
Pirate Crazy Knife
海贼狂刀
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 454k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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142Chapters
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I ordered it here. After a cursory glance, I think your contract is probably in doubt. First of all, there is the issue of paragraphing. It seems very uncomfortable to put a lot of words into one paragraph. The beginning is dull, and the subsequent plot does not make people want to watch it. You must be happy with the system text, otherwise you should quickly enter the plot. Besides, the writing style is not that good. You can tell from just one paragraph that this is a new writer. Of course, signing the contract has little to do with the writing style. It's more about the plot. Oh, and also, your writing is too wordy, so I only read one or two chapters and then stopped reading...
I can't see the comments you posted these days.
Um, your profile Are you a middle school boy😁
You've finished your book, and I'm going to start a new one 😎
I give you an investment. Keep writing. It doesn't matter if you don't write well. Being honest is valuable. Let me tell you this: Don't be lazy. Don't be lazy. Don't be lazy every day. It doesn't matter if you don't write for a day. Be sure to keep writing, the consequences of discontinuing updates can be very serious.