable to have a single-eyed kaleidoscope for so long. The author should arrange it as soon as possible! You must know that after Obito awakened the Mangekyou, even Kakashi's Sharingan evolved independently through the air. There is no reason why the protagonist's eyes have been on him for so long and he still can't evolve.

The author should be a loyal fan of Uchiha Itachi

In the latest chapter, La Dahe is used as a shield for the second time. He is an old tool.

What a tragedy for the author, all his previous books are gone. I remember seeing his Zanpakutō and Holy Mongolia.

When will the ice shield be arranged? Such a handsome ability is not arranged

Kimimaro is older than Koso, Koso is 9 years old, and Kimimaro is at least 11 years old. He was abducted by Uncle Snake when he was young. How can you prevent being abducted now? The timeline is not required to be accurate, but it is best to follow the original work for the basic timeline.

I think it looks great! ! ! ! The protagonist cheats

Hahahahaha, Orochimaru is really confused

I think it's still very reasonable! ! ! ! ! Come on, author

Itachi is a man living in a dream! The future has come to reality! In other words, this is a world dominated by blood! Otherwise there would be no place for him in this world

The front is fine, but the back feels more and more toxic.

In fact, the author's writing is pretty good. Why do so few people pay attention

I think it would be better if the author deletes the place where the genocide was destroyed, or instead directly travels to the night of genocide, opens the kaleidoscope and goes with Itachi. To be honest, except for the night of genocide, the plot is definitely not bad in other aspects.

There's a lot of nonsense. At least hundreds of thousands of words have been lost.

The ability of Mankatomi is a fusion attribute. The protagonist originally had fire and earth attributes, which were fused to obtain a molten shield. Then he developed the wind attribute. After waiting for dozens of chapters, the protagonist finally learned the change of wind attributes. He thought that wind, fire, and earth would be fused into dust escape. He had been looking forward to it, but in the end, he fused a magnetic escape. I €{* I am still too weak, so I made a composite ninjutsu of magnetic ton and molten escape. What the hell?

Have the two books Zanpakutō and Holy Mongolia been sealed?

The protagonist is very weird, very weird. If you say he is ruthless, he really dares to kill so many people. Don't tell me that he is a time traveler, so he has no feelings for the people. What about his so-called mother and brother? I forced myself to write a plot and create a bond. The meaning expressed in the article is also dissatisfaction with the Third Generation Group. In the end, he has been carrying out the orders of the Third Generation as a tool. He is a time traveler after all. Although the protagonist is not particularly good as the Holy Mother, the protagonist is as enlightened as a native of Konoha. He has no psychological pressure to go to other ninja villages to kill people. I am very strange. If he really has no feelings, I can I understand that he slaughtered the tribesmen because he was a time traveler and didn't have much sympathy for the natives. The result made me laugh to death. He slaughtered the tribesmen and left so many hidden dangers without being ruthless. He was really not afraid of his own death and was not afraid of retaliation. It's so strange. It's better to just write that the one who cares most is himself, and everything else is just a disguise to survive, instead of being threatened to do all kinds of things all the time, okay? It's not that the protagonist is required to be kind, it's that the protagonist himself wants to make trouble with Ichibi. When I look at it, I don't feel anything. You are threatened by the three generations. You obey the orders of the three generations. It's so funny. The protagonist is a time traveler. I don't believe that what he cares about most is his cheap brother, not himself. You The writing is very strange. The bond is not enough at all. The protagonist will take the blame for the third generation because he takes advantage of his younger brother. So why not just stop defecting? Kneel down and lick the third generation of Danzo in Konoha and serve as their tool. You can also take care of your younger brother at a close distance. Isn't it better to be a Konoha person?