Travel Around the World of Martial Arts

After catching up on the latest chapter of Changchun Valley of Youth, I saw many people criticizing the author, including the one who summarized three poisonous points. I would like to share my feelings. The first point is about the protagonist's force in the Apricot Forest. I don't remember the protagonist fighting Duan Yanqing in Xingzilin. The protagonist only injured Zhao Qiansun and Tan Gong Tan Po. I don't know how that guy came up with the idea that the protagonist's martial arts are similar to Duan Yanqing's martial arts. As for the fight between the protagonist and Duan Yanqing, if I remember correctly, the first fight was at Xiaojing Lake. The protagonist protected Duan Yu and Duan Zhengchun and fought off Duan Yanqing. He should be slightly taller than Duan Yanqing. The second point is the loss of Yi Jin Jing. What the guy said was unclear. He just said it and lost it. It could easily be misunderstood. In fact, what was lost was the translated version, and the original version was still with the protagonist. The protagonist later got a Chinese version, and later let Wang Yuyan and A'Zhu practice it. Then the lost copy was picked up by a supporting character from the Beggar Clan. I have two purposes for summing up: 1. Due to the author's arrangement, Juxian Village was bloodbathed by Qiao Feng, You Tanzhi's role became extremely small, and Quan Guanqing was also beaten to death by the protagonist (actually You Tanzhi seemed to be beaten to death by Qiao Feng) , although the author didn't say it, there was no role for You TanZhi in the latest chapter, and he only mentioned a few things about You TanZhi in the original work. I will talk about Quan Guanqing in the third point.) Therefore, the role of the Beggar Gang will be reduced, which is not conducive to creating conflicts in the Shaolin Temple when the martial arts conference is held later. 2. (Spoilers here) The supporting character picks up the Yi Jin Jing to serve the protagonist. I think it is the protagonist's transition from martial arts to fantasy (cultivation of immortality). You will know it when you see the martial arts conference outside the Shaolin Temple. Half of the snake spirit that survived the calamity was swallowed by the protagonist in the snake's gallbladder, causing the protagonist to There are hidden dangers in the horns, which are usually picked up by the supporting character from the horns on the snake's head. Then the supporting character practices the Yi Jin Jing, and is then bewitched by the snake spirit to target the protagonist and plot against the protagonist. The protagonist gets help from the sweeping monk and the child elder, kills the supporting character, destroys the snake spirit, strengthens himself, and reaches a higher level, thus entering the realm of divine enlightenment and turning to immortality. The third point is that the protagonist is followed and plotted by Quan Guanqing, which is normal. The protagonist became friends with Qiao Feng, and Quan Guanqing wanted to harm Qiao Feng, so he thought of following the protagonist after seeing him. Did you find anything? As a result, he caught the protagonist's men and learned about the snake gallbladder, so he wanted to do something big. There are a lot of this kind of routines in online articles, right? Why did it become a poisonous spot here? If you insist on an explanation, you can probably understand it as a wise man has many considerations and a hundred secrets. There is no one who can walk in the rivers and lakes without being plotted. In this case, how can you often walk by the river without getting your shoes wet? It is normal for the protagonist to be plotted by Quan Guanqing. What's more, Quan Guanqing has not succeeded in the assassination, and he and his subordinates have been killed by the protagonist. (Quan Guanqing in the original work is abhorrent, and he is good at killing) The above is a statement made by a certain brother. It is my own understanding. Don't argue with me. After all, it will do me no good if you accept my statement. It doesn't matter if you don't accept it. I am just writing so much to express my own understanding, and I am right to use it as a reference for everyone to learn from. Let me talk about a few shortcomings: 1. The author's arrangement of some plots is too rigid, such as the secret book and being plotted by Quan Guanqing. The author's continuous failure is really full of criticism. After all, he is writing a web article. Most netizens like the fast food routine of failure and then reversal. A plot like this of continuous failure will inevitably make many netizens who have no patience to read further feel full of malice. No wonder so many people say it is poisonous. (The author should note that this book is an online novel after all. There is no need to suppress the plot too much and reverse it later. Being too aggrieved will make people feel less immersed in it) (Spoilers here) 2. In general, the plot of the novel has changed: Xu Zhu He is no longer the protagonist, the Murong family is dead, Qiao Feng's ending has improved, Duan Yu no longer has Jiumozhi's skills, Duan Zhengchun and all the lovers are fine, Duan Yanqing is not dead, Jiumozhi has not achieved enlightenment, and there is a pitfall of Jiumozhi buried in the previous chapter, which has not been filled in the latest chapter. The main reason is that there are some small holes that have not been filled, which is not important. 3. When writing fan fiction, it is inevitable to post some of the original text. There are a few small flaws. The author did not check and change them, so there are some minor bugs. They can be found at a glance and have little impact.

The story is a bit far-fetched, the layers are unclear, the plot is forced, the main line is intermittent, and the reading experience is not good. The writing style and the smoothness of the plot need to be improved. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

Of the three poisonous points, the first one traveled back in time as a baby with memories. He was well-qualified and diligent. He practiced martial arts and Wuxiang Kung since he was a child. Opportunities kept coming. As a result, he was only at the level of Duan Yanqing when he arrived at Xingzilin. Second, A'Zhu gave him the Yi Jin Jing and spent half a month learning the Sanskrit translation, but he dropped it and was picked up. Third, I went to get some snake gallbladder, but was accidentally beaten by a snake and seriously injured, and was almost killed by Quan Guanqing. I won't watch it later.

Since the protagonist knows that he is Wu Yazi's grandson, and also knows that he will die if he loses his internal power, he doesn't want to help, but instead concentrates on plotting his internal power, which is too much.

