Head Coach of Tokyo Swordsmen

The article was not fluent, the setting was not explained clearly, and I couldn't understand the logic of the protagonist's thoughts. There are obvious breakpoints in the rhythm, making it awkward to read. Did the author have some chapters blocked? (Personal feeling, for reference only)

One thing to say, I saw that this book was very good after 8 chapters. It was left on the shelf. Although it was a bit too scattered, the open style was also good. It is recommended to highlight the free style. Freedom is comfortable and there are no restrictions. There are really few clear-flow novels nowadays, and they are not the kind of template outline studio novels. In terms of IQ and logic, 18/9 years old is very normal. It is not like some mental IQs of 12/3-year-old children. , The idea is very good, but the writing is not enough to express it. I can only express 40% of the original idea and what I imagined in my mind.

In the first chapter, the protagonist got the golden finger, but suddenly he lost his fear of monsters on another level, which the protagonist had never seen before and could not understand yet. He dared to draw his sword at him. He was obviously scared to death in front of him, but who knew how powerful this golden finger was. Is this a normal person? It's acceptable for the protagonist's personality to be friendly, but this inexplicable connection is really unacceptable. 🤔

I've only read a few chapters, don't you have an outline? I said I would inherit the original owner's dream and get admitted to the University of Tokyo, but the next step is to play games all night and then catch up on sleep at school! You encounter monsters immediately after traveling through time. With the Breath of Water, you don't want to save your life and practice familiarity, but play games all day long? I am all confused🙂

I was disappointed. I read the title and thought the protagonist was going to be the founder of supernatural swordsmanship and then go defeat monsters. Then I read dozens of chapters and found nothing, just daily life.

It would be great if the author could update on time. I want to see the male protagonist become stronger and the female protagonist give out dog food.

Summer trees and snow

I can't understand, I'm confused, I can't understand at all, it's too confusing

I was passing by, and I asked irresponsibly, didn't Natsuki fall in love with Bunta? Could it be that Bunta's domestic violence forced Natsuki to leave Tokyo?

What did you write? (┯_┯) Has nothing to do with the topic at all

Tomioka Giyu and Butterfly Ninja

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. What was it about? It was a mess from the beginning.

I have read Chapter 45 so far. In the anime, doesn't Tomioka Giyu have an Eleven type, Nagi (zhi)? Will it appear later? I think this type is super cool.

Please polish it up. The content of the first two chapters is too abrupt. It feels like there are a lot of things missing.

How many episodes did this little theater perform 😂

Haha, this novel gives me the feeling of going back to those chronicle light novels I read a few years ago. The ultimate chuunibyou➕self-entertainment type author^ ^😁

Ordered everything directly, I'm here to eat dog food🐶🙂

If you want to read everyday literature, it's straight up fantasy, not just fantasy, but it's also inexplicable, so I'm convinced.

I don't know what it's about, but the main character is enjoying himself

After persisting for ten chapters, I think the main reason for this book is that it does not explain the world background well, and secondly, there is no main line. This is not a comic or a movie after all. Books need logic, especially online articles. They need to intuitively explain the world background and main line. Unless you are a daily pretentious person or your writing is very good, otherwise, the lack of main line and background is the reason why monthly tickets are not good.

I've read Chapter 13 and the plot is so boring.

There are some places where the writing is a little awkward. Let's go, don't be rude!