I Really Didn't Target Master Fa

The book was good from the beginning to the middle, but since the double star linkage started, it felt weird, especially the feeling of the power system. After upgrading, the sense of fragmentation was too strong, especially when Mystra ran out of 12 historical lines, and the plot direction felt strange. The early stages were squishy, and the middle stage was nesting dolls on top of nesting dolls. I don't know why I suddenly didn't have much desire to read. After the protagonist killed the inner demon generated by the BOSS in the first level of the game, I felt It's like changing a character. From here on, I feel separated from the previous one In the chaotic scene in the early stage of Double Star Linkage, the purpose and style of the protagonist's actions began to feel separated, especially after the main line of revenge for such a long time. After Double Star Linkage, the various specialties, skills, and characters laid out in the early stage have become cumbersome and basically difficult to deal with. I haven't looked at it later. If these things are not integrated and simplified, it feels like it will collapse in the later stage.

It's very good, very powerful. The author said that his writing skills are not good, but I think it is actually pretty good. First of all, it satisfies readers like me who like cool writing. The monster farming part in the early stage is really good. Some people may not like the transition from lone ranger to guardian in the middle and late stages, but this is actually part of the protagonist's growth. . . I won't say anymore. Come on, author, stay healthy and keep up the good work.

Every time I see Roger using martial arts, I can't help laughing🤭

First monthly pass for this book... Just read the latest chapter!

I want to know how to get the title🙂🙂🙂

, I want a title, I just want a title

The power of friendship, I want a title

It's too little. I finished reading it in one go. Are there any books with a similar style?

Real goose call

The author is very detailed, almost the most meticulous and serious author I have ever seen. But, I have to say but. The characterization is very problematic. The protagonist is almost a "superposition of attributes" and "Roger" is just a pendant of the protagonist. Because throughout the book, the protagonist strengthens his attributes, the protagonist obtains props, the protagonist,,,,, but there is no change similar to the protagonist's personality, and the protagonist's thinking about the world does not have anything slightly profound. Another thing that has always bothered me is that the protagonist has been accumulating enough experience to upgrade and become very strong, but he often chooses to protect himself when encountering evil. This is not a problem, many novels have this kind of character, but Roger is the kind of character who often shows compassion for others, and his initial occupation is also "chivalrous hermit". Since there is such a character setting and it does not stick to the end, it gives people a bad impression. Especially when he returned to Mithras, this was the place where he made his fortune. Many of his old friends were acquainted with him, but they ended up in disastrous situations because of his inability to eliminate demons, or even if it was none of his business, their old friends were killed. The first thing to do was to deal with them properly. As for the protagonist, go get a copy first. Your apprentice still doesn't know whether he's alive or dead. Your old friend Alan is missing. Why don't you look for him? Your supporter Shar died in the battle. Do you know where she is buried? I went to make a copy without explaining any of this. It really makes people feel cold. I've been looking forward to the protagonist returning to Mithras to meet old friends, but it turns out you might as well not come back. I've seen so much that I really can't stand it anymore.

Released three eunuch books, a strong contender for the top spot on the Qidian Birth List

The quality began to decline after more than 200 chapters. On the one hand, it was a writing problem, and on the other hand, the characters were unattractive. A good book should let the characters guide the plot, and deduce the plot from the bonds and conflicts between the characters, rather than simply looking at the outline and piecing together the stories on the basis of system tasks Each volume actually has suitable characters who can serve as the lubricant to carry out the previous and later plots. Unfortunately, except for Qin who is better (and super short), other characters are very vague. Even the protagonist, except for Except for the funny attributes, there are no emotional ups and downs at all, very bland 😎 It is recommended that the protagonist joins a certain force, or establishes his own force (Qingquan Sect is not counted. Except for the word count of water, there is no plot at all) Now the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is relatively divorced from the world view of this book. Not to mention the Qingquan Sect and the Sea Serpent Temple, even Mystra is just a map to the protagonist, and he is not considered a "Mystra" at all? 😴 So the protagonist's position and identity are very vague to me, and it is difficult to integrate into the story. I have always read it from God's perspective and treated it as an ordinary cool novel. And there are really too many "junk data". 🐷 I'm a little tired of seeing them. The data is just that, the protagonist's strength is just that. Fighting bosses, plug-ins, and resurrections. No matter how much data there is, it does not improve the protagonist. Instead, so much data is written, and the various details in the plot are already pitifully small. These are the basis of the story! 😥 . . . Of course, I have only read 300 chapters so far. The above are my personal feelings after reading. They may not be completely correct, and they cannot change anything (because it is almost 500 chapters) But I am not unhappy, and I hope the author can see the shortcomings from my perspective, or get some inspiration, continue to make progress, and write more exciting content🌹🌹

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The early stages were pretty good. In the middle period, the author forgot a bunch of skills of the protagonist. Then the level of the supporting villains is only related to the protagonist and has nothing to do with the map. As long as the protagonist's level increases, the villains and supporting characters will level up without any thought. In the early stage, Mystra didn't have much transcendence. After 30 years, a small town has tens of thousands of extraordinary people. The combat power is completely destroyed

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Crazy bad ending, crazy updates without any reason In the early stage, the settings were randomly changed or even ignored in the later stage.

Something

Map floor, updated from time to time The first one North of the Sierra River.

It's time to eat it, it's time to eat it

It's time to reopen the rebooting thread, bro!

I have read more than half of it. It is very logically rigorous and interesting to read. It is a rare good work. But I feel that the style went astray in the later period. Xia Yin Xia Yin, Xia means freedom and casualness, Yin means low-key. As a result, the protagonist has become a patron saint, like a bird in a cage, and there are many gamifications in the later period. Although it is a game from another world, it is a bit awkward. To be honest, it is a bit suffocating to watch.

Grain and grass in the early stage, hay in the middle stage, I have no desire to look at the middle and late stages.

The situation is even more serious for the new book. You can't really write it as two people. One person will write the first half and the other will write the second half.

This book is your pinnacle😅

Two big pits, how to kill Constantine in the first one, whether the second bandage is Austrian, what happened to the third heaven, the reason why the fourth level 202 music style is so strong that it explodes, and the ultimate move can only hit the same level in one second, if the fifth star track does not represent the distance from the abyss, what does it mean, what does the appearance of the sixth time-traveling warlock indicate, and where does the distorted material crushed by the seventh origin mill go? Eighth, the planet is corrupted. Does the Star Lord have any influence? When will the ninth author update? ! ! ! ! ! !

My biggest feeling from this book is that it clearly has a clear outline. Plus the author's writing style is okay. Worth a look.

I chose Sandy instead of the queen. As expected of you, loli battle

Waiting for the update of the author's new book "Tree of the Dead" I read half of it and thought it was good, so I ordered the whole book The next two hundred chapters turned out to be a waste of money, tasteless and expensive I couldn't stand the last 100 chapters Now I plan to abandon the author's new book as well

There are 30 rest days and 90 working days. . . Festival 0🙂That's it 10/4---5/3, a total of 212 days, 13850.

After returning from Kuinan, more and more characters are parachuted in. There is no beginning to grow up step by step, or to spawn monsters, or travel, or take risks, and finally become stronger and solve the mystery. Now I am constantly being driven forward by the world. When the protagonist becomes stronger, he will parachute stronger enemies. There are some plots that are useful but can also be ignored. I feel that it is not as good as before and I feel sleepy.