If you see someone picking up the protagonist's flaws, you won't want to continue reading. 99.99% Of people will not be able to bear it. You dare to be so disgusting in a fanfic. You are really disgusting. This is a cool article on the Internet. Do you think you are a great god like Wen Ruian, Gu Long, and Jin Yong?

As a time traveler, the protagonist is a genius who has learned Sanskrit in half a month. He has been practicing top-level skills since he was a child. He has the courage to speed up his practice. Even if he is not Qiao Feng's opponent, he is not Murong Fu's opponent? Do people have Qu Bodhi snake gall to eat? You said you were a first-class master before, and then you ate the snake gall that failed to overcome the tribulation, and you are still just a first-class master? Is this a fantasy-level snake gallbladder? Forcing the show? Snakes of this level must all be treasures. Why don't you just dig out the snake's gall? You don't even need the horns of the snake dragon, how can you let a passerby go? And let this mere passerby pick up the Yi Jin Jing? Do you want this to fill You Tanzhi's position? Really haha. I didn't read the rest because I was poisoned and died when I saw this. No matter how high the poison resistance is, it cannot withstand it...

I have traveled through time since I was born, and I still need qualifications and skills. After the plot started, the result was still similar to Duan Yu. I was also drunk.

Sitting on countless resources and living like this is in vain. Still following the plot. I'll go watch the original work. Backstage is better than Shaolin. Being framed in various ways. Your time traveler's IQ is worrying. It's not easy to live. If you find the King of Hell and reveal your identity, you will find Wu Yazi. How simple. Momojiji said he couldn't find it. Why

Chapter 32: Poisoned to death. The Beggar Clan Quan Guanqing almost died together. I won't talk about the poisoning point later. It's not interesting anymore. 88

You actually helped outsiders beat your grandmother

I have read the first ten or so chapters, and they plagiarized large sections of the original work. The protagonist automatically disappears when entering the plot. What's the point of this? I can't read the original work?

The protagonist doesn't have the ability to pretend to be something he can't do The author doesn't have the ability to be a great person, yet he still suffers from the disease of a literary youth

The introduction poisoned me to death. What mother would kill if she saw her child?

There is only one poisonous point in the fanfic: I won't write it without the original plot, and the specific points are as follows Starting with six gods, everyone is tied, deliberately lowering the strength, fearing that the supporting character will be killed and there will be no writing The operation is as fierce as a tiger, and the record is 250, and countless exquisite layouts in the early stage are of no use in the end, neither saving nor killing anyone No Being a dog licker is like being a nanny, surrounding the protagonist and supporting characters every day, copying large sections of the original work, and as I read it, I found that it is better to read the original work, with him or without him, it is the same To cater to the original plot, it is awkward to write, forcibly creating conflicts, often IQ is not online, not good at fighting with people, very good at fighting with the sky, and fighting with the air from time to time for a few chapters I think of these for now, welcome book friends to add

This book is not poisonous at all, it is very interesting. For example, in Tianlong, the action is as fierce as a tiger and the supporting character meets 250, such as traveling with memories, having Wuyazi skills, restraining the courage, and being unable to defeat a supporting character... It is simply too good-looking and too stable. Another example is a cultivator who has been frozen for hundreds of years and cannot defeat those with low martial arts... Isn't this kind of basic operation good-looking? If you say you don't look good, a bunch of trumpets will scold you every minute. Family and friendship are fully displayed, everything can be given away, and in the end the supporting characters return to the west together.

A good entry, why do we have to follow the plot? ! There are too many plots that can be written about the identity of the protagonist, such as dominating the martial arts world, helping Murong Fu found the country, helping his mother to vent her anger, etc. Any one of them can fill you with hundreds of chapters, so you have to copy the original work? Follow the development of the original plot? Wouldn't it be better to just read the original work? Everyone should think about becoming sworn friends with Qiao Feng, after all, everyone likes having such a big brother! Duan Yu, I really don't understand. You are Li Qingluo's son. Even if your soul is that of a modern person, you were still born to her! Now, if your father has a child with someone else outside, you still call him brother and sister, and say that you are not involved in the grudges of your elders? ! As for my position, your mother raised you for 16 years and taught you Kung Fu for nothing! If you don't say you want to kill Duan Yu, it should be a normal estrangement, right? ! A good subject has been ruined, alas...

I'm convinced, stay up until two o'clock at night and show me this thing? I have practiced so many top-notch techniques, absorbed so many years of skills, and there is also a snake that can overcome tribulations. With so many adventure special codes, is this level? In the end, all the supporting characters simply died? The special codes that have been frozen for hundreds of years can't be beaten when they come out. Isn't it a shame to have special codes?

Where did Mrs. Wang's murderous intention come from? I believe you when you say that Murong Bo and his wife have murderous intentions! Isn't Mrs. Wang Wang Yuyan, the daughter of Wu Yazi and Li Qiushui? 😰😰😰What the hell did you write?

Martial arts novels are really in decline. Can such a poisonous book be recommended?

Damn it, Duan Zhengchun has a son?

Isn't Li Qingluo Li Qiushui's daughter?

Duan Zhengchun laughed, I have a son

There is a reason for jumping on the street. If others write like this, you will find it uncomfortable. The protagonist gives opportunities to others, but others miss them. You can be funny.

What rubbish, no wonder it's so miserable, vomited, poisoned to death

I don't understand why I can't write cool articles well? Or are current authors no longer able to write cool articles? Will it be poisonous?

Too poisonous, too poisonous😅😅😅

Not bad, I thought I had saved a lot of chapters these days, but it looks like I'm going to be a eunuch

Writing novels tells me a truth: dung grass is dung grass.

Work hard, the writing is good, please update more!

If you can't grasp this book, you'd better find a class.