
Journey of Divine Presence
神临之旅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- High-Martial World
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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348Chapters
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I discovered a problem. The protagonist is below average among his peers. He can still control his thoughts even though he is being monitored all the time. To be honest, once you realize your thoughts, you have basically discovered them. Most people really don't have the ability to control them. Moreover, there are so many things recorded in the ordinary world that you know, so why don't others know about it? For example, if Mahakala is sent to you, you must have a rough understanding of it. Otherwise, how would you know what level it is?
In Yue Fei's world, one only needs to be strong enough to directly reveal one's identity. In that case, no one would give up such a fighting force, and it would be easier to complete the mission. What's more, no matter how similar you are in disguise, if others have experienced the invasion of demons, others will definitely be able to tell when you want to complete your achievements. Don't treat the commander-in-chief as a fool. Of course, there is nothing you can do if you have to deduct the halo of the protagonist in a place like this.
In fact, the main reason why Hedgehog writes a book is to let more people see his story, and also hope that book friends can have positive comments. Originally, Hedgehog posted one chapter a day, but after seeing the encouragement of book friends, it became two chapters a day. Well, I will try to write three chapters a day in the future. In that case, Hedgehog will also be a person of thousands. I really didn't dare to think about it before. I hope book friends will use votes and comments to stimulate Hedgehog!
After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist was cold-blooded, but in the end he was still passionate about the country and the nation, and retreated.
The author has gone through almost all the mistakes that novices can make. 1. There are no three golden chapters. Half of the free part is about the protagonist's random thoughts. Who would like to read that? 2. The power system is chaotic. Before joining that institute, I had always followed the Immortal Martial Arts. After joining that institute for a small profit, I came into contact with the Gene Lock. A world as big as the Immortal Martial Arts can no longer accommodate the protagonist. 3. The world view is very big. It's not your fault that your writing power is limited. What's wrong is that you always focus on the two supporting characters. It's obviously your vision that limits your creativity.
I came in after seeing World Tree, Buddha Kingdom in the Palm, and Monkey in the introduction. Then I read all the free chapters and flipped through a few chapters in the table of contents below. I found that except for the tree, which barely fit the introduction, the others didn't appear in more than a hundred chapters.
It's a mess, the causes and consequences are not explained, and the structure of the world has to be guessed and understood. In short, in one word, volume
I feel like the system is a bit confusing, and I can't understand it when I look at it later...
I have ordered this book. The previous plot was okay, but after reading Chapter 110, I found that the whole thing was messed up. In the previous chapters, the soul that was said not to contaminate other people's souls immediately came out to slap him in the face. Also, the magic weapon of Mahakala's clone (hereinafter referred to as the clone) was repaired, and later became his own soul. Before the trial, it was said that Mahakala hides the soul. The method doesn't make people enlightened. Later, after practicing it, they said that the achievement of the soul will automatically destroy the clone. It is clear that only after becoming a god can you get rid of the influence of the clone. There are too many contradictions and conflicts. I have read chapter 120 so far. I feel that I can't stand it anymore. There are too many root conflicts. Changing the setting at will is a kind of dissuasion for old readers. Doomed to be unable to retain most of the old readers
The unique points on the body structure are called acupoints, not gene points.
Chapter 81 just collapsed, right? Chapter 81 It's a bit embarrassing to directly use bacterial gas to destroy more than 200 countries. This Mahakala sends people to every world to kill generals, slaughter cities and destroy countries. In the final analysis, it is for the sake of luck and the origin of the world. According to what you said, every world has a world consciousness. If it is just killing generals and destroying cities and countries, and Mahakala takes away some of the origin of the world, the world consciousness may not be able to react. But if more than 200 countries are destroyed, most of the people are dead, and at least about 70% to 80% of the origin of luck in this world is taken away! Isn't the consciousness of this world still able to react? Most likely, the thunder and earthquake killed those two people. How could those two people return to the world of Mahakala alive?
Some doubts and opinions about this book 1 Is the protagonist of this book one person or three? The protagonist is written at least with hard work. It can be seen that his male classmate is really shrouded in aura 2 It is enough to kill the general with his own hands or with assistance. For example, Yang Zaixing was told by his classmates to shoot a bridge, and then the master Jin was seriously injured and finally shot to death with random arrows 3 The classmate destroyed the country, and each country improved his skills. The protagonist was one of the three final choices in the Three Kingdoms, and the classmate ordered the massacre of the city. He got the title of Poison Master. He thought he was a poison strategist It turned out that in the next world, he presided over Japan's biological and chemical weapons. He created virus weapons and destroyed more than 200 countries. The settlement was even more bizarre. You destroyed hundreds of countries biologically. Isn't that about this? It turned out to be a love saint, the magician 4. There can be many gods in the black world. Invasion of the ancient world. The world is not small. As a result, he passed the Taixue examination. As a higher education institution above the university, the golden family has to go to the college. The family conditions of the classmates are like that. The skills are not very strong. It is very embarrassing to cooperate with the protagonist. The first world is destroyed by the virus. The second one is also forced to destroy hundreds of countries by viruses. As a result, the third place in Group B is Taixue. A golden family wiped out the whole family in order to enter 10 early. I don't see what talent there is in this big world 5. The triangular ambiguity between the protagonist and two classmates is really uncomfortable. The protagonist doesn't care about the girl, but the girl cares about the protagonist. She often gives a picture and feels ambiguous with the second male lead. Bloody shit 6 Mahakala intends to revolve around these three people. There are no other supporting characters. I saw the three of them entered the same research institute and entered the world together. The two key supporting characters are really mixed. They are shrouded in a halo. If you can walk alone, you have to do it this way 7 This female classmate is the heroine. Is there a heroine in this book?
Very well written! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!
It's very difficult to write a book like "Humane Paradise" where anyone can go to a small world at will.
To be honest, I didn't understand it a bit
Whether chaos and starry sky are in the same space, it is conceivable that the introduction contains conflicting contents.
Chapter 90 is the novel world
Is there no female protagonist in this novel? Nowadays, there are all male protagonists who are so protective of themselves. It makes my tooth hurt to see them. In the end, they are all the strongest and they are still virgins. What I want to say is that you practice and work hard just to upgrade, upgrade, and upgrade again? Then When a Living Eunuch, I haven't read this book, but I just read through the comments and it said that the male protagonist only has an affair with women and confiscates it in the end. In this case, I am even more speechless. After flirting with a girl and not accepting it, is it meant to be given to someone else? Then just be satisfied in your heart. If you don't like girls, why would you chase girls in real life? Instead, in the novel, you ask the protagonist to be a living eunuch? I just see that some people insist on becoming ascetics and want to complain. I don't mean to scold you, the author. If you don't like it, you can delete the post.
What about chapter sixty-six?
All booked. Among Zhu Tianhai's articles and novels, this one is considered relatively good, and I look forward to more powerful ones in the future. There must be a monthly ticket for subscribing, and I will see if I can double the amount and vote again when the time comes.
CiCi, is there a female protagonist in this book?
It's basically all set, please come on, author^0^~
The beginning of the cleansing of Dong Zhuo, the author's amazing wisdom