My Good Brothers of the Ming Dynasty

Actually, this book subverts some of the typical online historical fiction formula. The protagonist gradually grows stronger and stronger, and there's also Zhu Chongba, a commoner from Huaiyou. The concise writing style vividly portrays the characters, making it a very sincere approach in contemporary online fiction.

What makes this book so moving is its vivid and realistic portrayal of a cruel world. The protagonist, initially depicted as an insignificant figure, gradually grows stronger, a transformation that deeply resonates with both the mind and soul.

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Keep it up, I've recommended something to you... The brotherly affection conveyed between the lines is something I didn't have time to write about.

Keep it up, author, you have great potential. Your writing style is above average for a beginner, but there are two problems. There are far too few on the first day (this is very important on Qidian). You can see from the power rankings that there are 20,000 words a day. Secondly, with a small readership, some chapters are designed to easily discourage new readers.

Crescent Moon is the only female protagonist in the novels I've read who isn't particularly attractive or well-proportioned, yet I like her exceptionally much. The early part of the story is very good, and the writing is also very good. However, the plot of Crescent Moon's assassination is barely acceptable if it is said to be to advance the plot and develop the capital's storyline.

Zhu Yuanzhang truly did his best to improve the lives of ordinary people. Who else but him dared to skin corrupt officials alive? As for his killing of meritorious officials in his later years, firstly, it was to eliminate threats to his successor; secondly, it depends on what those officials had actually done. Weren't those officials arrogant and lawless?

Crescent Moon can die, but Zhao Min cannot exist. Why could Crescent Moon die? The tragic end of a character with strong emotional projection can prompt a significant change in that character, serving as a driving force in the plot. Within a reasonable framework, this is acceptable, and as a reader, I can accept it. But why can't there be Zhao Min?

Map of the Red Turban Rebellion at the End of the Yuan Dynasty

My older brother's name is Zhu Chongba, and he wrote that too. I guessed it a long time ago. Because whenever something happens, both accounts are involved in the same situation 😂