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How can I put it, the subject matter is okay, but the plot is a bit dragged out. The author's identity is like hiding something from others, just like a thief, hiding this and that. Your parents also kept it secret, did you steal the atomic bomb? Or robbed a bank?

Tang Yu

Let me share my personal opinion and ask, is the song "Dragon Fist" really that good? I have been writing about how good Dragon Fist is before. If I hadn't read the novel, I wouldn't have known about this song. Personally, I feel that if Jay Chou hadn't written this song, it would probably be even less popular. I don't understand what's so good about this song.

I really hate the idea of ​​giving songs to others, it's simply too much. The most outrageous thing is giving songs to people you don't know, just to please your girlfriend and be generous to others. As expected, people are just cheaters, and they won't cherish anything they get too easily.

The protagonist is hypocritical, which is probably a common problem in rebirth novels. On the one hand, he owes favors to everyone for fame, and at the same time, he is secretive about his identity as a writer. It is really contradictory. Also, do you really find the song Dragon Fist burning? How many people would agree with this kind of song without the nunchaku background? Insufficient sense of immersion.

Chapter 17. . . There is no need to write Zhu Xian by yourself to sing songs to attract votes. The reason is that you want fairness! Brother, is it fair to others that you bring your own system? Is it fair to say that people need to practice hard and you only need to take pictures of skill books? What the hell kind of explanation is this? I thought it was an ordinary copycat novel until I reached chapter 17, but the result was sudden. . . Give me a carbine

Yunfeng

The introduction can be changed, it does not match the content. The plot is too bland, and those who didn't know it thought it was a pension story. Even if you write it plainly, it is not attractive enough. It seems that your early book reviews are not proportional to your later book reviews. I don't know that it didn't increase but decreased. Of course, it may also be a problem that no one has subscribed during the two-day limited period. Let me give you some suggestions. The plot can be written in a funny way, otherwise the current bland plot will have no attractive highlights. Although it started with online articles, those are all online articles, so there is no need to chase after them. The system's capabilities are too low and need to be modified and increased. Normally speaking, more than 200 chapters can completely spread the stage to write. As a result, you just left Novice Village. The plot is too slow and does not unfold the plot at all to attract people. Even after reading more than a hundred chapters, I was ready to stop reading. Add more highlights, otherwise you'll have to take pills

For example, novels, songs, movies, TV series, comics and animations that you want to appear in. 🥺 In addition, there are lyrics. I am not in this business, so the writing is very poor.

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